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It's delicious. Tobirama, who hasn't become so rational yet, is still very cheerful, which fits the character of the formula book. At a young age, he met the brother-controlling and sharp Izuna. One of them misses their first meeting, but the other keenly understands the path they should embark on.

So far, the author's writing is very good. Tobirama and Izuna's cps are so fragrant. I'm knocking, I'm knocking, I'm knocking, and the emotional line is very good. Madara and Hashirama, wow, so good, I'm so happy (^0^)/ There is also a plot where Tobirama and Izuna exchange amulets (greeting the sun with the corners of their mouths) [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

All I can say is that it is a masterpiece. This is the book that best fits the original character image I have seen so far. Whether it is the emotional description of the characters or the promotion of the plot, it is completely reasonable and consistent with the content of the original work. At the same time, the description of the characters is simply like the original work. The author has analyzed the plot and characters very clearly. It is a masterpiece. It is a perfect masterpiece. Why is it not popular? It's so beautiful, it should be seen by more people. All Feiquan, Sister Zhuban, please come and see it.

I have always wanted to see the IF line between Tobirama and Izuna. This is the story that I have seen that best suits my needs. Tobirama's changes and Izuna's growth are both very exciting. Especially the part where Tobirama gives Izuna the amulet is a normal behavior of an adolescent boy (both are tough-talking), and the bickering between Izuna and Tobirama is also a heart-warming interaction; and when little Tobirama traveled to the future and asked about the relationship between Tobirama and Izuna in the future, Future Tobirama's answer was very precise and sad, "It's not just an enemy, it's a more complicated emotion." In fact, Tobirama only found out about his feelings after Izuna died, which was the most painful. Tobirama didn't think that the knife would be fatal, he only knew that Izuna's death was related to Madara, but Madara thought that Tobirama killed Izuna, so Madara hated Tobirama. I don't think Tobirama hates Madara, but just doubts and regrets. Only regret can explain it clearly. When Tobirama recalls the past with Izuna, it's like a knife piercing his heart. It hurts. It really hurts. The above is just my personal understanding. I believe the author's writing is more in-depth. Good luck to the author!

The teacher is really good at writing! Regarding the psychological activities of Izuna and Tobirama, the throbbing of love, the rationality of self-analysis, and finally the strong love that defeated the calmness step by step, the time-travel between the two is really wonderful. The evenly matched think tanks of the two families were thrown into the undercurrent of the future, and they worked together to penetrate the fig leaf of "false peace" and completely uncovered Black Zetsu's conspiracy! Realize your dream in different timelines and watch me cry! Izuna went through four battles and was so cool when he helped Sasuke beat up the second generation of dirty soil when Sasuke asked about the fourth generation of Hokage! ! !

