Pirates: Transformed into Gan Yu and Joined the Straw Hats

The subject matter is novel, the main character Gan Yu does not affect the main plot, it has no fighting power and collapses (a common problem in low-level articles about traveling through different worlds), and the integration is reasonable. I have read no less than 20 books written for my own pleasure and I am mentally crazy. For me, this book can be regarded as one of the top among fans.

The writing is quite interesting. Although it is generally about following the boat, the protagonist's participation is quite good. It seems that he is an invincible travel and follow the boat. It seems that Gan Yu is going to become the group's favorite. It is very rare for a new author to write so well.

The theme of children is quite new, and so far it's pretty good. One shortcoming in the early stage was that he doted on Luffy too much. What should I say? Anyway, I have the feeling of seeing a dog licking, and I am looking forward to the fight between Usopp and Luffy in the water city later, and how the protagonist will solve their problems.

To be honest, this is a good book. It perfectly connects Gan Yu and the Straw Hats. It focuses on daily and heartwarming plots, which makes people feel warm in their hearts. It just so happens that this article also reduces the length of descriptions of battles. Although it is small, it is very exciting. I really like this book.

It's a good book, fresh blood of pirate literature. I hope it can add more about the daily life of Gan Yu and his friends. Everyone knows the original work. Colleagues who like to read the changed plot will see that everyone can be more vivid in other fans. I personally like it very much when Gan Yu shows off his strength. I feel her cuteness, and I also like the posts about Gan Yu, Nami and the female characters in the back. This is what I want to read. I really don't recommend having a non-companion relationship with a male character. It's also good to be a single. Everyone is a good companion. I hope to see this book to the end. Come on.

Although the subject matter is popular, but it is really high-quality, I like to read mindless and refreshing articles. So far, Gan Yu is still pretty good at playing, I hope it doesn't weaken the game or else I won't be able to play anymore later on. But why did the protagonist accept her gender change so quickly? ! !

These early plots are pretty good, and I feel like the author's writing style has also improved, so keep up the good work. I would like to make some suggestions. I think the plot can be changed a little more, and more original plots will make it more interesting. Also, can Yamato be allowed on board later [eat melon]

Well, I originally thought it was a general follow-the-ship flow and wanted to read one or two chapters, but it turned out to be more interesting than expected. Although the characters felt a little bit incongruous, it felt okay. Gan Yu has both the original Gan Yu habits and different personal characteristics because he is a time traveler. Among the protagonists, Zoro is the most It is truly restored, and the interaction with the protagonist is also very interesting. I was arrested by the interesting and original plot and setting of Gan Yu and Zoro at the beginning. I don't know how many brothers and sisters think this way. The most important thing is that the protagonist is set like a secretary on the ship, and he will respect and obey Luffy's decision. This is very good , but I feel that Zoro's plot may change more after this setting. After all, the setting in this setting that Zoro becomes a pirate just for the protagonist is obviously different from the original work, and the relationship between Zoro and the protagonist on the ship should be the best. After all, the first person the protagonist sees in this world is Zoro. Coupled with the setting of Qilin Saliva, Zoro should not have to continue to recuperate and lie down for three months when he saves Ace later. I wonder if it will be possible to save people together later. It is a very interesting work. I hope the author will work hard and hope that this book will be liked by more people who like this type of book.

The writing is very good, and it is the culmination of a fast pace. Pirates have changed their sexual orientation recently, why have they suddenly changed so much? The fast-paced ones include this one, Tyrant, etc., The slow-paced ones include One Piece, etc. The spring for pirate fandom is here [Eating Melon]

Very good, it can be regarded as a masterpiece in "Feng Chuan Liu". Gan Yu is a time traveler and not the original Gan Yu, so the OOC is normal. I really like this type of book. The shortcomings are also very simple. It is updated twice a day, which is too slow. By the way, can you write one or two hundred chapters at a time?

Very pretty. Unlike other One Piece novels, this novel has its own characteristics. Moreover, the protagonist in the plot will not be superior and think that he is the best just because he is a time traveler. It feels like the world revolves around him and everything goes smoothly. But what does this novel say? The protagonist's combat prowess is a bit confusing. The fighting plot is a bit ordinary. The only remaining drawback is that updates are too slow. A five-star rating, I hope the author can write well and not lose his fighting power. Try to let the protagonist learn to be domineering. After all, I came to see One Piece, not Genshin Impact. The elements of Genshin are still in the protagonist. If others can learn it, then it feels like there is no need to watch One Piece. I read a lot of One Piece novels, like Naruto and so on. In the middle and late stages, all the protagonists knew ninjutsu, which gave me the feeling of reading a Naruto novel. The first 33 chapters are pretty good, but I don't know about the later ones. If the author can keep it up, I guess I can catch up to the ending.

