Reborn in the Red Mansion, Collect All the Twelve Hairpins of Jinling!

It's very interesting👍🏻, I just hope that I won't suddenly become a cultivator of immortality in the later stage [face covering]. I've seen this type of mutant cultivator of immortality a lot. It's really a bloody lesson... Okay, I also hope that the author will continue to work hard [learned]

"The top scorer in the scientific examination at the beginning" was written for more than 20 days before the exam started.

It's good to watch, but the pace is too slow... I have been preparing for the exam for more than 400 chapters for a year since the beginning, and I haven't finished writing the plot... The emotional scenes are purely ambiguous, but after all, they are full, and the career is indeed too slow... The appearance rate of the second wife every day is in the chapters! The overall text is well written, but it is more suitable for people with patience to read it slowly~

It's very well written. It has to be 5000 uniform in Qidian, but it's not sure in Tomato [smile] Kudos to the author. Chunwei has written 300 chapters without even starting. He has not even touched a woman in more than 250 chapters. He is still a young boy.

Overall it's great, the creativity and the writing style are all very good. Some people may find it slow, but that's what Red Mansion fans are like. If you beat the old lady or Mrs. Wang at the beginning, you'll be able to speed through the game. [Laughing and crying]

Compared with other Red Mansions novels, the score is a bit lower. I feel like it should be above 8.5. Some parts of the writing (actions and dialogues) feel a little verbose, but the logic and plot are both excellent [Like]

The writing is very good, but the first one has not started yet. It's not that it's bad, it's just that the author has written less and is reading early. If he keeps updating and writes the next 45 million words, such a beginning will be normal, but now readers have been looking forward to it. After reaching the top spot, I started to do things, but I kept putting it off. Now I have a score of more than 7 points, which is already considered merciful by the readers. I will definitely get a higher score after writing. The writing, plot, etc. Are definitely at the level of 9 points, but I need to work harder on the rhythm.

It's an okay book. The love line is long but not complicated, and it's parallel to the career line. At least it doesn't seem to overwhelm the protagonist. The shortcomings are also obvious. The two lines plus the treatment of Jia Baoyu and making friends are too long, and there are some problems with the character portrayal.

I think this book is quite good-looking, and most of the characters in the book are consistent with the original work. The score shouldn't be so low. Maybe it's because of the name of the book. I think it should be rated 9 or above, which is much better than most of the Red Mansions written today.

Absolutely a good book, the characters are handled very carefully, keep up the good work [Blow a kiss] Where is your opening?

The Yuanzi play is well written, and the lightning protection is also okay. Qin Keqing is a new car and deserves praise. The main problem is that the plot moves too slowly, and I don't know when spring will arrive. Of course, there are advantages to being detailed. After all, the main thing to watch in The Red Mansion is the garden opera. In short, I hope the author can quickly finish the most exciting point of Chunwei. There will probably be plots about the confinement of the wolf to Juxu and the rebellion later on. There is still a lot to write about. I really want to see the protagonist step by step become a legendary emperor who can win three yuan in a row in literature and conquer the world in martial arts.

The writing is quite good, but few people who write Red Mansions have finished the book on Tomato. Even if they do, they are all written by Liu Beiwen. The writing is really good and the writing style is not bad. I hope I can finish it. Keep sending messages to the author The writing is too slow, and the introduction is quite rich. It's almost 300 chapters now, and they're still scheming in the Jia family's house [facepalm] I'll just follow the 1,000 chapters in your outline, and you're already 1/3 of it, and you still haven't moved forward on the map, and you've sealed the wolf in Xu, and the winter hasn't passed yet, and I haven't even taken the exam next spring. Will there be a time for the protagonist to make meritorious deeds [facepalm]

With common sense and three correct views, the top grade of Tomato Red Mansion [Learned][Start]

The writing is very good and the plot is also very good. Come on The pace is too slow Write dozens of chapters on one bad thing I don't know what the author is thinking The excitement that should have been there is gone. The male protagonist's golden finger is amazing Killing Wang Ziteng is just a joke Then I do nothing every day Just wait for others to plot against him

It was well written, but it was a bit delayed and the story progressed slowly. It is also a rare serious book.

I feel pretty good. If you say the writing is particularly good, I can't vouch for it. But after I read it, the writing was still very smooth. Except for some innocuous old routines, I feel like I can give this book 5 stars. I'm not a bastard either. Just look at my historical reviews and you'll know that I rarely give 5 stars. I got tired of reading the Red Mansions in QD, so I came here to try my luck. I didn't expect to find a copy for me. The characters in the book seemed to me to be quite accurate. But it's a pity that Baochai still hasn't appeared in more than 100 chapters. The pace of this book is very slow, but if you read the Red Mansion fanfic, you won't mind the drag of the daily scenes in the garden. Goldfinger hopes that the author can maintain the previous level, neither extraordinary nor mediocre. I've only read over 160 chapters so far. If I feel it's too toxic later, I'll come back and change my rating.

