[Light Novel] [Game] [Otherworld] [Multiple Classes] [Seafaring] [Adventurers]
The World of Divine Abyss was a hyper-realistic game with an extraordinary degree of freedom and over a thousand classes. For reasons unknown, it eventually shut down for good.
In the game's final days, some players stayed inside to say their last goodbyes. That choice changed their destinies...
Chen Feng was sailing a warship, quietly waiting for darkness to fall, when he opened his eyes and found himself in the real World of Divine Abyss.
After more than a decade of lonely voyages across the sea, he unexpectedly encountered fellow players in an adventurers' guild, people who shared his misfortune.
The captain of Hu Jian, the summoner of Chang Dong, the druid of Bei Dong... Players from all walks of life gathered together,
setting out on an adventure to uncover the truth behind the World of Divine Abyss...
The plot is very good, one link after another, but the setting of the protagonist at the beginning is too outrageous. He has been around for more than ten years and has achieved nothing. With his strength, the protagonist can make a name for himself on the sea. In the plot, the protagonist is clearly a 50-50 rivalry with those famous pirates. If you insist that the protagonist is a poor guy and an E-level adventurer, a lot of people will laugh at you.
Prices are collapsing. My profession is captain. The ship has no money. Let's start with the cannon. I don't know whether he is a captain or an adventurer?
I don't like the setting, the plot, and the ending, but the writing is okay. I recommend this book to me every day, and I can't recommend it.
Delete it and rewrite it. It collapsed too much and there is no way to save it...
The worldview collapsed after Chapter 10, and it was set to be eaten instantly. The protagonist goes from owing 5 silver coins to using tens of millions of gold coins in one month. From E-level little Karami to A-level, what was he doing in the past ten years? I was also fascinated by the setting of fish bone liquid. While saying that the extremely precious Pirate King only had 20 drops, the NPC was slapped in the face and fed him just one drop.
If you don't have a boat, send it to someone else.
Generally speaking, after listening to a few chapters, the protagonist is more than ten years old and only has a small boat. It was calm and calm before, but now something happens and six treasures are obviously worth thousands of gold.
5 Stars for encouragement The world view is pretty good There is a small collapse Overall OK
Why does this get worse the more you write it?
At least there is nothing wrong with the writing. The story rhythm is one after another. The author may need to explain the specific background setting.