I opened a themed foot massage shop for women in a foreign country, and met all kinds of beauties with different professions and personalities. They were all women with stories...
Reader comments
The writing is still very good, each character is quite three-dimensional, and I feel that the author is still very good at outlining the character's image in a few sentences, especially for characters with few roles, or even those who only appear in the mouth without appearing.
But for me, there are still two small points. First, the protagonist feels full of redemption for the characters in the gray area. These characters do have various reasons and are forced to embark on this road voluntarily. There is nothing wrong with sympathizing with them. The author's character creation is indeed good, and I will sympathize with them. However, each of the protagonists wants to be rescued with a sense of mission, which is a bit wrong. But it is not that the Virgin is so serious. It feels more like a mockery of ordinary people who live seriously. The characters in the gray area are quickly grasped. After withdrawing money and retreating with the help of the protagonist, there is a very absurd feeling; the second is the awkwardness of the protagonist. Ayako has almost become the protagonist's chamber pot, and she throws it away after use, just like an emotional reset device.
The rambling is mainly because I personally feel that it is a pity. Generally speaking, I am still looking forward to the author finishing it and seeing what the characters will be like in the future. Come on
Since it is a short story, I have not said before that it is natural for short stories to have more intense and conflicting character plots. Because of the writing technique and the review of data, this novel is quite suitable for a short story. Also, I'm a little curious, where did the author learn his writing style? It feels like not only the background of the novel, but also the writing technique is quite Japanese.
Very real and beautiful
The author must be a woman, the description is quite delicate.
How can I put it this way? To me, this doesn't look like a novel. It looks like something that happened in reality, and it's more interesting than a novel.
Wow, it's so good. I really enjoyed watching the sweet chapters between the hero and his girlfriend.
How come there are so few people [what]
Hahaha, it looks good, and the author's cars always come unexpectedly.
Awesome, awesome, printed, printed
The plot is quite bold and worth watching. Personally, I feel that this novel has half a foot in a dark room [face covering]. Isn't the author afraid of being banned?
Although the early plot is dull, it is fascinating. The slow pace is very comfortable to watch, and the emotional and meaty scenes are also very good. Later, the gangster plot is added, especially Ayako's emotional line is not handled well, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Overall, it is a very good novel. I think that too few people have read it, and it has been restricted [laughing and crying]
It looks good, but I hope the author can control it and be careful not to be blocked.
It's very pretty, but why do I feel that Ayako is more suitable for men's pig feet, hahahaha
The writing style is delicate, and it feels good to read (it has a sad feeling)
(It's not a cool article, it must not be an abusive article, don't stab me)
First person, but the language is delicate
Okay, but it feels like it was written by a female author
The author's writing style is extremely delicate, and it is a potential masterpiece in 🍅. The author must keep writing it😭
Very exciting, fascinating, five stars!
Nothing to say 🐂
A statue of the Virgin should be erected for the protagonist!
Please insist on finishing this true and depressing novel
Good book, written naturally. I feel like I want to pursue it.
God, it looks good. Author, please take it easy [top post]
Did the author's sister come from another platform? I feel like the writing style is so skillful [Thinking]
The starting point is still
Strength. . . . . . . Jinna [hot] is very good! Very energetic!
Very good! Very energetic! Jinna [hot]
When I read the title, I thought it was just a side story, but I didn't expect the plot to be quite good.
Okay, the storyline is pretty good, but the ending is too sudden. I didn't get enough of it.
It looks good, I hope there are no eunuchs or dark rooms
Alas, from what many female customers have said about the social reality in Japan, it is very realistic, very helpless, and uncomfortable to watch. And this kind of thing does not only happen in Japan. In order to survive, people will always force themselves to fit into the dark prison of society.
Boundless and exotic, written with meticulous attention to detail.
The writing is still very good, each character is quite three-dimensional, and I feel that the author is still very good at outlining the character's image in a few sentences, especially for characters with few roles, or even those who only appear in the mouth without appearing. But for me, there are still two small points. First, the protagonist feels full of redemption for the characters in the gray area. These characters do have various reasons and are forced to embark on this road voluntarily. There is nothing wrong with sympathizing with them. The author's character creation is indeed good, and I will sympathize with them. However, each of the protagonists wants to be rescued with a sense of mission, which is a bit wrong. But it is not that the Virgin is so serious. It feels more like a mockery of ordinary people who live seriously. The characters in the gray area are quickly grasped. After withdrawing money and retreating with the help of the protagonist, there is a very absurd feeling; the second is the awkwardness of the protagonist. Ayako has almost become the protagonist's chamber pot, and she throws it away after use, just like an emotional reset device. The rambling is mainly because I personally feel that it is a pity. Generally speaking, I am still looking forward to the author finishing it and seeing what the characters will be like in the future. Come on Since it is a short story, I have not said before that it is natural for short stories to have more intense and conflicting character plots. Because of the writing technique and the review of data, this novel is quite suitable for a short story. Also, I'm a little curious, where did the author learn his writing style? It feels like not only the background of the novel, but also the writing technique is quite Japanese.
Very real and beautiful
The author must be a woman, the description is quite delicate.
How can I put it this way? To me, this doesn't look like a novel. It looks like something that happened in reality, and it's more interesting than a novel.
Wow, it's so good. I really enjoyed watching the sweet chapters between the hero and his girlfriend.
How come there are so few people [what]
Hahaha, it looks good, and the author's cars always come unexpectedly.
Awesome, awesome, printed, printed
The plot is quite bold and worth watching. Personally, I feel that this novel has half a foot in a dark room [face covering]. Isn't the author afraid of being banned?
Although the early plot is dull, it is fascinating. The slow pace is very comfortable to watch, and the emotional and meaty scenes are also very good. Later, the gangster plot is added, especially Ayako's emotional line is not handled well, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Overall, it is a very good novel. I think that too few people have read it, and it has been restricted [laughing and crying]
It looks good, but I hope the author can control it and be careful not to be blocked.
It's very pretty, but why do I feel that Ayako is more suitable for men's pig feet, hahahaha
The writing style is delicate, and it feels good to read (it has a sad feeling) (It's not a cool article, it must not be an abusive article, don't stab me)
First person, but the language is delicate
Okay, but it feels like it was written by a female author
The author's writing style is extremely delicate, and it is a potential masterpiece in 🍅. The author must keep writing it😭
Very exciting, fascinating, five stars!
Nothing to say 🐂
A statue of the Virgin should be erected for the protagonist!
Please insist on finishing this true and depressing novel
Good book, written naturally. I feel like I want to pursue it.
God, it looks good. Author, please take it easy [top post]
The author writes very well [like]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Did the author's sister come from another platform? I feel like the writing style is so skillful [Thinking] The starting point is still
Strength. . . . . . . Jinna [hot] is very good! Very energetic! Very good! Very energetic! Jinna [hot]
When I read the title, I thought it was just a side story, but I didn't expect the plot to be quite good.
Okay, the storyline is pretty good, but the ending is too sudden. I didn't get enough of it.
It looks good, I hope there are no eunuchs or dark rooms Alas, from what many female customers have said about the social reality in Japan, it is very realistic, very helpless, and uncomfortable to watch. And this kind of thing does not only happen in Japan. In order to survive, people will always force themselves to fit into the dark prison of society.
Boundless and exotic, written with meticulous attention to detail.