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I can't stand it. Such authoritative writing style and such immersive writing style made me feel happy. I watched 2/3 of it in one go and specifically gave it a five-star rating before continuing. Yes, this is what we, Du Wei, are like. The ss who was slapped and had her hands licked was still too charming. Not only was there no OOC, it even far surpassed the venomous tongue style of the original work. It was really great. It's very profound. Every time I see a fan protagonist who casually conquers a ss and then falls in love with each other for a few months, I feel very disconnected. People with complex contradictions and dark tolerance are engraved in their bones. This is what people should be like. . . It's so fragrant. This rice is so delicious. It makes the little madman feel good. . .

Family, I can't help it. This book is really beautiful, like a perfect piece of jade. Although it has flaws, it is more unique because of it. The author's ideas are innovative and innovative that I have never seen before. The subject matter is very interesting, including all the mastery of magic, and the description of magic is very interesting, especially the perfect one. It states that Arena's feelings for Severus are twisted, indescribable, and difficult for people to know. Arena's definition of a friend is a drop of rain in a sea. A small amount can add up to a lot, but it will only cause waves. Arena's attitude towards Keith has changed from the beginning, the plan of expression, to a little bit later. In any case, her change is obvious, but it is definitely not sudden. There is also the narration of the finale. Her contribution is indispensable, but it is not only because of her contribution, and includes the causes and consequences, childhood narrative, genetic inheritance, everything has its beginning, process and end. Really, family members , this book, if you don't read it, you will really regret it. This is really a unique clear stream in HP fan fiction. I have not seen any repetitions so far. You can imagine how shocking the outline of this work is. You can still write a work of comparable writing style without reference. I think no matter what it is, it is worth reading. —————— "Because some souls never need the applause of the world" —————— Looking forward to the follow-up [love]

It's super good-looking, and I feel like I'm reading the original work. The writing is really strong, and it's better than many popular novels. But there are too few people to read it, so the score can't go up. The heroine's baby will always unswervingly choose Sri Lanka. The center of her world is Sri Lanka. Sri Lanka will also be moved and respond to her kindness. For example, once she rushed directly into Ravenlock's girls' dormitory to save the heroine's baby, which surprised the eaglets, haha. The last branch is also super delicious. There are a lot of interactions and emotional scenes between the surviving Sri Lankan teacher and the heroine's baby after the war. The possessive and jealous Sri Lankan teacher made me smile like an aunt. Please don't finish the branch easily. I want to see Modo!

Finally a book about not being a nanny! ! ! There is no bondage in the name of love, only symbiosis across death. The text gives this story a true soul with a purer emotion [love]

I don't really read novels, so I came across Snape's fan art drawn by the author on Doujinshi. After reading it for half an hour, I couldn't help but comment. It's so beautiful. The heroine has a calm sense of madness, and Snape is not OOC at all. I am an original fan, and I feel that other fan art has written Snape too gently? The original work is like this, it is shocking to the heavens and the earth, and I feel that the author is very good, and I have responded to many comments. The heroine feels a bit like a yandere. People who don't like it may think it's a bit weird, but people who like her find it really cool! [Shy][shy]

In the main text, the heroine feels towards Snape as if Snape is my god. There is no personal relationship between a man and a woman, so the ending of the main text is like an ordinary spherical chocolate. It is a bit bitter when eaten, with a bit of sweetness in the bitterness. It is very interesting to read the subplot after finishing the main text. It is like wine-filled chocolate. It gives off an intoxicating feeling bit by bit while eating. I like this feeling very much. It's just short, too short. No matter how many words there are in this kind of sweet article, it's not enough. I also want to see the life of Snape and the heroine's child, come on, big! I hope I can write a million words!

