Star Iron Schooldays

It is a simple and direct, no-brainer (so far) beautiful, very relaxing novel. The characters are in line with the setting of the book. It can be read as a high-quality fanfic to relieve stress, or as the material for dreams before going to bed. I really like this book myself [laughs]

This book can only be described in one word. It is delicate and handles emotions very well. The occasional side stories can also supplement the characters. It is considered one of the top novels among Beng Tie and it is very worth reading. (Actually, I'm mainly afraid that the novel will die, because I really like it, so I said don't rush into it [face covering])

Like! Qiong is a succubus! The atmosphere was very relaxed, and Himeko and Kafka had a lot of fun bickering!

Not bad, not bad. It's rare to find a daily Bengtie fanfic that's satisfying to your liking. The previous one turned out to be a eunuch because it was so good. I hope the author won't be like this, let alone stop updating. Please [cry] [cry]

You look good. By the way, does the heroine have Kafka and Silver Wolf? [Sinister smile]

Express your personal opinion: The author should be a new author, but his writing style is pretty good. 1. The plot is mainly based on Beng Tieyuan's plot, but some personal modifications have been added to develop the plot towards the dumpling-making ending, which also makes up for the regrets of many players. 2. The protagonist is Qiong Zai, a succubus star core spirit, but it is not a mindless description of how good-looking he is. He also has a personal attraction, but it is not reflected in the plot. It is learned from other people's mouths. I feel that this needs to be improved, so that when readers read the description of Qiong Zai, they can also recall the previous plot and feel that it is very reasonable. 3. The novel should have multiple female protagonists, but it doesn't talk about having a harem or studs. Nowadays, most relationships are more than friends, not lovers, and there is a Shura field, but it is not very heaven-defying (although I am more optimistic about Qiong and Liuying [love], but the author did not write too many sweet descriptions, which makes me a little regretful) 4. The characteristic of this book is the Girl's Side Story written by the author, which is a continuation of the pioneering work of Qiongzi and other female protagonists. However, I personally recommend writing it after the main plot is over, otherwise there will be a sense of fragmentation when you read the main plot again. (No one in the book currently has to eat [eat melon]) The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it [please update] The author also has a lot of words in one chapter. You can read the table of contents by yourself, which ensures that you will enjoy reading it in one go.

It's very interesting. Don't stop updating. Come to Qiong to accept this power. From now on, you will have the power of Galaxy and Luchiel. Do you believe in the eternal vitality or stop everything? [Laughing][laughing][like][like][like][like][like]

It's pretty good, but the score isn't high.

Harem King: Pioneer Dome

Okay, pretty good-looking

Okay, worth a look

It looks good, but I don't know why so few people watch it.

It's very interesting, but I hope the author can come up with some original plot and Shura field

The author has greatly improved his rating. Although it is low now, don't give up. All works are like this, so don't give up. I still want to watch Shura Field.

Very nice^ω^, finally solved the book shortage You may think that the title of the book is Modern Urban Beng Tie Wen, but in fact it is not, it is still Beng Tie Universe [Note]

Author, please write more plots between the protagonist and Kafka, please, please! ! ! Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Don't lower the quality [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's good-looking. Book lovers who like to eat sweets are invited to [eat melon] [laughs]

Good, good, good, good

Very nice, clear logic

The plot is clear and the logic is tight

The world view has been modified a bit, giving it a touch of martial arts.

It feels good, but the main character group has been cut too badly.

More in line with my taste, very good

It's pretty good! This kind of campus worldview is to my liking! I love watching it [Sending my heart]

It's beautiful and the author's writing is good. I highly recommend it😊

This is simply art!

Come on, the author writes well

Collect them all, sweet, and single lines

My impression of this book is. Qiong: Help me, Teacher Dan Heng Dan Heng: Stay away from Qiong

It may not be very friendly to Chef Shan. Is it okay for the author Yunli and Yanqing to form a couple? [Grief]