Entertainment: Poetry Is Great, but Too Lazy

An accident, time travel + system, the two-way redemption of the fate of the system and the host is quite heartwarming. There are not many chapters, but the story is very clear and comfortable, and the plot is simple and effortless. The emotional drama is a bit weak. The emotional changes of several female protagonists and the male protagonist's investment in emotions can be deepened to highlight the characters and reveal the plot. The songs are well chosen, have their own ideas, and achieve cross-linkage, which is very good, and the analysis is also well written. This is a good first book. You can take a look

It's quite interesting. There are many good verses in it that make me laugh, and each verse and song is given a comment, the audience's perspective, and the scene in which the song appears is also very appropriate and in line with the artistic conception. I have read more than 40 chapters so far. It's no wonder that it is a multi-girl. Faye Wong's personal entry is indeed easier to write. Many of them are classic songs. It is convenient for one person to sing many songs without changing the style too much. However, I never expected that a multi-girl basically refers to singing to a few girls [face covering]. During this period, he seemed to have given one or two songs to his roommate. It's too outrageous to give it to someone who was cuckolded. Also, the scene with the heroine's father and the donation were all skip-reading. I like the pace to be more upbeat. This kind of article is about ordinary helpless villains. In fact, it is meaningless. Personally, I feel that it is better to describe the reactions of the supporting characters such as chart chasing, concerts, competitions, etc., With strong career lines, and even flat career lines. Less emotion. It's nice behind the scenes, there are a lot of people in front of it.

It's funny and worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was going to be some kind of heroine. It would be a bit frustrating to have a time-travel heroine fight, but I didn't expect that I felt really comfortable after reading it. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and clever, can afford to take things on, and doesn't give the scumbag a chance. They are very knowledgeable and have an online IQ, so they will never suffer. 2. Jiang Yan, not too revealing, you will sigh after reading it. 3. The writing is solid, the description is detailed and vivid, and it is consistent with the beauty of ancient literature.

I should be considered an old bookworm. I have read a lot of books. This book by the author is okay. Not to mention how good it is, at least it is not bad. There is one bad point that I want to point out, which is the character dialogue. The author did not take into account the audience of the book. It may not feel like reading the book, but the character dialogue is very uncomfortable to listen to. For example, "******** - the name of the protagonist" and then "******** - the supporting character". This sounds uncomfortable to people who are listening to the book, and it is easy to confuse the protagonist's words with the supporting characters' words. You can change the character dialogue to the protagonist's name: "********" and the supporting character's name "********". This is better

This time-travel novel breaks away from the common routine of "competing for hegemony with poetry" and creates a subtle tension between the "low-key" of the protagonist and the "highlight" of the poem. The protagonist cherishes the longing for a stable life and tries to be an ordinary person hidden in the market in another world. However, he always inadvertently reveals those masterpieces of poetry that have spanned thousands of years - either famous lines about scenery blurted out while watching the scenery by the lake, or occasional lyrical short chapters when he was struck by the scene. It does not deliberately exaggerate the impact of fame and fortune brought by poetry, but instead focuses on depicting the protagonist's helplessness and avoidance after his talent is "exposed", as well as the delicate reactions of others from surprise, exploration to admiration. At the same time, the novel outlines the ancient market style and the gathering of literati with solid writing style, making poetry no longer a simple "golden finger", but a link between ancient and modern emotions. In the relaxed narrative, it injects a fresh modern perspective into classical culture.

Give yourself a five-star review first, come on💪 It's finished, thank you everyone for reading [cool]

A little bit of poison in the front is acceptable, but the performance in the back is considered normal. Another point is the emotional scene. The male protagonist made me feel like he was escaping. Although he said he wanted it all, it was just talk. Still give it a good review! Come on! ! !

The writing is good, it's purely hand-rubbed, but there are a lot of minor flaws. A cliched roommate friendship, a friend who cheats and works for a capitalist, only flirts with others and doesn't eat meat, and is good at making opinions. Now I saw this from my friend, who was good at making suggestions and invited the protagonist to participate in a variety show. He asked the protagonist to come to the rescue for 100,000 yuan per episode. The protagonist felt that the pay was low and before he had time to object, the other party hung up the phone. Emm, aside from the poisonous points, the author's writing is still very good. For example, the part about dealing with Xia Zha's father's blackmail was funny and innovative. (Because I read the author's new work first, I have some filters for reading this book. If I read this book first, maybe... As long as it is not AI and giant poison, it is still worthy of five-star support) Okay, I'm too superficial, just think of the above as my fart. This is my first time seeing such a flesh-and-blood protagonist. It's so well written [Like] "After the money I owe you is paid off, your donation commission will be increased to 80% in the future." I am just a porter who makes money and enjoys the work of countless people throughout the history of the earth. I am not a noble person.

The author's writing style is still very natural, which is a rare thing on Tomato. At least I didn't jump to read it, and I could see the ending. There are some shortcomings, but the flaws are not concealed. Five stars are given. I hope the author can create better works.

