Begging for Sour Writing
I've read too many sweet stories, which makes me feel a little nauseous now. I want to read the kind of sour stories that are both sweet and cruel, neither sweet nor cruel. The male and female protagonists have reasons to be sweet and sad for other reasons. I don't want to read the kind of stories that are cruel for the sake of cruelty and sweet for the sake of sweetness.
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The writing is very good, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are well established (the female protagonist is quite attractive). It is obvious that she is riddled with wounds and blood is flowing all over the floor, but some people still point to the pool of blood and say: Look, the red on the ground looks like love, they are so romantic. The male protagonist is a businessman. It is the instinct of a businessman to buy the bottom and kill. He only cares about the immediate interests. Even if he knows that the female protagonist is innocent, he will strangle the female protagonist in all aspects in order to wake up. The heroine doesn't have a God's perspective, so how can there be love in the end? I don't understand, shouldn't it be fear? (In real life, such a powerful man is so scary that even if you want to run away, you can't run away.) Loving someone depends on the lower limit. Obviously the lower limit of the male protagonist is a bit low. Who can guarantee that the male protagonist will always love the female protagonist. Can the pain caused by the male protagonist to the female protagonist be erased so easily? Can't they just because the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist, can they have sex? After waking up from the novel, the heroine is completely passive (although it is inevitable that the hero is a Celestial Dragon, but the heroine is too disappointing), and then will all the pain in the past be easily forgotten? Even if he was strangled by the male protagonist in all aspects, including miscarriage and depression, it would all be serious in the end. The portrayal of the heroine is not as good as the previous ones.
If I were the female protagonist, and there were male protagonists and Japanese people in the same room, and the gun in my hand had two bullets, I would hit the male protagonist with all of them.
It's very interesting. The story setting is very novel, but I think it is more suitable to write a story about the heroine's growth, without cp. Of course, you can also write a love story between the male and female protagonists, but the best ending is for the female protagonist to be beautiful alone. This setting hurts the female protagonist too deeply. The female protagonist cannot fall in love with the male protagonist, otherwise it will destroy the heroine's personality.
I chased her all night, but I always felt that the heroine had been injured in the book world, and had been very passive after returning to the real world. Although she was resistant, she was forced to accept the male protagonist's forced intrusion and emotional plunder with regret and love for various reasons. Inexplicably, it feels like the protagonist has entered the world of the novel for the second time, but this time the one who is forced to follow the plot is the heroine who is trapped in a sweet novel about chasing his wife and being cremated.
It is a very young girl's emotion. Reality and books always go in opposite directions. The fantasy of redemption by others and the glamorous dream of stardom reflect childhood misfortune, the abandonment of dependents, and the accusations of countless people. The audience always likes to follow the public and blame all mistakes on others. But I don't like Xu's love affair with the heroine in the later period. Regardless of whether Xu is a dream in the book or real, the hurt is hurt and there is no way to beautify it; I feel sad for the heroine's experience, but I still have my prejudice against Xu as the male protagonist.
I think the writing is quite good. The male and female protagonists do have their own positions in the book. Anyone would give it a try when they think there is hope for returning home. Moreover, the male protagonist did not know the female protagonist at the beginning. After realizing his feelings for the female protagonist, his thoughts changed and he was able to realize his mistakes. He did not force the female protagonist to forgive him. I also think the female protagonist's forgiveness of the male protagonist was well explained. As the book said, it is your own business to choose whether to break up and get back together. Although the female protagonist was abused in the early stage, it was more acceptable because there was no disgusting female supporting role to bully the female protagonist. The male and female protagonists are both little bitter gourds. I wish you 99
The setting of the double-travel book is interesting, and the storyline is also very attractive. I reached chapter 62 in one go, and I feel that there is still more tension in the back: the relationship between the characters in the book needs to be resolved, the two people also have intersections in the real world, and the heroine's career line in the book and reality. I wonder if it will be extended and written. I am very curious about the subsequent development, and I am also looking forward to what kind of reversal the author will give. Now I just hope that the author can keep writing at this level and not break up or collapse the character. Good writing is rare, so readers must not be disappointed! Come on! ! Our heroine must look cool and sassy! ! !
It's great👍It takes another sweet pet route and details the complex emotions between people. The protagonist's image is very three-dimensional, the supporting characters' IQs are online, and the characters are recognizable. Although the plot has twists and turns, I am full of expectations😚
It's very beautiful. I feel that the setting of the whole book is relatively novel. I have never seen anything of this type before. Moreover, the author also dug some interesting holes in the front. When you read the back, you will have a feeling that it is like this.
