Shocking Seal: When Yuan Meets Cheng

The plot is good to watch. The author has done a great job capturing snippets of the original work so that you won't feel too bored and you can figure out what's going on. The CP is very clear and has an original plot. However, the author released the characters too quickly. It doesn't mean that so many self-created characters are not good, but there are too many at once, and the intervals are too short. This will cause readers to be unable to remember that this person does not match this number, and it will not be so three-dimensional. This is probably why the author has added a lot of personal space. However, the large amount of space for other characters made me feel that the main plot was confusing. The deputy CP wrote a lot, and then the main CP did not advance a few steps, and the plot also stagnated for a while. It can be seen that the author really likes his OCs, but a clearer distinction between priorities and priorities might make the article feel more coherent. For example. In the gap between pushing the main plot, such a character appears because of necessity, and then in subsequent plots (such as fighting) the relationship between him and another character, as well as some of the past, are revealed. If you feel that the character is not expressive enough, you can add a small character theater at the end of the chapter and write some small daily routines. (It's not that DaDa's writing is not good-looking, DaDa's settings are very good, and there is no criticism. The above is just my opinion after reading it. It must be one-sided, and may even be wrong and inappropriate. So it's normal to disagree. Just treat me as farting.

The plot is okay, and I will also write some original plots of my own in the extras. It doesn't always follow the original work, it has its own main line. In fact, it's quite novel to look at the original work from another perspective. It's very novel. But there are also shortcomings, such as too many characters appearing at once. It's okay to appear slowly one by one, but if there are too many at once, it's easy for readers to forget them. The main plot is okay, and it's not too draggy. The emotional scenes are a bit draggy. The background CP of other characters were introduced very quickly, but the main characters were not explained in detail. I also know that the author wants to express the feeling that the main CP has known each other before and has a tacit understanding, but in fact, there is no need to explain so much. In Chapter 11, there is a relatively long section that repeatedly emphasizes how natural, how tacit and skillful it is for the protagonist to give things to the Shepherd. Just say it once. It would be too deliberate to emphasize it all the time. If some readers use audiobooks, they may also be annoyed by it. There are some typos, but the author didn't mention them many times and quickly corrected them. There are a bit too many descriptions of the appearance of the supporting characters, not that there are too many, but there are so many characters appearing at once and each character has to describe his appearance and clothing in detail, which seems very redundant. You can describe them slowly when there are scenes of them, or you can use some of the protagonist's memories [Amber and his sister, the protagonist picked up their memories, a similar plot] and then intersperse some descriptions of their appearance. Otherwise, it would be a chapter or more, and most of the content would be that kind of physical description. But overall it's still very good [love] [I think everyone has a different point of view, I think it's pretty good] It's great that a new author can write like this [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Really well written! ! ! ! ! ! The plot description is extremely complete! The plot of the copy in the original text is described very well! I also really like the two protagonists! Anyone who has seen Jingfeng thinks it looks good! !

It's good-looking, the characters are very vivid [send heart], the interaction between Yami Yuan and 4 is very sweet [smile], if you eat too many knives, you can read the extras [smile], and read too many 9+1 in other books, and there are other CPs that wash your eyes [laugh][laugh][laugh] The whole thing is very good [send heart], one of the most beautiful surprise fanfics I have ever seen [send heart][send heart][send heart][air kiss][air kiss][air kiss]

Learn to review this book yourself [shy]

The deputy CP accounts for too much in the book, there are too many self-created characters, and they appear too quickly, which affects the progress of the protagonist. The transitions are too fast, making people unable to react. There are too many extra chapters and they can be arranged in the same place. Overall, the plot is good, the protagonist has the correct outlook on life, and has a good personality. I feel that if it can be improved, it will be a good book.

It's really good-looking, as anyone who has seen Jing Feng knows.

The author's writing is also great [blowing kiss] I really like it [sending heart] [sending heart]

This is my first fanfic that I read the latest chapter and have the desire to follow. [Blowing Kiss]

Really super pretty

I will regard the month of March as pot fish and green pepper

Mainly because I didn't like it too much, and of course it just didn't suit my taste, but the story written by the author was really good.

It's so beautiful, it's a type I've never seen before.

Very nice, very nice. Such a good book must receive five-star reviews.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, it's over! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rice rice! Laoxiang Laoxiang's rice! Super delicious! The main CP is delicious, and the secondary CP is delicious too! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's good to watch, very good to watch, and the plot doesn't feel inconsistent with the original work. Come on, it's the best fanfic ever. I will always support you [Blow kiss]

Big cheers for the author

The plot is very good and the author is very gentle

The plot is good, I recommend watching it.

The author is awesome Klaas! [Laugh]

There was something wrong in my heart, and I felt a little bit dead. [Cry][cry][cry]

It's a very nice novel. I hope the author can update it soon.

It's very beautiful, with a clear structure and not too much description. The content is consistent with the original work! [Like][Like][Like]

I like this genre very much. The author's writing style is very good. It completely touches on my aesthetic point.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, I really enjoyed reading it, the author's writing is good.

4 Stars because the author likes to disappear

I like it, there's no reason [laughing]

Good-looking, love to read, exclusive for yandere articles

Delicious surprise fans

Very well written!