Zhu Xian**********

The setting of this book is so touching! It combines the emotional foundation of Zhu Xian, a big IP, and adds super exciting elements such as beast control, system, and invincible flow. It simply captures all the excitement that readers want to see!

The writing is pretty good, with the main characters being Lu Xueqi, Zhang Xiaofan and Tian Linger. The disadvantage is that Lu Xueqi doesn't have too many scenes and the emotional scenes progress a little faster. Baguio only wrote about the conversation in the inn, and no trace of this person was found later. Zhang Xiaofan has always looked like he has not grown up. The pace suddenly became much faster after about fifty chapters, as if it was going to be finished in advance, and the pace was a bit fast and slow.

Okay, okay, I support that the plot behind it is very novel, the ideas are very interesting, and I am getting a little excited. Haha, please give it a try, the author.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

Pretty good, come on

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking, super

Okay, it's very nice, it's a very refreshing article.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Beautiful, the plot is perfectly developed

The best among Zhu Xian fans

Why is your book in the entertainment industry?

It's okay, but the pace is too fast and not delicate enough, which makes the emotional progression a bit abrupt.

There are many descriptions of the environment and characters, and the writing is good. If you are impatient, you don't need to read it, otherwise you will leave a negative review if you think it is not good.

It's very interesting, the writing is good and the plot is good

It's pretty good among Zhu Xian fans, but there are some minor issues in some places, which can be seen without looking into it carefully.

Not bad Come on, author

I want to know what the title of the book has to do with its content

It's good-looking, at least for now, it's still good-looking, so don't stop updating it.

Not bad, worthy of praise

An old fan of Zhu Xian said that he can pursue it.

No, why was it taken off the shelves? The writing is okay. ?