Wan Ziqing’s Third Book

The writing is still very good, each character is quite three-dimensional, and I feel that the author is still very good at outlining the character's image in a few sentences, especially for characters with few roles, or even those who only appear in the mouth without appearing. But for me, there are still two small points. First, the protagonist feels full of redemption for the characters in the gray area. These characters do have various reasons and are forced to embark on this road voluntarily. There is nothing wrong with sympathizing with them. The author's character creation is indeed good, and I will sympathize with them. However, each of the protagonists wants to be rescued with a sense of mission, which is a bit wrong. But it is not that the Virgin is so serious. It feels more like a mockery of ordinary people who live seriously. The characters in the gray area are quickly grasped. After withdrawing money and retreating with the help of the protagonist, there is a very absurd feeling; the second is the awkwardness of the protagonist. Ayako has almost become the protagonist's chamber pot, and she throws it away after use, just like an emotional reset device. The rambling is mainly because I personally feel that it is a pity. Generally speaking, I am still looking forward to the author finishing it and seeing what the characters will be like in the future. Come on Since it is a short story, I have not said before that it is natural for short stories to have more intense and conflicting character plots. Because of the writing technique and the review of data, this novel is quite suitable for a short story. Also, I'm a little curious, where did the author learn his writing style? It feels like not only the background of the novel, but also the writing technique is quite Japanese.

How can I put it this way? To me, this doesn't look like a novel. It looks like something that happened in reality, and it's more interesting than a novel.

The author must be a woman, the description is quite delicate.

Wow, it's so good. I really enjoyed watching the sweet chapters between the hero and his girlfriend.

Very real and beautiful

How come there are so few people [what]

Hahaha, it looks good, and the author's cars always come unexpectedly.

Although the early plot is dull, it is fascinating. The slow pace is very comfortable to watch, and the emotional and meaty scenes are also very good. Later, the gangster plot is added, especially Ayako's emotional line is not handled well, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Overall, it is a very good novel. I think that too few people have read it, and it has been restricted 😂

The plot is quite bold and worth watching. Personally, I feel that this novel has half a foot in a dark room 🤦. Isn't the author afraid of being banned?

It looks good, but I hope the author can control it and be careful not to be blocked.