You Old Man Has Been Plotting Against Me!

It's very good-looking. The author can accept negative reviews and has a very stable mentality (the main thing he writes is also very good-looking, calm and I like it very much). The plot has ups and downs. When you feel that the plot is dull (the main line), the system will come out and have a bloody theater. When the bloody theater ends, there will always be a mess, and you will be attracted to the main line again to watch. And the system has a very good sense of proportion. When people feel that the matter is irreversible, the system says it is there (you will understand what I mean when you read that chapter). When people feel that life is too dull, the system also says it is there (it is time to cause trouble). It can be said that the system is the highlight and their golden finger (it does not let the plot be spoiled, which is ideal and a bit envious. It is really a happy and reunited world). Moreover, the main storyline is still focused on romance. The emotions written are neither boring nor cliche. They are fresh and very beautiful.

The author is really good-looking, so good-looking. It was quite funny in the early stage, but quite sad in the later stage, and it made me quite uncomfortable when Xiao Qi died at the end. And she was quite resentful. Such a kind and lively Xiao Qi really didn't want her to die. It turned out that he was really not dead, which really surprised and delighted me. I really didn't want Xiao Qi to die. This is the heroine's plastic sisterhood and best friend's existence. If possible, I hope that this Xiaoqi will become the heroine of another book. It will be really good. It would be better if there is a love line. But I'm really glad that Xiao Qi didn't die. This system is quite reliable and can also bring about resurrection. I'm really happy. Come on, author, I give you a five-star review because it is really beautiful, funny, touching, and sad. The author would like to continue to update the perspectives of these people, especially the Little Demon Lord, and also add some emotional lines.

Hey, the author is here to make a small preview. In fact, the author wants to write a kind of exciting feeling of forced love that is not like forced love. Although Xiaotao will have plots about the dark room in the future, Xiaowei still respects and loves her while forcing her to do so. He won't do it if Xiao Tao refuses. (Although it was wrong to shut her down, in the end he watched her leave without stopping. He will gradually realize that Xiao Tao, whom he picked up in the desert, never chose her. All the initiative lies with Xiao Tao.) Xiaotao is the little peach blossom that he has been waiting for for many years in his lonely life. After all, people have selfish intentions, and they must hold on to what they love. Therefore, in the future, he will choose to let go and stand in the darkness to guard. Xiao Wei is a bit yandere, and I will explain why later. And in the end, where is the excitement? Yu Xiaowei is crazy about possessing her completely. Even if she doesn't like it, the other side of his heart is thinking about what if she will love him in the distant future? Therefore, he is very patient, restrains himself, returns to etiquette, and be a master, and occasionally seduce him (Xiao Tao is a slow person) How did Xiao Tao accept him in the end? In fact, fate has already moved. She fell in love with the first person she saw when she came to the other world. It's just that I don't know. Xiao Wei's perspective: Waiting for a long time to belong. Xiao Tao's perspective: The subsequent fate is involved. Why Xiao Wei likes Xiao Tao? The case will be closed after the plot update. In fact, he met Xiao Tao when he was young, and a story happened. He waited for thousands of years to find the peach blossom tree in the desert. From Xiao Tao's perspective, he thought he had just traveled through time and met a good person, but this also paved the way for Xiao Wei's love. Xiaowei's father was not happy when he was young. The story in the ruins is mentioned, and his tragedy will be explained in detail in the follow-up.

I didn't expect that the combination of cultivating immortals + system + yandere could be written like this, especially since the system can actually tie up multiple people at once to stage a bloody plot (it shouldn't be considered a spoiler, right). The various transitions are also exciting and hilarious, but the emotional scenes are also carried out reasonably (in short, it is hilarious). I feel that the author's writing is quite good, at least the various characters are well captured, especially the uncle (?) Who is afraid of society but looks like a murderous god on the battlefield [Admiration]

Overall, it was okay. The plot was novel and the characters were lively, with a bit of a funny style. The writing was also good, and the logic behind it was closed. The ending was a bit rushed, because the author was not good enough to write extras [crying] [crying] [crying] In addition, part of the heroine's character was a bit weird. She was pretty good in front of other people, but once I got to the master, I faced a man who sleeps with you every day, hugs you, and kisses you on the forehead. Do you really feel no emotion? He must be 40 years old in both lifetimes, so why would he think that an elder would kiss and hug a "junior"? There is also a story in the novel about the heroine watching the hero with other men, which is a bit off-putting, because once this kind of thing appears in romance, people will be crazy about it, and sometimes it will affect the mood of reading the novel, but I can't help but love reading the comment section. Apart from these two points, everything else is good. I hope the author's subsequent books will be better.

Very well written! The last few pictures moved me very much. The protagonists and supporting characters have very distinct personalities, and the subject matter is quite novel. They are very beautiful, very beautiful! Especially the part where the male protagonist is the prince, I really like that plot... The female protagonist is the redemption of the male protagonist at that time, and also explains all the things in the early stage (if the male protagonist doesn't like it, it would be abnormal, but the male protagonist likes it very much, hahahahahahahahahaha) The young couple are sweet, no matter which pair they are, they are very good, very good, come on! It's just that the ending was a little sloppy (actually I didn't watch enough, I recommend more extras) Looking forward to the extras ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

Oh my gosh, this is the first time I have encountered a novel that made me laugh so many times. The poems quoted by the author in the article all indicate their sources, which shows that the author has good cultural background. Not only is the plot novel, but he also takes the opportunity to write about a tragic incident to show how to deal with people. The emotional line between the master and the apprentice is really beautiful. After reading the comment area, I think Shi Xiaoqi and Shi Xiaoqi Ling Xuici is a couple, because when he learned about Shi Xiaoqi's unparalleled relationship, he was very emotional. When Xiao Qi's master agreed to help Shi Xiaoqi fight for it, he still disagreed, and Ling Xuici also personally taught Xiao Qi to study. He should have more or less special feelings for Xiao Qi, and there are various other behaviors that can prove it, so I won't list them one by one. What I want to know most is, is there any other CP? Can the author reply to me?