At first I thought it was just an ordinary Wen Shuwen! ! An old-fashioned start! But the more I watched, the more I cried. Especially when the heroine's child is born! The author's emotional descriptions are very delicate. It feels like a fifteen-year-old girl's dream has come true! I love you fiercely too! ! The male protagonist is a guiding lover! Even though it was abominable at first and excusable
This is the first time I follow a series and write a review. Hmm~ How can I put it this way, I couldn't forgive what the male protagonist did to the female protagonist in the early stage, even if there was no problem from the male protagonist's point of view, but I looked at the problem from the female protagonist's perspective. I almost shed tears when I read the article in the early stage. The female protagonist was too depressed. In the later stages, everything seemed to be getting better, but there was a strange inconsistency. The male protagonist created by the author is very good, as if only women know how to create a normal man. The heroine was very distressed in the early stage. The pain of her original family had a great impact on her, but she is perseverant. There is also the friendship with my best friend. It is the first time I have seen in a novel that a best friend can kill the male protagonist with a knife for the female protagonist. It is quite strange. I've only read Chapter 115 so far, so I probably won't have to wait until the finale to tie the knot. First of all, I wish the heroine Shen Yang and her best friend Yan Shuang in the parallel world to be happy every day and become rich and beautiful! ——Comment on 2025.11.17
I really like this book's analysis of the male and female protagonist's hearts, very delicate writing style "The two of them were like drawing a circle in reverse. His suffering ended and her cruelty began." The beginning of the story between the heroine and the hero was a time-traveling story. The heroine really suffered a lot of grievances. But when she understood the hero's heart and knew that he was also going through suffering, the heroine was relieved and could face her inner desire for love, which is good. Chi Yang in the real world and the book world are both well done.
Tied! Super pretty! I like the setting of the double-crossing book. It is funny and also sour. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very sparkling. I look forward to Boss Xu chasing his wife in the crematorium! ! This is the last book, come on, baby! ! !
It looks very good so far. I feel that the author has secretly buried some foreshadowing but I didn't see it. This feeling is very good. It makes readers look down. The heroine's baby is really a pitiful little girl. I feel sorry for her [crying][crying][crying]
I originally watched it to chase my wife in the crematorium, and I was already prepared to not think about it or eat it💩. Who knew that I would actually watch it to the limit? The male and female protagonists are well portrayed, as if they have souls. In short, the writing of the boss is so good.
An adult fairy tale. I haven't read Xianyan in a long time. It's super good.
The writing is super good and the plot setting is very reasonable. I saw that it was not a simple story about chasing a wife, the male and female protagonists healed each other, the heroine's career line was also described, and the heroine was growing up. This is not a mindless article. Only by reading Chapter 119 can you have a deeper understanding of the previous chapters. The male and female protagonists are just two little bitter bags.
Nice! The male protagonist has his own perspective, and the female protagonist has his own aspirations. They don't have God's perspective. The male protagonist knows the female protagonist's softness and feels sorry for her softness. He admits his despicability. The female protagonist is also very smart. Nice and worth watching.
The heroine's baby is so miserable (｡•́•̀｡)
The living male and female protagonists are well received, and the female protagonist is my favorite type. She has gone through hardships but is also strong and brave, and will not abandon the kindness in her heart. However, it is true that the couple in the book world has too much pure hatred. I hope Yangyang will not be easily caught!
It's from the last book! Finally opened this article! The pure-hate couple who wears two books is so beautiful! Like! It's just that Yang Yang is a bit bitter, so Boss Xu quickly chases his wife! ! ! !
It looks good, and I particularly like the way the heroine wears it in the book. This is one of the few serials that I am willing to follow, but the ending feels a bit abrupt, and the progress obviously speeds up later on, but I am very happy to finish it.
The writing is very strong, the emotional pull between the two protagonists is well described, and the emotional analysis is also very in-depth. It's fun to watch.
It's remarkable, the front is very novel, and the back is okay. The score of 6.8 Is too low, I'm sorry for the author's intentions. Although I am not satisfied with it, I can still feel the author's intention to stand out among similar articles. Five stars to the author, cheers.
Good-looking, sour and astringent
The writing is very good, and the early understanding of the entertainment industry is also very thorough. It is a very good book, good luck to the author👏
A rare plot, very novel, and the world inside and outside the book is more in line with the logic of life. The writing style and plot direction are very natural. I look forward to Yang Yang's growth and transformation.
I want to have 200 accounts and give the author five stars. Very, very beautiful Although the ending is weak, being attacked is a bit cliche. But the life of A12+ is really hard for us mortals to imagine. Specially poke at my xp article I just like the scene of the stubborn Cinderella and the one in power bowing his head. The part about wearing books is really exciting The male protagonist can't control his temptation, which is a fairy tale
This book is very well written! The male and female protagonists are independent individuals, and each has their own life issues. The first part is sour, but the ending is good. The author's writing is very good, and the plot is smooth and unobtrusive. It is a buried good book [Love] [Love] [Love] Sorry ~ I made a typo [smile] "It's a good book that has been buried"
The writing is delicate and the story is novel. I feel sorry for the author for this rating. The writing style is delicate, the structure is complete, logical, and not mindless. The rating is too low. It may not be the kind of super cool writing that is popular now, so the traffic is not enough. Book friends, don't miss this masterpiece because of the rating.