After reading a full circle of Toizumi Hashirama's novel, I came back to read it again. Personally, I don't think it is OOC, especially Izuna is the closest to the image of Izuna in my heart. The same is true for Tobirama, and Hashirama is not silly and sweet. Whether it's Toizumi, Hashiba Madara's relationship or Hashiba to Izumi, I feel very comfortable with Madara and Tobirama. They don't overly persecute Tobirama, and it's not Tobirama's unilateral contribution in the relationship. Who knows who likes the four people from the Warring States period (everyone likes them!), And locks Hashirama Toizumi. Tobirama is being persecuted every day. The brother does not love his daughter-in-law and does not care about her sister-in-law. The pain is really probably because when I first read it, I felt too comfortable and thought it was the norm. Later I found out that this is a rare case. I am very grateful to read this article written by the author. I have been following it even though it was not at the beginning. , But it's also very early. The two books I followed together with the other one, Izuna Rebirth, are really the White Moonlight in my heart, and I found that the author also likes to interact with us and is very enthusiastic (although I haven't posted a review because I am an Internet person). I don't know if I will write about the Warring States Period in the future. I really like the quartet. In fact, I really want to read the follow-up of Tamaki and Izuna Tobirama raising children. I don't know if the author can write ww. I was really disgusted by other people so much that I remembered how good the author is. So this website is afraid, so I will write a long book review. What do you want to do for the author? I really like the author's understanding of Tobirama's relationship. To be honest, I didn't think they were a good match at first, and I wasn't a doujin girl before. Later, I had an opportunity to become a doujin girl, and I started to bump into each other. After all, I felt something was wrong with these two when I didn't bump into each other before. Then I slowly saw Tobirama and fell in love with him, and then inevitably fell in love with him. The other person is Senna, his old enemy (of course there is Madara's influence here, after all, Senna is a very important existence to Madara. I will mention Senna when I bump into Hashirama, but it is Hashirama's home field after all, so I don't have much impression of him. On the contrary, I can't avoid him when Tobirama has a lot of scenes.) I didn't think about this old enemy at first, and I just thought he was a good match. Later, when I thought about it carefully, it was very wrong. First of all, what happened to Senna? I don't think that given Tobirama's character, he would ask this question at that time. I think it would be more reasonable for Hashirama to ask it than for him to ask it, but it was him who asked it, and in such a way. I don't think he was confirming the result of the victory. It was very strange and inconsistent with that. The scene at that time, otherwise it would be provocative. I don't think his character would be provocative at that time, and his expression and tone were not similar at all, and his question was also very abrupt. Then there was the Reincarnation of the Earth. When did Tobirama study it? If Hashirama died in order to resurrect Hashirama, then Hashirama was not resurrected, and research and development required time. Tobirama also died not long after Hashirama's death. If it must be said that he successfully developed it at this time, then I am more inclined to think that he had done these researches before, but he might have been reincarnated because of some research before. I have thought that it was his brothers, but didn't his brothers die very early? If he is really researching, shouldn't it be completed earlier? At least it can be done to resurrect Hashirama immediately after he dies. The author handled it very well in the transformation of the earth. In fact, I have always felt that the art of reincarnation in the earth was completed a long time ago, but it was useless for many reasons, such as his brother did not allow it or it was destroyed by himself, so Hashirama needs to be resurrected later to stabilize the situation. On the other hand, he was not resurrected, because even if he had created this technique before and destroyed the original data, it would still take time to recover. (I have always felt that the Reincarnation of the Earth is actually a very complicated technique, and it is not just a simple sacrifice. Aunt Snake is so easy because he has improved it and his research is completely unrestricted. Tobirama is different. He has his brother to control him, which is too much and cannot be tried. I think Tobirama's research in this area has some limitations) so his brother cannot be resurrected immediately after the original data is destroyed; and the similarity between the two of them is that they are both younger brothers and the second-in-command of their respective families. If the older brother group represents idealism, then the younger brother group represents realism. In fact, both of them are rational people who value family interests but pay more attention to them. Family ties (Izuna, needless to say, Tobirama actually indulges his brother), the brother group is disdainful, or they don't like to use intrigues, so in the secret confrontation between the two clans, maybe the two of them are the masterminds against each other, so I think the two of them are very familiar with each other, and then after reading the author's article, I have a deeper understanding of their feelings, and I hate them even more

If you like double strength, you can read it, including Styloma (personal opinion) and the author greatly appreciates it. Compared with light milk tea + snail noodles + mutton skewers + hot and sour noodles + fried chicken legs + shrimp dumplings + beef vermicelli soup + spicy hotpot + grilled squid + wontons + minced meat vermicelli + lobster + fried noodles + crab + duck neck + Coke + shrimp dumplings + barbecue + hot pot + chicken fillet burrito + KFC + Pizza Hut + McDonald's + Cross Bridge Rice Noodles + Kung Pao Chicken + Braised Pork + Fried Squid + Mapo Tofu + Crispy Chicken Bibimbap + Ice Cream + Sauce-flavored rice noodles + turkey noodles + small crispy pork + ham sausage + crab sticks + smooth egg rice + cold noodles + fat beef rolls + coriander noodles + beef cheese stew + prune iron + green tiake + rolled dough + sauce-flavored pancakes +Fruit fish + Coke chicken wings + fish-flavored shredded pork + pickled fish + squid burrito + minced meat and eggplant + fried noodles + duck blood tofu + spicy hotpot + Linyi fried chicken + fish meal + snail rice + mutton skewers + yogurt I like you more [KISS][KISS][KISS] (this long sentence is sincere)

It looks good, it looks good, and the character design is not very OOC. It is almost the Izuna in my heart. It looks good, come on, come on, come on, come on [love] [love] [love] [like] [like] [like] [like]

The super rare Hokage Hashira Madara is written by Toizumi, and the emotions are well described. The ambiguous pull between them is also well described. It feels like they are what I imagined their characters to be.