I watched it for a long time and the pace is very good, especially the ending and the introduction. I like this one. Newcomers can skip the first two chapters, which are a bit toxic, but after passing the first two chapters, it will be very good. Say important things three times.

It's really well written. Don't give away a daughter to a harem-oriented novel.

When I watched it, it scored 7.4, Which I personally think is really low! At first I thought that a score of 7.4 Was not very good, but now that I am tired of books, I thought I would just pick up a random book and read it, but it turned out to be okay! The first night I saw it was 3 o'clock in the morning and I couldn't bear to put it down [face covering] Although poison is present, it does not affect the content. Especially the analysis of some poems and songs, I personally think it is quite good. No matter what, cheers for the author [laughing and crying]

It is recommended that the author publish a novel that exposes me as a time traveler through live broadcast, and bring over the works from Earth in a fair and honest way. In the end, the entertainment novel feels like the protagonist is too omnipotent, and the omnipotent person is no longer human. If there were a composer like the protagonist in reality, I would definitely think he was a time traveler [laughs]

Three and a half or four stars. Five stars is to give the author points. 7.6 Is a bit low. 8.8--9.2 Will do! My two favorite systems, in addition to this one from Xiao Ai, there is also the one from the article "Sports Learning Master", which finally became a reality! [Eat melon]

It is a very exciting entertainment novel. The content is interesting and substantial without being impetuous. Please keep updating it and don't keep the manuscript! [Please update]

I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but I still gave it 5 stars. The overall plot is still very good, and it can be read as a refreshing novel. It's just that the confrontation plot is very weak, and B pretends to be very cool. The matching and linkage of the songs are also very interesting. This is a qualified online article. The score of 7.6 Is a bit low, there are definitely scores above 8. By the way, don't read those reviews based on one or two stars. Click to see their past reviews, 90% of which are one and two stars. This kind of person will not give 5 stars except for the divine book. But how many are divine books? Most of them are ordinary books. When reading novels, you have to find out whether the book is suitable for you. Generally speaking, if a book is written that makes me uncomfortable, I will abandon it at most. I won't comment. It would be very irresponsible to just give it 1-2 stars if you don't like it after reading dozens of chapters.

I read the latest chapter in one go, and the author felt the emotional pull between several people was well written. The only thing that made me a little dissatisfied was that there are multiple female protagonists, but as of the latest chapter, it is still ambiguous to only two female protagonists, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. Considering that the author may want to describe the inner changes and emotions of the protagonist in a richer way, a slower pace is acceptable. After all, it is not a stallion novel, but I still hope that after the protagonist becomes enlightened, he will collect [explore] the few that appeared before, and finally praise it habitually.

After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't have high expectations at first with the score being so low, but so far it turns out to be quite good. [Laughs] Although some of the settings are a bit classic, they are not to the point of being poisonous. They are much more normal than some 9/8 scores. I don't know why the author's score is so low. Come on, author!

I skipped chapters and finished reading it. How should I put it, I was very confused. In fact, most of the time, I was prepared to give this book three stars. But in the end, I hesitated. After all, I am a new author. Although there are many minor points, I can barely understand it. Sigh:-( Forget it, let's do it. It's not easy to write a book, five stars to encourage you. There are so many women writing yyds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not bad. In my opinion, the biggest advantage of this book is that I knew how to cut out the poems when copying them. I only copied a few lines that fit the scenes in the book, at least they can be relevant. Unlike other mindless copying of full text Just after I praised you, I moved into the full text of "Jiang Jinjiu". To put it bluntly, "Jiang Jinjiu" is good, but this kind of long and allusive article is not suitable to be copied into the full text. There are loopholes everywhere, which greatly affects the perception.

It's okay, it's good to watch, but every time the little diva Chen Yuxuan comes out, it makes me feel uncomfortable. It's like a cuckold plot, but I didn't write it. Maybe it's possessiveness. After all, I feel in my heart that this is a harem novel.

It's okay. The protagonist clearly recognizes his own position. He makes money from the works of the predecessors of the earth. He will not regard these as written by himself. He will also write the original author at the end of the chapter. He will not stand on the commanding heights and look down on those who work hard because he is a big boss in the circle.

I think this is a very good entertainment novel. The characters are very sophisticated and the plot is humorous without being insane. Except for Yuxuan, who is a pity, the other plots are handled very well. Already placed in the finished reading group [Like]

The writing is good, the plot is smooth, not awkward, and the logic is reasonable.

The writing is smooth and easy to read😎Good food Not bad😑!

After "What to do if you become famous too quickly", I have watched many "Charlotte Trouble"-style works, but few of them are satisfactory. This work is quite good.

It's a good entertaining and refreshing article, and it sounds okay. Five stars

It's good but not nerve-wracking, the rating is at least 10.1, The protagonist is very dedicated

Zhuge Liang is behind the scenes, a little new and a little funny, like it👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻.

Finished Spreading Flowers 🎉, a very good book [love] [love] [love]