Skyfall Beginning: Becoming a Ghoul's Toy

The logic is smooth, and the story line is as cruel as the original work. The only shortcoming is that there is not so much psychological description. If you don't think about it carefully, you won't realize that the body and mind are being hurt all the time. Fortunately, if you really don't know how to write about this kind of psychology, sometimes it will give you room for imagination if you briefly touch on it.

The only way for ghouls and humans to coexist peacefully is for ghouls to be imprisoned and have birth control. An increase in the number of ghouls will only lead to humans being killed by ghouls. The number of suicides, criminals, and people dying of old age, illness, and disease cannot support the food source of ghouls. Only when the number of ghouls falls below a certain level Only by maintaining a line can peaceful coexistence be possible, but this goes against the instinct of reproduction, and apart from the same kind of food, the only food for ghouls is humans. The final result of large-scale reproduction of ghouls is the extinction of both humans and ghouls, so I think the ghouls should be killed, or a few should be imprisoned and the rest should be killed.

This novel is really well written. I read it in one sitting. The author's writing style has a different feeling. The protagonist's image is also very full. He is my favorite Bai Mao [love] [love]. I hope the author can stick to it*! ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good Tokyo Ghoul fanfic. Good luck to the author, I must keep writing it [Adoration][Adoration]

Nice! ! ! The characterization may still have some shortcomings, but it is already very good. The protagonist is really beautiful, strong, and miserable. The setting of being physically disabled should dissuade many people, but I am not dissatisfied. I think it's okay. Come on, the author, you must finish it, okay? It's really good-looking!

It's been a long time since I've seen a Touhou fan on the homepage, but there are still a few very good-looking authors, keep it up 😋

I have seen the best ghoul fanfic on Tomato so far. Although I only read the beginning, I hope the main character will be a hezi later on. Qwq I like to watch some plots of body modification and torture [I almost cried]. Also, the protagonist's stance is not very clear. Is it a human stance or a ghoul stance?

I want to see the interaction with Shizao [shy][shy][shy]

It would be great if the weapon were armor. It could be arm armor, gloves, etc. That match the protagonist's fighting style at the beginning. Through combat, it absorbs RC cells and continuously upgrades, and finally turns into a pair of living armor.

I like it. The writing is very to my liking. I give it five stars and I hope the author won't abandon me all the time.

Okay, I just want to ask if there is a love line?

It's so beautiful, I hope it doesn't end badly

I think it's pretty good [like]

It's very beautiful, you can say it is

It's beautiful, the protagonist is so relatable

Very beautiful and not greasy

Come on, come on, come on

Very well written and wonderful.

Nice looking, this angle is a bit rare

It's nice to look at, but the timeline needs to be thought through carefully to straighten out [Like] [Like] Wow, does the author also play Yu-Gi-Oh? Sky Striker is here, a bit abrupt but acceptable.

It's a very unique existence in ghoul literature, mainly because I prefer the character of Suzu in anime.

Very well written, needless to say, five stars

It's very interesting. The timeline has basically not changed but everyone is still so charming. I like the protagonist very much. I also hope that there will be more plots in the future. Www. It's very interesting. Thank you, the author!

It's very delicate and beautiful. It should be a female author. I think it's rare. It's worth reading.

Awesome, well written

The author wrote so well

The author didn't use a plug-in, but in the end he had to use a plug-in. It would be better to give a plug-in from the beginning, but it cannot be denied. This look is the most attractive.

It's very interesting. I hope the protagonist can continue fighting as a human and upgrade his combat power.

It's really beautiful. It ranks among the top three here.

It's so good to read, I read it in one sitting, and I'm waiting for the author's big update [Sending my heart]