Naruto: Time Travel Through Naruto's Sister, but the Roots Start

The logic is clear and the author's writing style is quite good. It seems that the plot is not abrupt and very reasonable. The key point is that other authors usually force a Nine-Tails plug-in when writing about Naruto's sister. This author did not force it and gave the protagonist a new hang-up with a reasonable arrangement. This kind of topic is very fresh. I hope the author can keep writing and don't end it😄😄😄 (The above is my concern)

I have seen 104 so far, personal ratings of four events so far (the ratings are just in the picture) For the Danzo chapter, I think it's above average (7 points) Reason: The narrative plot is good, and the beginning promotes the storyline. Personally, I will have some fluctuations (-1). There is still a storyline that has not yet unfolded (with 1 point deducted). I have not seen "I am the Hokage" so far, and the blood is not pure (-1). The Water Shadow Village Chapter is a blast Reason: I just like this one The Orochimaru chapter is so exciting Reason: It looks good, no need to say more The encounter between brother and sister was a blast Reason: You'll know it when you see it, it looks good Summary: So far, there is no too much homogeneous content in Naruto articles on Tomatoes. The story is developed from a good angle, but there is an extremely bad thing, that is, the author is too slow to update. Is it worthy of those authors who urged for updates? When the rating goes up, I will definitely change it to two stars to let the author settle down [smile] The rest of the brother-sister encounter chapter, emmm, to be honest, is a bit mediocre, but the climax of the Chuunin Exam chapter has not yet reached the climax. The first part feels a little bit weird. I personally feel that it feels weird.

It's very well written. I've read many female protagonists in the past that really have gender opposition between the lines. It's very uncomfortable to read. This one is very good and there is no such thing. The plot is very comfortable and the characters are very interesting. However, I still want to look forward to the story of Lily with Sister Intuition.

(Preliminary warning! Spoilers involved!) This is my first time reading a Naruto fanfic, and I came in after seeing that there was no system and it was stuck. The theme is changing, but in fact there is no real cp, which feels a bit pity. The heroine is a genius with a lovable personality. She doesn't have the heart of a virgin and doesn't have the kind of violence that is all about killing and killing! Relying on the memory of his past life and poor intelligence, his strength increases quickly and he can easily resolve all challenges. However, there is no suspense in the battle, it is all under the control of the protagonist! On the whole, it is a dumpling article. It has a not bad ending for almost all the regrettable characters in Naruto. Even the third generation and Itachi can survive! It can be seen that the author does not like Itachi but still gives him a way to survive (personally I think it is a compromise for Itachi's popularity) Summary: Although the plot is more of a happy ending type, there is nothing particularly obvious about it. Those who have watched Naruto are easily attracted to it, and the information gap itself is part of the fun! Overall, I highly recommend everyone who has watched Naruto to watch it [laughs]

Changes are single, micro-billion, the writing style is average, the literary style is partial, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. It's a very good Naruto fanfic. Although it's a bit messy, the setting of the plot and the setting of the heroine are very good. The setting of Naruto's sister, coupled with the root training at the beginning, takes the opposite growth path to Naruto. This setting is very good for cutting into the plot. The plot has no poisonous points, slightly personal setting, the bond setting is also good, the plug-ins are reasonable, there is no systematic and no-brainer mode, some are prophets of the plot and reasonable cell development, and the ability to add other world views is really praised. Now too many Naruto fans add messy abilities, which leads to a serious collapse of subsequent combat power. This book is very good, worth reading, and looking forward to the follow-up plot!

I don't think there's anything good to say about it, it's just that it's very interesting, the logic is very good, the protagonist is also very good, and after reading the full text, I personally don't feel there are any surprises. It's the best Naruto novel I've ever seen. After reading so many Naruto stories, this one is the most to my liking, and my child finally got to eat fine rice bran.

I have also caught up with the latest progress. The plot design and character descriptions are all good, and the three views are relatively positive. Although the longing for Naruto is quite abrupt, the patches can still barely explain the past. Naruto is the anchor point of the protagonist, and this anchor point is nailed to Konoha. The protagonist is destined to return to Konoha. The Chunin Examination should deal with all the unstable factors. The weak third generation and the dark Danzo will all come to an end in the Chunin Examination. The follow-up will be the war against Akatsuki and the ninja world. It depends on how the author writes it.

