A Skill-Grinding Routine Starting at Hogwarts

It's a bit of a detour and has a lot of flaws, but if you're really a newbie and you can see the talent in the writing, you'll be able to make a living out of it.

It's pretty good, most of them are not awkward, and the writing is okay👍

So... Beautiful! Let others try it too! 👍

I particularly admire Qinqin's imagination and like this style. Come on and look forward to the follow-up.

As of Chapter 81, the content of the second year is quite separated from the first year: the first year has discovered the crown, and it is mentioned that Lao Deng knows who the soul is in the crown. In the second year, it seems that all the characters have "forgotten" everything that happened in the first year.

It's still okay, but I feel like it's missing some details.

It looks good, I love reading it, please do your best to write. 🤔

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking