[The heroine is as strong as a bug, but very showy. She has a CP, and she is one of the twins. Don't remove the CP! The love line will not be opened until at least three academic years, try not to be OOC, and have a private setting! ! ! ! !
Maybe even a bit of a Mary Sue(?
Yes, there is Sherlock Holmes but his role is very small. He participates in a few chapters like an Easter egg]
Kelly Ikarin, an ordinary social soul, always thought that she was reincarnated in England after forgetting to drink Meng Po soup.
૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა Fortunately, my mother loves Chinese food, otherwise she would have died young.
Until that day an owl knocked on the window. It turned out that I was a new student at Hogwarts, one year earlier than the legendary "savior" Harry!
With a pair of beautiful blue-gold eyes, she originally wanted to be a low-key Ravenclaw student, enjoy the salty life in the magical world, catch the twins' morning business bus, and build a "magic snack business empire".
However, all time travelers have some Mary Sue or trouble-making attributes. Even if they don't cause trouble, trouble will come.
Sorry Harry! ಥ_ಥ
Senior, I didn't mean to steal your first-year spot of catching a snitch.
QAQ
It's all the fault of a guy named KST!
(Hey? Me?)
Reader comments
The writing is quite good, but there are too many parentheses in the article, which are actually not necessary. Just delete the brackets or adjust the position of the brackets.
There are also a lot of emojis, but compared to the brackets, they are nothing. I hope there are fewer brackets at the end, which will affect the look and feel.
Come on, author, keep updating and don't give up. The heroine is really smart and funny. I like it very much. I want to see the heroine continue to play Quidditch later. The writing is very good. I really like the Golden Snitch part. I think the heroine is so handsome [KISS][KISS][KISS] She is so cute and reassuring. Come on, author. As long as you keep writing, I will definitely help you recommend the book.
The writing is okay, but there are a bit too many emoticons.
It's very interesting and funny, but it's a little inconsistent and jumps a little fast. The previous chapter is here, and the next chapter is 800 meters away. There is no good transition, but other than this, the rest of the writing is very good. I support it.
It was the first time I read a Harry Potter-related novel and I laughed so happily. Although there are some bugs, they are harmless and worth reading.
Interesting, very funny
Very beautiful, lots of laughs, I like it 😍
It looks pretty good, but there are a lot of ellipses.
The author's writing is very good, and the unique inner description is very attractive and encouraging.
The writing is quite good, but there are too many parentheses in the article, which are actually not necessary. Just delete the brackets or adjust the position of the brackets. There are also a lot of emojis, but compared to the brackets, they are nothing. I hope there are fewer brackets at the end, which will affect the look and feel.
Come on, author, keep updating and don't give up. The heroine is really smart and funny. I like it very much. I want to see the heroine continue to play Quidditch later. The writing is very good. I really like the Golden Snitch part. I think the heroine is so handsome [KISS][KISS][KISS] She is so cute and reassuring. Come on, author. As long as you keep writing, I will definitely help you recommend the book.
The writing is okay, but there are a bit too many emoticons.
It's very interesting and funny, but it's a little inconsistent and jumps a little fast. The previous chapter is here, and the next chapter is 800 meters away. There is no good transition, but other than this, the rest of the writing is very good. I support it.
It was the first time I read a Harry Potter-related novel and I laughed so happily. Although there are some bugs, they are harmless and worth reading.
Interesting, very funny
Very beautiful, lots of laughs, I like it 😍
It looks pretty good, but there are a lot of ellipses.
The author's writing is very good, and the unique inner description is very attractive and encouraging.