The Transmigrated Queen: Why Am I Being Forced to Marry a Barbarian Right Away?

Still good. But even though I wrote a change order, the protagonist Queen will invite people to bathe together, have hot spring meetings, and give out free benefits. And judging from the author's reply, this kind of plot is inevitable. This has no impact on the book, so why write it? Or do we have different paths and don't work together? Let's go first.

Yes, the book depicts the development process of the feudal country's transition to modern times, focusing on the conflicts between characters in different eras. The pace is also relatively fast, not as grinding as other genres. All in all it's well worth a look!

It looks good, but it's a bit too open. A feudal country has become an industrialized power from top to bottom in a year or two. In addition, there are some subplots that some people think are extremely poisonous, such as the protagonist inviting a male attendant (male) with whom he has no close relationship to share the bath. For example, having a meeting at a hot spring...

Overall it's good, but I suggest you describe some scenes in detail, take out a few pictures to specifically describe the things that the protagonist encounters in his life, and then change the perspective, give it to people of different classes, and describe their mental processes and changes in this change. The pace of the article can be slowed down a little, and it's a little more "watery". The current pace is generally too fast, and it's not convenient to set up characters. For example, the death of the old knight can be expanded to two or three chapters, and there is no need to write about him in full. Just spend a few hundred words to mention it. Come on, author.

The main thing is the hot spring. In my opinion, that part is really unnecessary. It's like a delicious piece of bread with a fly inside. Do you think I should continue to eat it, or throw away the whole piece? You can avoid not having that fly in there.

Ounega 😢 Can the author be kinder to the queen? 😢 😢 I feel like the queen is going crazy 😢 😢 If there is no active and healthy queen, there will only be a cold and heartless machine... Wada ← ↑ Xi → 😢 😢 😢 😢

I originally wanted to give it three stars, but I decided to give it two. Well, it's a bit bad. Of course, the description of the characters or the description of the war are pretty good, but the protagonist and the system are not the kind that are invincible at the beginning. The protagonist is not the kind with a very strong heart, and there will be hesitation and panic. This description is good, but I still can't accept it. The protagonist takes a bath with the group of ministers. Especially in Chapter 30, it is specifically described that the protagonist is wearing a velvet bathrobe and the courtiers are all in a swimming pool. Then the protagonist takes off his robe and slowly steps into the pool. Well, how should I put it? Although the protagonist is a man at heart, it has been a year and he should be able to adapt to his daughter body. He can take a bath with them, then undress and be honest with them. Well, how should I put it? , Even if the heroine doesn't care, there are differences between men and women. Please, if a normal person has someone of the opposite sex walking in, whether it's a man or a woman? Everyone will be surprised, right? How can they accept it calmly? Of course it's perverted, just pretend I didn't say it, I think this is a poisonous point. If it weren't for this poisonous point, I could really finish this novel, and it's very well written, but it's a pity (´;;`)

A very interesting style, similar to the refreshing rhythm of a light novel. The author also knows something. Many of the things written are easy for novices to understand without being boring. There is no major poison at the moment, I hope the author will continue to do so. (Also: Long live the Queen) It is light on military and light on politics, but the rhythm and plot are well controlled. It might have been better if the author went a little deeper into the military and politics. But I think the best selling point of the whole story is actually the heroine. I really like her character. I was also confused by the heroine's speeches in the early stage. The familiar smell made me almost see Xi'er in a trance. I still hope the author will continue to do so. After all, there are not many competitors in the field of tomato sex transfer and military. If the author doesn't collapse later, there is still hope.

Again, [this book is worth buying] the macro situation is large and structured, and everyone is described like a real person with flesh and blood. When following the main line of the story, the author did not give up the foreshadowing of other characters. The conflicts and plots of the characters are very clearly described, and there is no situation where the setting is too much. It is completely ok to read with your mind. It also incorporates some references from reality to make the story look more real. It is beneficial to use appropriate rhetorical techniques. The most important thing is that the author has a very good attitude and can maintain high quality while publishing at least 4 chapters every day, actively interacting, and most readers reply, and any of these points is rarely possessed by authors in other books. This is a very good and most important feature of this book, which other authors do not have. Finally, I hope to make some suggestions. If you can see it, please refer to it. Change the cover... Children, I went to promote the book, such a good work should not be buried

Good books are not popular! If you don't care about hot spring bathing and the protagonist's position, this book is very good. The story of the super philosopher king and the invincible hard-core iron-blooded queen leading a poor and backward country to become a world hegemon is a cool story. But the book doesn't stop there. If Levania wants to start a country surrounded by great powers, it must build a country through the army. However, relying too much on the army and being too eager for war will inevitably lead to its fall into karnatoism. I think the author is worthy of praise for his willingness to stick to correct values ​​and set a lonely ending for the empire even though readers generally cannot accept it. 😘 But to be honest, the public's acceptance of the Revania prototype is quite high, because the picture is of 🐌, not Revania. As long as you don't make too many pictures, hit ⏰, help 🐌, and beat Mr. Ou all over, it won't cause too much resentment among readers.