It looks good, and the ending of the main text has a just right sense of beauty, especially the moment when Hermione hangs their portraits in the principal's office. It has a wonderful and satisfying feeling. Although I cried for a long time, this is more like a te ending. And the branch plot is even more wonderful. I love this kind of development of Te and He. Thank you to my wife for writing such a sweet extra! I particularly like the chapter about the trial in the main text. Even the Shafiq family contributed, which shows that they still love the heroine. It's great. And the sweet thing about the patron saint in the text is that it is finally not a deer, but a raven. But in the branch line, when Harry took out his memory, he still seemed to be talking about a deer? But it doesn't affect the sweetness of this branch.

What a strong author! ! Excellent at writing! ! It's actually quite difficult to write a story about teacher-student love. Thanks to the heroine's personality, which is more human-like, and the progress of the relationship spans more than 4,000 pages, it's very logical.

I like it very much and it is one of the few HP fan fictions that I have read to the end. The author of this book has greatly shaped the behavior of Si Jiao as a powerful dark wizard, which is very exciting to me. He is powerful, powerful, controlling and ambitious. At the same time, Si Jiao is many years older than the heroine, and the old man's desire to control and dominate the younger generation also pricked me. I like Nian Shang, and I like the strong Si Jiao's devotion and specialness towards the equally excellent heroine. The plot is very good, I especially like the beginning, ending and subplots. There are more than 30 chapters in the middle that are ignored, but it does not prevent me from understanding the author's emotional progression. All in all, great!

This fanfic truly achieves "both form and spirit" - the author not only accurately reproduces the characters' classic lines and action details, but also captures the emotional logic deep in their souls. The dialogue reads as if you can hear the original voices of the characters, and the behavioral choices are completely in line with the original settings, but they also expand the possibilities of character relationships within a reasonable range. There is no forced sugaring or blackening, all emotional development is traceable, and it can be called a model of OOC lightning protection!

"My heart... Is beating violently because of your proximity..." "I think... This is proof that I love you." "You were my guide who gave my life meaning. Now..." "You are the love who will accompany me throughout my life." "You deserve my love, Severus."

It's so authoritative (this book review may contain some spoilers) that the heroine regards SS as the first light in her life and does her best to follow him. The heroine is very human-machine, and she had some emotional fluctuations when she met the SS. It's very suitable for the second brush of woo woo, the middle part is really easy to cry, but also warm. It is a double ending. The second ending can also mirror the first ending and add some details to make the first ending even better. () Overall, it is very, very beautiful. After reading it, I became very curious about the author's expertise. Thank you for having such an authoritative article [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

Very good looking very good looking! Say important things three times! The heroine's design is very novel, and Snape is not OOC at all. I can't help but read the word "cool". The plot progresses very quickly, the characters' emotions are delicate, and both endings are very touching. Everyone, go for it! No loss in investing! (Hehe, I actually still have food to eat [learned]) Great cheers to the author! [Send heart][Send heart]

Treasure novel, there is no love line in the early stage, it is basically a teacher-student relationship, but it is also very beautiful [shy] and the love line later is even more sweet. Moreover, the character design of Sijiao is so realistic and not OOC at all. It makes me so happy.

I opened this book by chance last night, and now that I have read the main plot and branch plots, I have seen this type of character design for the first time. When the heroine was 11 years old, she was still like a blank piece of paper. The professor was the person who suddenly appeared in her field of vision, which made the heroine interested. At first, she really felt sorry for the baby girl and wanted her to eat well. Watching her slowly grow up and become more like a human being instead of a sophisticated machine. In the process of growing up, she was actually healing the professor. The two little bitter gourds and the two paranoid graces were really touching. Hahaha, it was so fun to watch. The main plot is so awesome, it made me cry🥲The branch plot is so rustling, it tastes so delicious [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Overall, I highly recommend it. Also, the author's next book, Twin Life, is still touching [Send my heart][Send my heart] Recommended recommendation

Very nice, a bit sharp, sad [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The last few chapters of the main plot really made me cry [crying]. I really like the characters written in Da Da's writing. The coexistence between the two is really well written. None of the characters are OOC. There are many different emotions mixed in this novel. I like it very much!