This book is probably my favorite Feiquan fanfic I've seen on Tomato. The writing is delicate, and I can feel that the author loves this cp. Tobirama and Izuna are also well portrayed in the article. The author has his own ideas and the characters he writes will not appear to be stereotyped. Thank you to the author for weaving a beautiful story for the fans of Kefeiquan CP. In the world you created, they are happy and complete.

Full marks must be full marks. The writing is very good. Although I don't know how to say it, it is very good. I don't feel OOC. I highly recommend it. The text of Feiquan and Zhuban is also good for traveling to other time and space. It is not so embarrassing and very smooth.

Immortal product! ! ! ! ! The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and some of the more complex emotional relationships are also described in detail and make people sympathize (this is my favorite point). The contrast between Tsubasa's idealism and Toizumi's realism is simply amazing! ! ! ! You can tell from my reading time that I really like this book by the author [Shy]

It's really beautiful, the writing is smooth, and the plot is very attractive. The emotional line is also well developed, and Feiquan's character is particularly well written. I can't stop watching it, keep catching up on updates! Come on, madam [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Immortal product! ! ! The emotional lines are really well written! Styloma also comes naturally, and it feels really sweet when you take a look at it! The plot of traveling to several different time periods is also very good ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡

Very beautiful, super addictive

Interesting (looking at the author of Ganwen with amusement) I advise you to hurry up (gloomy)

Sorry, I discovered it. After reading it for so long, I haven't written a review yet. I really like doing this (//∇//) The author wrote the early struggles and disputes between the two of them very well. I like them all.

It's quite beautiful, the emotions are well described, and I got to know Feiquan in advance. I recommend [Shy]

Chasing serials is the beginning of my downfall [blowing kiss]

Eat a lot, eat a lot. It's been a while since I've come across such an article with a lot of food. Reading about Toizumi in the other world line makes me heartbroken [crying] Tobirama and Izuna in the main world must be doing well😭

Very beautiful! Interactive Moto Modo! As long as the author keeps updating, I will always follow you😭

The teacher's writing is quite good. It was a little sloppy and stiff at first, but then it got better and became smoother and more delicate as he wrote. The main CP is Feiquan, and the deputy CP is Zhuban. The overall style is more serious, the characters are not very OOC, and the relationship is not abusive, which is quite sweet. I hope that the teacher's book can be seen by more people and become popular. [Love]

Very nice! The main perspective is Feiquan, both of them are super cute, and the look and feel is great! It completely feels like four people worked together to defeat Konoha, but because it is from Feiquan's main perspective, it feels like Feiquan and the two of them contributed a lot. It's a dream come true, I just feel the enthusiasm is low, but it's actually super well written, I love it [Blow Kiss]

It's so delicious, oh my God, I'm eating it all. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up episodes. In fact, I want to watch them, but I can't help it. I'm a greedy woman [I'm about to cry]

It's very nice. Why is it rated so low? There's nothing sinister about it, it's just the cp story about Feiquan and Zhuban. The plot has some emotions, and there are also some things about healing regrets. It has a plain and warm feeling.

The author's Feiquan in this novel is too authoritative, and there is no OOC. And the deputy cp's styloma is so sweet [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] (It's so cute [admiration])

Wow⊙ω⊙ is so pretty! ! Author My God!

It looks very comfortable. I like it so far. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The emotions of the characters are very real and very beautiful.

It's nice to read. I think this book is particularly sweet. That's great. I don't like eating knives very much. When this book is finished, I will read it again It's over, but I feel like it's really not enough. It's obviously complete, but I still feel like there are a lot of regrets. I want to watch it again a few times