This is the best of all the Naruto fanfics I have seen. It is quite original on the basis of respecting the original work. It maintains the character of the original work without being ruined while showing new character traits. The whole battle is logically consistent and enjoyable to watch. The most commendable thing is that while praising some characters, it does not belittle any other characters. At the same time, the overall tone of the plot is a rare "reunion achieved through hard work", which does not make people feel artificial. It is undoubtedly extremely lucky to see this book on a platform like Tomato, and you can appreciate the painstaking work of an excellent author for free and coherently. However, it is undoubtedly unfortunate to see this book on a platform like Tomato, which means that most other Naruto fans who have appreciated it before and after will more or less show weakness and highlight flaws in the comparison of this book. In short, this is a rare and cherished book, and I look forward to the author's new work.

Gives me a feeling of being strong but not strong [exploration], if you like slow-burning, you can check it out

While reading this book and watching Obito's son's side, it gave me a sense of misplaced cp. It was so overwhelming [laughs] Amane once formed a deep bond with Danzo in the Kingdom of Water as Danzo's subordinate. The Cube family fled to the Kingdom of Water and then returned to Konoha to marry a girl who worked for Danzo as his wife.

Qualified Hokage fandom, there is no bitterness and hatred like ghosts, no Riddler being strangled by the neck, no over-fed conspiracy theories, what should everyone do? The writing style is normal, there is no primary school student composition-style character description, and there is no literary youth-style idle moaning. Overall rating: 8.6 (Out of ten)

The plot is reasonable, the logic is smooth, the setting is clear, and the tricks are reasonable. Even though I haven't watched Naruto, it doesn't affect my reading. The battle is rich in details and is one of the best online books I have ever seen. The heroine is very cute, full of inner drama, and the psychological description alone is very interesting; at the same time, she is calm and cautious, brave and resourceful, and does not suffer any disadvantages, making her seem somewhat semi-invincible. If you come here for Bianwen, you can just cancel it. There are not enough elements in this aspect, so I just treat it as watching female videos.

It will be a bit depressing at the beginning, but it will get better after getting out of the root. The rest is the time to show the author's writing power. The plot is not brainless and the reasonable feeling can reach 8.5 Or above.

It's really good-looking. It's the first transformation novel I've read. Author, you really opened the door to a new world for me. (Maybe the transformation was not rewritten) I particularly like the author's writing style and the protagonist's character.

Second time writing a book review Beautiful, no need to say more. The heroine is very likable, the plot is well arranged, and the viewing experience is very good This book is good-looking because of the portrayal of the protagonist. The heroine's character is very distinct, and the advancement of the plot has further shaped the image of the heroine as "playful but reliable", "skilled in civil and military affairs" and "scheming". The image of the heroine is undoubtedly vivid, so this character is lovable. The arrangement of some plots combined with the writing above gives a very good impression, and the impressive plot further shapes and fleshes out the characters. Apart from its small quantity, the novel has no major shortcomings.

After reading it, I felt a lot of emotions. It was well written. The only pity is that there is no emotional line. I think that since it is a single novel, there should be no emotional drama. Since you have Lily's emotional drama, why don't you continue writing it? The plot is worthy of recommendation. I think the lack of conspiracy theories is a highlight [Like]

Very good book. The author knows Naruto very well, and has his own ideas about Naruto's various plot ninjutsu, which is good. The plot changes are also quite big, and it fulfills many dreams that were difficult to realize in the original work. The heroine's strength improvement is also relatively unique. She does not rely on the two big bugs of tailed beasts and pupil techniques to become stronger. The heroine's intelligence is well described. In the middle period, she can play with Obito and break Obito's defense by relying solely on strategy, leaving Obito unable to fight back. It is quite exciting. The interaction between the heroine and Naruto, Orochimaru, and Ringo is very interesting and loving. She plays tricks on Naruto, fake Shura fields, and almost has an orthopedic surgery. Naruto is eaten to death by the heroine. I really want to laugh. It's such fun. She is also a teacher to Orochimaru. Yiyou, it feels very natural, and the bad relationship with Ringo started from the beginning, and he was chased by Ringo. Later, he confessed that the friendship of the ninja world is so terrifying. The author really understands Naruto's super-gravity friendship, and he was frightened by the friendship of the ninja world. The heroine is a little more serious in the early stage, but then she becomes more of a little devil and a fun-loving person. She is very happy and interesting. I really like the heroine, and I hope she can keep it up in the future.

