Flatten Me? I Asked My Gangster Men First!

The protagonist of this book is ruthless and funny enough, and the plot is also very good. However, this book has a big shortcoming. That is, the reason why all the plots in this book are reasonable from the beginning is that the author hid the police station.

Not bad, this book is well written, funny enough, and has many jokes. I generally don't comment easily, but if it stays like this it will definitely look great. In an already boring life, having more jokes and laughter is the most beautiful thing in the world. Brother Biao is definitely a comedian, you can write more [laughs], and Brother Chen's writing is also good. The feeling of the Ax Gang is coming, it's better to make music on the roadside, this smell will come back after scratching it [Like] [Like]

It's good-looking, funny, and the writing is pretty good. If you are a new writer, you can definitely give it a score of nine or a few points. If you are a veteran, you can also give it a score of eight or nine. Of course, I am talking about the updated content as of today.

It looks good, and the characters summoned feel very unique, especially in the context of Hong Kong variety shows. The protagonist is not pushy, is very self-aware, and gets along well with system characters. The overall plot is smooth, the overall situation is grasped, there is no feeling of tension, and it is accompanied by comedy and a little bit of passion.

Tricky and ruthless, recruit more villains, it will be interesting [laughing and crying] The writing collapsed at the end. The robots came out and they attacked Hong Kong Island. After the attack, they still wanted to be recruited [face covering]. This is no different from a million troops besieging the Forbidden City. As long as the emperor admits his mistake, he will hand over the military power. It's a bit like child's play.

I wonder if it's Libei Lihuo again?

It's amazing. I like everything. This is so awesome. The characters are written in a way that matches my original vision of them. The soul character Fan Debiao, the finishing touch, Liu Haizhu, Brother Chen, Wa Long, etc., Except for the killer group, everyone else is the finishing touch. It's not that the writing is bad, I just feel that if they come again, it will be a bit redundant. One or two powerful and awesome ones can be enough to be bodyguards and killers. Although I like the character, I feel a little redundant in the team. And if there are too many such characters, it will feel a bit confusing. But the most awesome thing is that there is Zhang Qiandan and the king explodes at the beginning. This is something I never expected, and it can be written so perfectly. I hope to arrange a better partner for Fan Debiao, because I think Marshal Ma is a bit upset. Brother Biao is quite miserable. It would be best if Sister Liu can fix it. Also, his son really likes the plot between him and Brother Biao. Also, it would be best to do two more paragraphs. It's very fun to play. It's best to give Ah Hao something like this. It's quite interesting and it also has a tank. It feels like the pace is a bit fast. It would be better if it could be slower. I'm afraid it will be over after another one or two hundred chapters. I really wish I could write five or six million words for such a good plot.

The writing is good, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the relationship between Kacho and the brothers is truly sincere and touching. The only shortcoming, in my personal opinion, is that the appearance of the robot at the end is abrupt, but the feeling of satisfaction is there, and the final sublimation is also good. It really makes people excited to watch it. After reading it, I still feel a little regretful that it's over? It's still a pity that I didn't get to see their brotherhood and loyalty as they continued to mingle in society, but overall, this is a pretty good book with tears, laughter and loyalty.

I'm good at it. I've just read chapter 48. To be honest, it's okay. It gives me a sense of immersion. An ordinary gangster asking you to be the boss is just like that. Compared with the real gangster boss, you lack a lot. Come on, author, don't use AI later.

It's really flesh and blood. Brother Biao will fight Brother Zhu because of a cousin. Brother Chen will also say that Ah B is a country bumpkin. It is really the funniest Hong Kong drama I have ever seen. I am the third novel to comment on. I highly recommend it.

Different from the previous ones that traveled to Hong Kong, this one is more interesting and fun, and makes you pee a lot. Although you know the jokes, it is really refreshing to experience different characters saying different things. You can still watch it now

First of all, this book is so hilarious that you can fall into a coma from laughing! This book is a good synthesis of characters from mainland dramas and Hong Kong dramas. Secondly, the plot twists are also very smooth, which is suitable for those who are not interested in reading! The second disadvantage is that the author updates too slowly [what]

The plot is good. Although I haven't watched many Hong Kong dramas and it's hard to compare, I like it very much! I rarely follow updates. Every time I open this book, I have to check to see if it has been updated. It is also very satisfying [like] [like]. I also wanted to find a novel with a similar plot with a female protagonist, but I couldn't find it. When there is no update, there is no meal replacement! Although I will listen to it from the beginning hahahaha ps: Fan Debiao took the script for the female lead, hahahahaha

As always, give yourself a five-star first!

I think Jiang Haishang, Mian Zhenghe, the tattooed man in Wolf Hunt, Fu Guang, Doctor Rabbit, Feng Yuxiu, the three brothers in The Fuse, the suit thug Yuan Hua in Oriental Condor, and Zhang Jin just walk sideways when they come out [sneaky laugh] [cool]

The subject matter is very good, but the only drawback is that some parts are too whimsical or too out-of-the-box. I could add a little more setting in the introduction of the book, "Inland vs. Hong Kong", to make it easier for people to accept.

Why is it only six points? This book is very well written. There are many famous scenes and there are funny elements. It's very funny [laughing and crying]

It's really good-looking. Each summoned character fits his or her own personality, and more different emotions are added. Now that I'm expecting the protagonist to be able to stand alone, it's best to give it up and wipe out all the underworld.

Dude, I don't have anything to say, but your book is definitely the only one on Tomato. As long as you write enough books and finish it, no one will be able to surpass you in writing books on your subject. And if there are fewer readers of this book in the future, it's because they are waiting for more chapters to be read. I hope you don't think that there will be no more chapters if there are fewer readers. This book is definitely the best one I have ever read. Do you have any recommendations for novels that include Liu Haizhu? I also want to write one.

Very nice. The rating of only 7.5 Is not scientific at all. Many people may not like soft protagonists. But the main character is pampered by his older brothers. How nice it is. I was a little uncomfortable at first. The male protagonists in Hong Kong drama series are all tough guys who can fight or are smart. The male protagonist is indeed ordinary but very charming. He is a stupid group favorite. Actually, I'm not stupid. I cried when I saw Qiandan die and the young master cried [almost crying] I didn't expect that one of my own would receive the box lunch [almost crying] The robots coming out later are a bit science fiction. I'm afraid that the world behind will directly become science fiction, which would be off topic. Hey, the author's update is very unstable in the end. I feel that it will be more painful to follow it [almost crying] Waiting for more updates

The writing is really good, and the character portrayal is also very thorough, especially Fan Debiao and Liu Haizhu, who really made the author's writing come alive. 5-Star recommendation

I just finished reading Chapter 46. For now, this book is good and worth reading.

It's something new and quite fun. It's more interesting than Qing Yishui's Qijing and Wang Jianjun's [Laughing and crying]

The characters of Brother Biao and Brother Hae Joo Chen are really well written and realistic. Especially Brother Biao, I like him so much. He is so kind and so cool [laughs][laughs]

It's so beautifully written, it's always interesting, I think it has some great potential, please write more and it's not enough.

It is indeed possible. The disadvantage is that the update is too slow and it is not enough to read. If the update is also so slow in the future, I will change it to one star.

Good looking, my brother Biao must be the most ruthless person in Northern Liaoning

It's more fun to watch if it's light-hearted and funny

This is the first time I read this type of novel in which the protagonist gets beaten. Unlike some novels where the protagonist is fake and never gets beaten even once from beginning to end.

Please give me more updates. To be honest, brothers enjoy watching this kind of thing. Hehehe😁(◍•ᴗ•◍)