The Outcast: This Supreme Magical Artifact Is Actually a Succubus

The heroine is not like a group favorite but a group favorite, that is, the heroine dotes on everyone by herself, and everyone is asking for love from the heroine. The heroine fulfills everyone's wishes, which fits the title very well. Only a heroine who is not a human can do this. The heroine has no desires and demands, and is tolerant of everyone. Emmm, she is not a regular group favorite. If you want to watch a regular run, I actually feel a little aggrieved. Moreover, the heroine is a magic weapon. All plots are driven by other people. The heroine has no ideas or pursuits of her own. She is pushed forward by everyone and coerced by the plot to move forward. If you want to see a heroine with strong subjectivity, you can run away. All in all, the author's writing fits the topic quite well.

Super pretty! Although it is a heartthrob, the settings are very logical and the writing is not awkward at all. It is at least one of the top three female fandoms under Tomato that I have watched. Mrs. W must keep writing——

The writing style is also great, and the characters' personalities are also very thorough... I feel that the language is a bit lacking, so I can only try my best to figure out how to write a review. The author's choice of words and sentences is top-notch among Tomatoes. Even this fan can see that the writing style is very unique, just like the feeling given by Gan Mi (the heroine). The writing style gives people a feeling of breeze blowing and the smoothness of jade. It is a wonderful feeling. It is very pleasant after reading it, and it can be both vulgar and elegant. There is a saying that goes like this. I have forgotten the original words. The general idea is that a story with twists and turns is easy to write, but it is difficult to write the daily trickle in a way that people can read. The daily feeling in this book is like sunlight shining on a stream, with water jumping out from time to time, a sense of "liveliness", not in the popular sense, a bit like the feeling of liveliness and vitality, very spiritual. The emotional development is also very natural and smooth. The communication and interaction between the protagonists. Currently, only Wang Ye is the only one who met and fell in love in the article. The circle of people extending from him are all vividly drawn. The dialogue between the characters also closely matches the original work and personality. Sometimes I can imagine the storyboard of the comic when I look at it, and it feels like reading another chapter hh This kind of close to the original work, with dialogues that are life-like and colloquial. There are only two writers who give me this feeling (among the online novels I have read so far), and this author is one of them. Yes, it is a new discovery. I am looking forward to the following articles. It is very good for my eyes and mental state🥰🥰🥰 Like other opinions in the comment area, the heroine gives me the feeling that it is the Buddha's nature to save all sentient beings. I remember the author mentioned in the copy that it is a novel about female grandmothers. I don't understand the meaning of coming here to find a heroine?

I think the pattern is better than the so-called group favorite and heartthrob novel. I have seen many comments that the master heroine is a tool person. I don't think so. As an unconventional life, the heroine's behavior actually has her own thoughts and soul, and the line of her falling in love with Qingye Lingyu and the others is also very reasonable. I have always felt that the heroine of a heartthrob novel should have merits worthy of being loved. If you want to write about a heroine being loved, you should always describe how you fell in love with her, and how you love her. Even if the person who loves her is not one of the virtues bestowed on women in a universal sense, a charming character should always have merit. I think the character design of the heroine is very reasonable. Many comments say that the heroine is a tool to be used, but I think this is the basis of the heroine's charming design. Her most worthy of love is that she loves others without hesitation. Many readers feel that the heroine has been objectified and used, and that the heroine is a tool that provides emotional value. I think this feeling is exactly like Zhang Chulan's gaze on the heroine, which presupposes the person's non-human identity and regards all her actions as functional manifestations of the tool, while ignoring that her own willingness to provide love is based on her own choice, even if it is instinctive, it is a choice in a conscious state. The relationship with Wang Ye is very sweet, and the worldly happiness of Mr. Jing, a ruthless Taoist graduate, is really sweet. Please give me more extra stories, teacher.

