What? Let Me Become the Immortal Bai Yueguang?

Damn it, brothers, God's will has targeted me. I will release the 20 chapters at once and then I can only open a new book.

Okay, okay, I thought it was an explosive story about a female channel competing for favor with Queen Ma, but it turned out to be surprisingly good.

Exaggerate and call yourself Shennong. Recommended reading by Shennong [Like] However, before reading, all the righteous people who read Gu should read Shen Nong's advice first. I spent a few days reading the first seven chapters of this book. It can be said that the level is low, and some places have a bit of female sex. You can jump directly to the first seven chapters, and start the main story in Chapter 8. I will summarize the first seven chapters for you, and it will be much better to read Chapter 8 directly. Summary of the first seven chapters: The heroine traveled through the Gu world and became a five-year-old girl with a high status. After going out, she saw the two Fang Yuan brothers working hard on the edge of Gu Yue Tutu's fields. Later, she saw that the two of them were bullied and humiliated by their aunt and surrounded them. She took the Immortal Lord to eat and bought candied porridge for Fang Zheng. Later, under the influence of the heroine's background, the living conditions of the two Fang Yuan brothers also gradually improved, and Fang Yuan gradually developed a liking for the heroine. The summary is complete, it goes like this, there is nothing important in the first seven chapters. It can also be simplified: The heroine traveled through time and helped the Immortal Lord. After ten years of being with the Immortal Lord, the Immortal Lord fell in love with him and disappeared. This is the important thing in the first seven chapters. In Chapter 8, the second Immortal Lord appears, and this book becomes interesting. The first seven chapters are not recommended to be read.

Originally, I just read it with the mentality of giving it a try, but after reading a few chapters, it really gave me an amazing feeling. I would like to express my praise and respect. Regardless of the outcome and whether it can be completed, I would like to thank the author for his interest in Gu. I just finished reading and the content has been updated so far. It is a high-quality second-generation work. It is of high quality and is worth a look.

No matter what, the new book should be given five stars first to keep the book alive. There are still too few Gu books.

The plot is well written and the protagonist is not stupid and sweet, he knows how to rely on himself

I read it out of curiosity, it was very interesting, and to me the character of the Immortal Master is also very consistent with the original work. Nice.

The writing in the fanfic I read is very good and the writing is quite delicate. I hope it can survive. Also, the character of the author, Lao Mo, is really unlikely to fall in love. If the love cannot be written in the article, it will be at the end. Can you write a side story? Of course, it mainly depends on the author's wishes. If the author sees this comment, I hope he can answer my question. Please, please. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Wait a minute, I have a question. After the heroine was captured by Mr. Lin, she couldn't use Gu insects for half an hour. So when did she kill Mr. Lin? Wasn't he really raped? Was he really killed by a tauren? Or should we wait until he relaxes his vigilance and then directly counterattack.

"Persevere until you achieve greatness, escape from the ordinary, or meet death."

The author's writing is pretty good, and the acting is spot on. I hope the author will continue writing and not give up [smile] Children, this book has been noticed by God, we are hopeless [crying][crying][crying]

Take a wild guess! Is it possible that Fang Yuan was actually reborn with the third eye this time? In the second scene, Fang Yuan exposed himself during the battle with Xingxu, and then he was reborn and returned to his youth (the third scene). The protagonist's memory of the original book was actually instilled in her by a certain venerable at the beginning of the third eye, which tampered with her memory and made her think that she was a demon from outside the world. It even made her think that she had experienced Fang Yuan's first eye. When Fang Yuan was in the second eye, Fang Yuan fought with Xingxu, and a certain venerable made some manipulations before Fang Yuan exploded, leaving a foreshadowing for tampering with Fang Yuan's memory (entering the third eye). As a result, Fang Yuan thought it was the second eye after he was reborn. The protagonist also thought he was in the second stage, but was actually in the third stage. He died in Novice Village and Fang Yuan's refining qualifications in the first two times. @ Department of Rats and Rats King

Sadness was finally suppressed by heaven

The writing is good, it has the flavor of the original work, and the logic is flawless. The reason why the score is not high may be because the pit has just been opened. Got screwed by God's will [cry][cry][cry]

Ha Jizu must practice the Immortal Gu of Persistence [I'm about to cry]

No big problem at the moment

It's good to read. I'll give it five stars first, and then three stars later. It's well written, but it just doesn't let me see the 100 new chapters updated the next day.

There aren't many good books about Gu anymore.

Very well written, good luck to the author

Keep it up, why don't you do it? You don't want that kind of thing.

I am at the top of the third level Hu Yuan is still the same Hu Yuan, there is nothing to say about the character. No, no, I have to score points

Tomato, God's will, the big hand of cleaning the net is working hard In fact, the author can write as fast as the book next door. Although the content is less, he still knows the follow-up. The book next door has already become a fairy in 30 chapters and has an eighth chapter in 40 chapters.

It's pretty good. I hope you can stick with it until the end.

Very good, the best fanfic I've ever read.

It looks good. After looking at the ratings, I feel like I don't need to worry about it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The logic is clear and quite good.

Or was he hit by a fatal move? Pressure points, can you still come out?

Red and fiery, in a trance

It was instantly refined by the Ten Turns Pure Net Gu [crying]

Not bad, I hope I can keep writing