In fact, I like this book quite a bit. The setting is very to my liking, but there are also some poisonous points. For example, when the protagonist tells the protagonist group about his own problems, I suggest telling the truth. There is no need to hide it. Although I think it's okay if I don't tell it, I don't know if the author will announce this issue later. After all, this issue will definitely go wrong. After all, this issue will always appear on the way to adventure in the future. I hope the author can make it up later, and the author can also add Gan Yu's character traits. The writing should be more prominent and restore the prototype. Of course, you can use it as you like. The best thing is to keep Gan Yu's character and add a little bit of different character, such as the occasional scheming, and add a little fun. In addition, on the issue of nanny writing, the author can improve his writing style. He can nanny, but not so outstanding. He can occasionally let the protagonist babysit for a little bit, and for sex, the author can add a little originality, and some personal settings, and satisfy Haimi's wishes.

The subject matter is novel and closely adheres to the theme. The main characters have distinct personalities, but the execution method is not very skillful. The plot is just like pushing the line, and it does not give people a feeling of ups and downs. The key battles are not tense enough, and daily life is not leisurely enough. I hope there can be improvements in the future, and I will give it five stars for encouragement [Note]

Surprisingly, it's okay, and there's also the transformation element that I prefer. I've read more than a dozen chapters so far, and I don't think there's anything bad about it. The only bad thing is that although the protagonist needs to follow the ship Luffy But in the plot, the protagonist and Zoro are already companions, and Luffy is later rescued. In this situation, the author's handling of Luffy is a bit "little licking" There's nothing else about it, it reads very smoothly. It feels very nonsensical like the original anime To be honest, there are so many Pirates fandoms in Tomato, but only a handful of them can write this feeling. From here, I can currently give it a five-star rating, which is regarded as a high-quality Pirates fanfic by Tomato.

Very well written so far. Very nice. In my personal opinion, one of the difficulties in fan fiction is understanding the characters of the original characters. What reactions and choices will the original characters make to the original plot? It won't affect those who haven't read the original work, but most people who read the fanfic must have seen the original work. If there are too many discrepancies and the character's personality is severely deformed, I won't be able to stand it.

It feels pretty good. The plot generally follows the original work, with few innovations.

It's very beautiful. Compared with other boats that require the crew to practice, which makes the atmosphere depressing and self-motivated, it looks much better. This feeling is very pirate-like.

Come on, with my critical eyes, this book is indeed good.

It's a normal light novel, with a slightly faster pace and no big poisonous points. If you haven't read the original manga, you may think the characters are too thin.

It's pretty good, the portrayal is pretty good, it's not OOC, and there's nothing obviously embarrassing about joining. I've read a lot of pirate books, and this one is very similar to the original, whether it's joining or spending time together in daily life. I highly recommend it, but the author has updated too little. When will I be able to see the war on top [I'm about to cry]

Yes, the introduction of the protagonist is not abrupt at all. The plot even brings back the joy of watching One Piece at the beginning of the year. The characters basically have no OOC and everyone gets along harmoniously. However, the protagonist feels a bit marginalized. I hope to add some highlight of the protagonist, inner thoughts and so on. I like the protagonist, but the protagonist has very few inner thoughts. What happened before the time travel, and why he can accept becoming a girl, I was particularly curious when watching it.

Overall, it's pretty good. At least there are basically no poisonous points. The author can just write in his own way. Although the pace is generally a bit fast, those who have watched One Piece can still follow the plot.

It's okay, the text is average but the creativity is good. It's attractive in the early stage. Let's look at the author's conception and writing style in the middle and later stages. (=^▽^=) . . . It's a bit intellectually depressing, but forget it, you can't ask for too much.

Give me a five-star review. By the way, I suddenly thought of a plot of Sword and Sword III. In the later part of the novel, Gan Yu and the Straw Hats temporarily lost contact. The villain boarded the Sonny and solemnly held a box. When Luffy opened it, what he saw was a pair of blood-stained horns with blue hair. At this time, it felt like the domineering domineering power could directly rush into the sun, and it didn't even For his expression to be too revealing, he must see it and his companions want to get closer to see what it is, but Luffy immediately closes the box and makes a not loud but very heavy sound. His face must be immediately shrouded in the shadow of the straw hat, his expression must change from relaxed to expressionless in an instant, and the veins in his hands holding the box must be cautious. Wow, this section is great. I admire my own imagination.

Some of the animation foreshadowing in this novel has been mentioned briefly. Some of the foreshadowing in the later animation is more important. I hope the author will not let the protagonist interfere with the famous scenes later (it is a bit unspecific, you can just watch it for fun)

Happy New Year, the update has been resumed, the author, please do your best [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Good subject matter, good book, but you have to think about how the protagonist's attack methods and combat power fit into the world of pirates

This book is good. Maybe it was a bit slow in the early stages, which resulted in fewer people watching it, but the quality is still good.

It's pretty good-looking. It doesn't have a setting where the battle power is broken. It's just a very warm and comfortable flow with the ship. The only shortcoming is that the update is too slow. In addition, I want to see the author make up for the regret (the ship spirit of the Meili is possessed by the mini Meili). As for the remaining regrets, I don't know how long the author can persist.

The writing is actually pretty good. It's normal for Ship Flow not to have major changes to the world line in the early stages. Speaking from an old bookworm's perspective, I don't think the author's writing is boring. But there is a big problem with this book, and that is that the author is slow to update.