It's a very, very, very standard fanfic. I haven't seen this kind of article in I don't know how many years. This is what it looks like to know the script. This is what it looks like to control the overall situation after knowing the script. Although the emotional line has a little flaw, the flaws are not concealed! Overall, the writing is pretty good, keep up the good work!

The relationship is well written, I am a book reader, and the writing is not as bad as others said. I have been listening to it for a few days. Anyway, the plot is very comfortable, not to the point of being mindless and exciting. 👆😋👌😋I think the bond is the best written, and it is better than the kind of romance CP. It is worth watching.

The writing is very fluent, and the plot arrangement is also very good. It makes me feel very interesting to read it. Although the protagonist is still a child now, the goal has always been very clear, which makes me look forward to the future development. This should really be the first Naruto fanfic I read on Tomato. It's very interesting.

It's a very nice book. The author's Tian Yin is very vivid. Every character is also vividly presented. It is the best fanfic I have ever read that suits my taste. I look forward to the extra chapters...

Frog fun! ! ! The writing is so good. After reading the setting of this fanfic, I feel that other Naruto fanfics have eclipsed [Like]. What I like and admire the most is that compared to other Naruto fans, this article does not deviate from the framework of the original work to a large extent, and it is also logically self-consistent. It has distinct characteristics of Naruto [Like] Oh, by the way, it is still a completed article. Fans of Naruto will not be in trouble.

It's pretty good. I almost finished it before I knew it. It's rare to read such a long Naruto novel. Most of the Naruto novels have novel settings in the early stages and become more boring the longer you read. The plot logic of this book is quite reasonable and the character of the protagonist is also very interesting. It's a pity that it will be updated soon.

Overall, it's pretty good among the Tomato Naruto fanfics. This one has quite a bit of fighting scenes. Although it feels like some people have been deliberately whitewashed due to the point of view, and the protagonist can sometimes be a bit weird, but it's much more enjoyable than the few books I've read on Tomato that kept talking about it for a long time and had no fighting scenes. I support it with nine stars [sending my heart]

Ts novel, there are no vulgar jokes. For this reason alone, I feel it is very good. The overall character of the characters does not deviate from the original work, and the protagonist's personality is clear, straightforward, transparent, and logically rigorous. The story line is smooth and the ending is satisfactory. The author can be more confident in his fan fiction. This novel is really polished. At least I was very satisfied with it and received good reviews.

I haven't read the original work, but I have seen the Shippuden chapter of this work. So far, it seems that the plot is smooth, slightly private, and has no poisonous points. It is slow to warm up and even a little sloppy, but the character design is good and the logic is clear and not brainless. By the way, author, is this the true yuri? Still a relatively heavy friendship

I have never read Naruto and am just a stranger. Although I can't understand some parts and can't remember most of the people's names, I can feel that this is a good book and I look forward to the protagonist brother and sister getting to know each other.

I feel that the early stage is still better than the middle and later stages. The logic is relatively good, and the setting is not broken. The author has a relatively clear grasp of the timeline. The look and feel is good. The only shortcoming is that the combat power is not well controlled. It rises too fast. I don't like that the protagonist is basically invincible from the middle stage. You can think about it before reading.

The writing was slightly poor in the early stages, but quite good in the middle and later stages. The whole book is invincible, and you never know what cards the protagonist has yet to pull out. It's basically fun all the way to the end. I quite like the protagonist's somewhat evil-minded character, and the plot direction is also quite interesting. Basically, I can get through the poor writing in the early stages. When I was watching it, I was really looking forward to the reunion of the brother and sister, and then I continued reading, and it turned out to be quite good.

Although it is subject to the combat power system of Kishimoto's original work in which the world is invincible and the enemy comes from the sky in the later period, the main plot is still successfully closed, and there are no big logical flaws. The key point is that the insertion of the protagonist's plot does not make any drama, and it is in line with the setting.