It's nice to look at, haha, it's so crazy, but there are also knives. It's normal for us to practice heart torture while eating sweets.

Super pretty! ! ! ! Go here for the benefit of all people in the world. The sound of the system also seems to have a subtle fluctuation. The common people will bless you. This time, they protected this common people together The love and friendship are very good, I really like the group portraits Xiaoqi also grew up later, which was good. She gave her life for her kindness. I just hope that it will not happen again in the future. The heroine and the hero, ten thousand years At the beginning, the male protagonist is an unpopular prince who was expelled from the country. The little peach tree appeared three times in total? She transformed into a silver butterfly and guided the little prince to practice Later, Xiao Taowan, who had just been sent by the system, was found by her handsome man. Later she saw the silver butterfly on the stone wall, and the silver butterfly guided her to a certain place. Who could know that it was something she had transformed ten thousand years ago? Tao Wan, Xiao Qi, Senior Sister, Little Demon Lord, and Buddha are bound by the system (Tiandao) In the end, he successfully saved this life He was saved by Master in his previous life. Tiandao felt that he owed him too much, so he fished a Tao Wan from another world to see if he could make a pair. In short, it's super! ! ! ! Good! ! ! ! ! Look! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rush, rush, rush

The emotional scene between the male and female protagonists was a bit close, but the five protagonists were managed by the system. They really laughed out loud and couldn't stop laughing. Especially the Little Demon Lord, he was really frowning when he appeared, but the subsequent plot made me laugh to death, so tragic I finished reading it, but I felt that the ending was too hasty. Except for some follow-ups for the male and female protagonists, there was no follow-up for Little Demon Lord, Senior Sister Ye, Ding Guang, and Xiao Qi. Xiao Qi and Senior Brother Ling don't have much detailed descriptions. I feel that the emotional scene is a bit inexplicable. The Little Demon Lord, Senior Sister Ye and the heroine are all dead, but only the heroine has a follow-up. After Little Demon Lord and Senior Sister Ye came back, there was no follow-up with their brother or their master. I feel that the cb-like friendship of the five-person group is particularly interesting, and Dingguang and Xiaoqi have always been worried about the other three people. Will they go out together again later? Anyway, it feels quite rushed at the end.

It's not bad. It's written by a teenager at first glance. It has the spirit of a teenager and the courage and humor of a teenager. It can make you laugh to death when it's funny, and it can break your heart when it's sad. The emotions are also brave, direct and vigorous. I like it.

The plot is very interesting and the ending is perfect. (I like this unique plot. I like everyone very much and I think this plot is very watchable and really funny!!)

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen a fairy tale about this kind of subject. The author could have made a side story. I always felt that the ending was a bit rushed. This is a funny little sweet article, without any bloody misunderstandings or sadistic plots.

This book is quite interesting. The protagonist group is being managed by the system and acting is really funny. I can't stop. The male protagonist is really miserable. Fortunately, there is a happy ending in the end. Sisters who like funny articles should not miss it.

It's really beautiful! The characters are well developed! Everything about the plot matches up from front to back. And the plot setting about the system is very novel. The male protagonist's yandere darkening is reasonable, and the sub-CP is also easy to drink. The most important thing is that the whole book is strangely sweet and has many funny plots. Love it! Author, you must continue writing! ! !

Good! Update soon~(人*´∀｀) ｡*ﾟ+

It's good to get off the cow, I'll let you lean on me, Yao Yao Da [I'm about to cry] [Cry]

It's very novel. I really like watching the system force a five-person team to follow the script. It's super funny. When I saw the inner demon at the end, I even wanted to take a bite of Chief Ye and Little Demon Lord.

It's nice to watch, the writing is better than most tomato novels, the characters are stable and not broken, the relationship between the protagonists is also well written, and it doesn't violate the harmony. The transition between the male and female protagonists' emotional lines is also good, it's not the kind of people who fall in love for no reason. I recommend it.

My favorite romance novel! When I saw the group portrait, I was worried that the male and female protagonists would have less roles, but it turned out really good later on. Hahahahahaha. The overall style is very relaxed and funny, and the master's yandere level is also well controlled. Looking forward to other similar works by the author! ! Looking forward to the extra episode (if it comes out)! ! !

Chapter 6 It made me laugh all night. My mother heard this voice and thought I was crazy. She asked me what I was doing. I said I was reading a novel. My mother said why I laughed like this while reading a novel. Thank you so much. Thank you so much. Never has a novel made me laugh all night.

Very good, come on teacher, I quite like the forced plot😋

It looks good, let me eat it

Looks great, come on!

I think it's pretty

Good looking! Does Xiao Qi have CP? Is he the senior brother?

It's very interesting, but the author still owes me a sequel [I'm about to cry]

Fragrant, good food, eat

It's the first time I've seen this type of work. It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the update. Come on, the author.

Recommended, it's funny and touching, I especially like the character Xiao Qi in it.