A very good book~ The relationship between Snape and Erena is so pure and sincere~ Erena is like a fanatical, persistent believer who only belongs to Snape. She is willing to go to the darkness for him, but in the end she saves him from the darkness. This kind of almost paranoid following, even love, really makes my heart surge~ Among them, Snape is for Erena. Rena had no choice but to compromise again and again, put down his guard again and again, and put down his worries and fears again and again. It was so good~ It really fits the character perfectly, and the author's self-design is really interesting, and it is not inconsistent at all~ I love these two characters so much~ In my heart, this is really a great book~ [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

Woooooooooooooo good looking! At first I felt like the heroine was a human-machine heroine, but then she started to compromise with the Sri Lankan teacher and became more and more beautiful. Moreover, the heroine and the Sri Lankan teacher are not in a cp relationship. The sense of following the heroine is what I have always wanted to find! The only thing is that I don't really like Hermione as the heroine's friend. It feels like an e person forcibly drags an i person out to play, which is a bit annoying, and some details are not very consistent with the original work. But the portrait at the end of the text is really amazing. The more I read it, the more I wanted to cry. DaDa finally made up for the regret of the portrait, and the plot was also deleted. The overall rhythm is faster and more enjoyable, and Si Jiao's character is not OOC. I like it so much! I like it so much! ! ! Ah ah ah, the love story in the extra episode is also very sweet, and the heroine who plays straight between man and machine is the best for pushing the game forward! The Sri Lankan teaching written by Da Da is really close to the original work [Sending my heart]

It's so beautiful, it must be filled with stars

Erena, who grew up on her own, found her anchor point, the Sri Lankan religion, and followed the Sri Lankan religion, even if he was a Death Eater. In the first ending, Erena committed suicide in front of the grave [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] In the second ending, Erena and the Sri Lankan religion were very happy🥰

The branch line fills the gap, but in fact the author's main line may be the more realistic ending. I have read a lot about the HP fanfic. The author's main line is more in line with the character of the original work. I personally like the main ending, but it does not prevent me from preferring a warmer branch ending. Thank you to the author for constructing this story. I like it very much. I hope to see your works again in the future.

☞Guide to eating this book ☞Unconventional HP fan writing Followers of pure paranoia gain new life from shortcomings; dive deeply The elder in darkness accepted the baptism of blood and then accepted destruction. ☞Delicate and unified character design From beginning to end, people have only one criterion. ☞The ending has two lines, I prefer he Confusion or epiphany, the breakthrough of emotions happens naturally. The small tree cultivated by Sri Lankan teacher struggles to pull out new leaves, and the immortal product.

It's super beautiful. The writing is very delicate and not obtrusive at all. The main character is not out of place. It's like the main line of another Harry Potter series, but with an extra protagonist. It's so beautiful.

All I can say is that it is really good, very good, and beautiful. Although the main text is very regrettable at the end, the extra chapter is so sweet! ! ! ! Snape and Erena are happily ever after! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Moreover, I feel that the characters are not OOC at all. Sometimes the intellectual arguments described by the author are difficult to understand, but they feel a bit powerful.

Nice! The heroine is Snape's poisonous Wei! He is the only one in my eyes! It's a bit cruel, just go past the main text [OK] Although the author has some repetitive words, I understand the meaning, it doesn't matter, I will ignore it [OK]

It's great. This book is just a bit short. It took me a few hours to read it, but it's really good. Author, I want to read Tiantian's extra daily chapters. Come on [Love]

Now that I've finished eating the knife, can I have some extra sweets? [Almost crying]

It's so good. The text is sour and sweet. The extra is super sweet.

It made me feel sad. Although I was a little reluctant to accept the heroine's character at first, I was really shocked after reading it. The writing is really good, and Erena is also very good. I hope all her wishes will come true, and I hope she will always be happy.