Fated Heroine, Stop Chasing Me Before You Become the Protagonist

Positioned as food, although the upper limit is locked, the plot is smooth and the logic is reasonable. It is a work that can be enjoyed with a little brain. It will be good to keep it until the end. I have a few thoughts about the plot: 1. The protagonist's understanding and strategic talent are not obvious, especially the performance of existing cultivation and learning hidden skills and formations are contradictory. 2. It would be too deliberate for the heroine to rely on the system for her origin. If it is too much, she will get tired of it. 3. Although love all starts with curiosity, being stuck in inner connotations, and being loyal to character, the g-spots of different people and different statuses are not consistent. If the harem is full of girls in love, the path will be repeated. The above is my humble opinion, and I hope to get better.

I got it from a video recommendation and finished it in one night. I didn't have much of a plot problem and it was quite interesting. Please keep updating, author.

It's okay, although it's not particularly outstanding, but at least it's not toxic at the moment. It's just that the plot is very slow and not many people will read it. I don't know if the author can stick to it and finish it. If you have to give a cp to Mo Dao who can kill the people around you, then why did you arrange those female protagonists to do for the male protagonist? Mo Dao's positioning has been messed up and it's not worthy of my high score. It doesn't matter anyway, the author is determined to do it, so bye.

The plot is quite relaxed, with a bit of humor, which is great!

It's okay, but it's slow to heat up and not suitable for me. I saw a lot of comments saying that Piou Wuhen is poisonous. I think it's okay. It's just a small episode. If it's considered poisonous, you can only read the invincible novel. The protagonist starts the game in seconds.

Well, how should I put it? There is nothing wrong with the plot, there are no flaws, but the transition is too slow and the updates are too few. It could use more, so I give it a five-star to encourage it. If there are more in the future and there are no flaws, I will also reward it.

The overall article is well written. But I don't know if it's the chapters or other reasons, but the pace is getting faster and faster, and the ending is too sloppy. There was too little foreshadowing about Xuanchu, so when I saw the leader of the Qingfeng Sect, I was stunned for a moment, and I couldn't even remember who he was. Moreover, the protagonist's beautiful life is not written in terms of ordinary and extremely low-probability accidental "accidental success." It is about achieving a career with huge opportunities that transcend the "good life". This is still a cool novel, not a sequence of fantasy novels with a narrative rhythm. But I still give it 4 points, because for some reason, this work is more careful about the hearts, actions, and language of the protagonists' wives, as well as their pasts. It basically explains why each heroine fights in her heart. The level of detail is remarkable. In addition, I have different views on the ending. I think there should be a separation. That is, Mo Yu, the Taiyi version, and Mo Yu, the cultivator of immortality. The advantage of this approach is that if you write a new article later based on this world view, Mo Yu becoming Taiyi can better consolidate your world view and narrative style and become a "Mo Yu universe". And the immortal cultivator Mo Yu became the emperor, and from then on he lived a life without shame with the heroines, and he did not have as arduous responsibilities as Taiyi. This can be regarded as fulfilling the original intention of Mo Yu in this book, which is to live a happy "beautiful life". Of course, this is just my personal opinion. What the author can see is best. If you don't see it, it can be regarded as a souvenir for me after finishing a book.

"Very beautiful, highly recommended"[vomit][vomit][vomit]

It's super nice, but I don't seem to see [something] about the cultivation table. The emotions are a bit delicate.

In fact, it's okay, it's a medium-sized novel. In terms of the protagonist's character and actions, in fact, just think about his past life. Compared with the past life, as long as he lives a normal life now, it's already good.