At the beginning of Jieyuan, I feel that it is more about showing off tricks with a smile. It is a bit too tiring to play like this at the age of 14. I have to take the scientific examination. Anyway, I have cheated. I am very powerful. I can write books and stories, or write poems and sell ink, train martial arts practitioners, and pretend to be bandits. I can do it while Mrs. Wang is out. It feels a little better.

The world you write about is not "written", but grows naturally from the lines. Every sentence is like a carefully polished lens, which is both crystal clear and reflects the subtle spectrum of human nature. Your control of rhythm is superb, flowing freely between rush and slowness, making the reader's breath unconsciously rise and fall with the rhythm of the words. The most touching thing is the restrained affection. Surging emotions are always surging under the implicit brushwork, like icebergs under the sea. The unspoken part is the most powerful. You return language to its truest purpose—not to show off, but to arrive with precision. Such writing is a pious tribute to the beauty of the Chinese language and a deep respect for the reader's intelligence.

This is my first time reading a book on Tomato. After reading about forty or fifty chapters, I still have to give the author a thumbs up. I have been reading Red Mansions on Diedian before. Personally, it's a hay+ level. The writing style is 3.5 Points. You must look at the wording of the Red Mansion essay, otherwise it is not that good. The passing line is slightly higher. The character score is 3.8. Judging from the current plot, the female character creation is still online. What about the few golden hairpins? Maybe there is not much plot now, and it feels like it lacks a bit of flavor, so it is not seriously inconsistent. The plot score is 4.0. Now I am mainly fighting with Mrs. Wang in the house. The plot design is okay and it feels a bit refreshing. I'll watch the follow-up plot. If I can finish it and feel good about it, I might give a small reward, not much. I'm still happy to pay for the Red Mansions that I can watch.

I just read Chapter 57, and I think this book is really well written, and the thinking and logic are in place. It shouldn't be only 7.1 Points. It's really bad. Although this author seems to update 2/3 times a day, he can write a timeline in one day and still can't finish it in a week... There are more than 240 pictures and there is no theme at all. For those who have been following the updates, this book is really becoming more and more boring as I read it... I don't know how long I can hold on... The progress is so slow that I can't read it...

It looks pretty good so far. The writer pays more attention to details. I am afraid that readers will not understand some places, so I will put brackets around them and then explain them. I will give 4 stars first to show my encouragement, and I will look at them later.

Compared to other Red Mansion novels, the score is actually a bit low, probably around 8.4, But the template in the early stage is a bit old-fashioned. If you want to see the protagonist become self-reliant, this book is suitable for those who have nothing to do to pass the time.

The writing is very good, the logic is smooth and not embarrassing, the interesting points are very dense, the pace is slow, the protagonist is humane and can also show the author's human sophistication. It is one of the better books I have read in Dream of Red Mansions fanfiction. I am already looking forward to the climax of the gold list title after the spring boudoir next year.

I see that except for one misnomer, the rest of the Red Mansion fanfics are basically pretty good, and the author likes to use double lines and flashbacks. Although it is a bit stiff, it doesn't look uncomfortable. The little characters are vivid and have their own personalities. I give it a five-star rating.

Everything else is fine, I just want to ask the protagonist when the exam will start instead of intrigues [smile]

Yes, as the protagonist is a member of the Jia family, he must protect the Jia family. Jia Lian of the Jia family is okay and can be made friends with, Jia Rong is harmless, Jia Baoyu is also harmless, Jia Zhen, Mrs. Jia Shewang can be eliminated, and the Lai family can be eliminated. . .

I've read Chapter 58, and I think it's pretty good so far. The writing is top-notch on Tomato, and the narrative rhythm is relatively slow. It's perfect for spending time with nothing to do.

It's quite novel. It's one of the better Red Mansion fanfics I've read.

It looks very good. I have read a lot about cultivating immortals, Harry Potter, Douluo, etc. It feels good to read this book. Don't expect too much. Fellow Taoists, after all, Tomato is free. At least I think the writing is okay.

I can only say that this rating is about the same... I don't know if I didn't pay attention before or if the author added the harem and emperor later. I took it into consideration when I saw this. It's well written, but the pace is a bit slow. The golden fingers are quite wide open, and only one or two seem to be useful. Overall, I think such a big Golden Finger shouldn't have such a slow pace, but it's pretty good. I like the characters and plot.