Star Iron: the Monster Looking for Love

Seeing that the author worked so hard, I'll give it a 5. 1. Few people have read it, probably because they haven't read Curse Return. Many people just play Iron Break. For example, I have never read it. I have read this book before but haven't read it. I saw it several times in the past two days on the recommendation list, and I read it because I was short of books. Every time I see the author recommending his book at the end of the chapter, I feel like the protagonist. In fact, good books will always be read, so don't worry too much. 2. The plot of the game is stinky and long. The plot of Yaliluo and Xianzhou in your book is basically the same as in the game, and there are almost no deletions. Everyone knows that the plot will definitely lose the motivation to continue reading. The later part is slightly better. The author also mentioned some shortcomings at the end of the chapter, such as repeated words (such as uh uh uh uh uh, rolling eyes), the protagonist's character (scum?), I think it is okay, and some people may also think that the protagonist, the Virgin, has to protect the weak after all (there are many times when the protagonist is deflated. Weak, maybe some people can't stand it?), He didn't take any measures when the characters in the early plot wanted to kill him (for example, the star core hunter assassinated the protagonist many times, but the protagonist finally let them go and helped them), it depends on the individual (the protagonist is so tired, the world should be kind to him) 3. The author's greatest advantage is that he can recognize his own mistakes. The author has noticed many problems pointed out by people in chapter and paragraph reviews (but some plots that cannot be changed are indeed a bit disgusting), and he updates a lot every day. 4. There are many spoilers from the author in the novel. It depends on the individual. 5. Plot: In the article, the protagonist's combat power is a little weak in the early stage, but it is greatly strengthened later, but it has been shrinking (because it has been fighting against high-end combat power). I hope that I can resist everything. The star gods in it are all related to the protagonist, and their ability to destroy is also very high. 6. I saw the end of Weng Xing. After the protagonist died in battle, everyone knew about the protagonist's illness. I think it's okay. I think it would be better to write about redemption in the subsequent plot. Everyone teaches the protagonist how to learn to love, and multiple female protagonists will not collapse. After all, the protagonist has no heart, and he has not promised anyone (I haven't read the Black Tower storyline, so I'm not sure what it's about). The star core hunters should stop being hostile to the protagonist, and the protagonist's combat power is already overwhelming, so we can choose to let everyone "protect" him. 7. Currently, the protagonists who clearly like the protagonists include Heita, March (counting Chang Yeyue), Xia Die and Xi Lian. Do you have a crush on Xing? There should be a mirror flow on the Wuxiao line? Come on, author, believe in yourself. Actually, Erxiang Paradise opened a little early. Is the author afraid of being stabbed in the back, so he wrote a lot of extras? In fact, it's okay. Believe in your abilities and write boldly. The author can try original planets and original characters. Maybe it will attract more readers?

The author's writing style is very good, but there are some details. Use "" single quotes for some suggestions and inner thoughts. The pace could be slowed down a bit. But the author's writing is still very good. Come on [Like]

It feels very good. I expected it to be much better, but the protagonist is really miserable. He often faces troublesome battles, and he also has to play psychological games with many people. It is really tiring. Author, I think you can try to change the name of Spellcaster to five, so that maybe it will become more popular. I feel that the title of your book was not chosen well, and it did not hit the hot search keywords. Another author I know is like this too.

Give it five stars. Let me ask again, is there a female protagonist?

It's good to watch, but Lao Ye is really miserable. I gave up on myself later on, wondering if I could do it faster. I really want to see Xi Lian make Lao Ye understand love.

It looks good. If you don't mind that the combat power is a bit weak, it's at the level of grass jelly.

How to say it? This is the best combination of spell battle and collapsing star railway that I have ever seen. At least at this point, I didn't see other weird characters mixed in. Moreover, the author's writing style is online. Although it may seem strange in the early stage, as long as you persist in the middle and late stages, you will discover the advantages of this book. Belongs to the slow heating type.

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, hao Kang, a little bit poisonous, but not much. I don't know who the heroine is at the moment. Come on, author.

The author should change the cover and the name that people don't know why. It is estimated that the data will be much better.

Why don't many people read such a beautiful book?

I feel that the writing is pretty good, but I don't know why there is no rating. I hope the author can finish this story and look forward to the subsequent plot development. Also, I hope the author writes a HE😋

It's quite beautiful, although I don't know why the rating is so low. Keep working hard.

It looks good, the two worldviews are very reasonably integrated, and the plot is also very innovative.

The battle scenes were well depicted, and the prison master's quotations were so irritating that I was cosplaying with him on the bed. Gojo Yo's character portrayal was okay, but the heroine's emotional line was a bit contradictory and confused in some places. Didn't Star Pinoconi or Onfalos say they like Yo, but their love was not shown later on, and it can only be seen that Hoshi and Yo are good friends and partners.

I think the writing is quite good. Why is it not rated highly?

It took me a year to read such a good book😭

Look at the fighting, especially the fight with Kakamu.

The author writes very well and people are alive😊

It seems that there will be Yakui Rika. I can't even imagine how delicious Danheng Sanzuki and the others' expressions were when they learned that because of their own curse, Ye turned into such a human being and a ghost. By the way, author, I thought of one thing. Will cursing be useful for people who have no magic power?

Asasi [crying], the front is really bad, but the back is so beautiful. The aspect of large quantity and sufficient management, regardless of the aspect of data and the aspect of personal hobbies [Like]

Okay, great. The plot is very good, the update speed is even better

This is the best fanfic I've ever seen [Blowing a Kiss]

Not bad, you can watch it when you're bored, it's just skills... Limited innovation capabilities

It's really good to watch, but I don't know why not many people see it? [What] It's really good, especially the fighting. I guess some people watched it but didn't rate it or didn't get the traffic𡿨I'm guessing)

It's burning when I hit my elbow🤞🔴🔵🟣🤞

Come on, keep writing.

Very pretty, so sweet The protagonist is so miserable. Ever since the battle with Polka, his brain has not recovered until the final battle [face covering]

First in line on my bookshelf

I hope the author can continue to write more

Please support me, it's still very good