I really think the writing is quite good, and it is an unconventional heartthrob. Those who like strong women or like heroines with strong self-awareness should be careful. The character of the heroine is a humanity without self, only love without hatred, and giving unconditional love to others. Some people may feel that the heroine is aggrieved after hearing this, but this is not the case. She does not produce true love, but the love of all living beings, so she will not be harmed by anything or anyone (spiritually). I like this kind of spiritual strength and will not be bound by anyone. Because the character of the heroine does not have her own personality and soul, most of the articles describe the heroine from a third-party perspective, without describing the thoughts of the heroine. I prefer to watch them from a third-party perspective and see them swooning over the heroine. The kind of analysis of the inner life of the original character without being OOC is really amazing. It is also very enjoyable to watch. Thank you for the treat. It is really well written. The character is not a regular heartthrob. It is very special. I think it is very innovative. This character is really difficult to write. Once the writing is a little weak or strong, it will collapse. It is really amazing to be able to stand up to the character and understand the character without being OOC. The writing is very good! Holy shit, it's really shocking. I read some sweet articles and my mind went crazy. I really don't know how to describe it. I felt a little overwhelmed after having a state banquet all of a sudden. The character of the heroine is really exquisite, she is so fragrant, and I was originally indifferent to Xia He, but through the teacher I tasted her charm, a very strong woman, on all levels. His writing skills are particularly good, his character analysis is particularly good, and he is particularly good at portraying emotions and the self-portraits of the original characters. He can write about the good and bad aspects of that person and allow people to appreciate their unique charm. There are also some words that really contain a lot of truth. I can only describe it as shocking. I really want to study it carefully.

For such a fragrant rice, it would be a shame to put 🍅 on it. Even the meat has a sense of literature and art that makes people admire and admire you (╯▽╰) It tastes so good~~ Everyone is naturally obsessed with the heroine. The author has also analyzed the character psychology and personality in detail, and it is not OOC. It is just a soft strategy... What I like most is the line of Wang Ye. When I watched the anime, I found Wang Ye's character very complicated, but the author wrote it very well. It was love at first sight. I avoid admitting it, but in the end I admit that I am in love, and I still love you to death. What I like most is this kind of emotional involvement from love to love more, and the author's writing also focuses on this... In short, this book will be the top 1 heartthrob among all the fandoms I have read this year!!! By the way, I'm looking forward to Zhang Chulan's line and Wang Ye's (๑> <๑) craving for meat!!! Յ(¯¯Յ) Author, please don't favor one over the other. Spiritual friendship is wonderful, but xxxx is also essential.

My wife's writing is very good. Although it is only marked as Mary Sue literature, she really has a good grasp of the anime characters. The words and actions of each person really feel like they are placed in the anime, and what they will do and say. The only bad thing is that there are a lot of insulting words in it.

On the basis of conforming to the original comic characters, there are emotional lines with them, and it is not OOC. The writing style is also very good, and it doesn't make me feel so embarrassed that I'm digging my toes into the ground in a primary school student's description technique. It's also a breath of fresh air. Very good, highly recommended! 👍👍👍 The heroine is designed to be a real tool. Because she is a tool, she has no ego (join the party, and the heroine pays attention to lightning protection), similar to AI (not a human, which is even better), but there is no negative emotion module embedded in the design (there is no way to hate others), like "God loves all living beings". This is the "ruthless way" in my concept, which is also the "sentimental way". It is not about loving an individual, but loving all the people in the world. This is sentient. Because we all love, so no one loves us, so this is ruthless.

Wow, wow, wow, I'm so happy to see it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! The corners of my mouth never dropped during the whole process!!! I love it so much. I feel that the heroine's abilities have also affected me as a reader across the screen. I feel so happy and elated when I look at her energy. I completely feel the author's love for the heroine's baby ❤️❤️❤️

Not bad. Advantages: The protagonist's emotional outlook is mature and free, and the emotional description is delicate. Even the emotional line with Xia He is very natural. Points of Interest: The protagonist is an infinitely giving person, and Zhang Chulan's intention of using her as a tool is obvious. Although it makes sense to make the best use of things as the Master said, it is undeniable that the protagonist is always taken advantage of. If this is unacceptable, it is not recommended to watch. Jie Dang does not recommend watching it. Zhang Lingyu (Shui Zang Lei version) also has an emotional scene with the protagonist.