Also known as: China Guardian Sequence F Inheriting the Past
[Urban cultivation + national destiny + ancient inheritance + no heroine + fantasy + dream + mind cultivation + reality]
Introduction: My name is Xia Xingnian. When I fall asleep every night, I enter a completely different dream life - becoming an emperor, a host, an engineer, a commoner... In addition to real life, each chapter opens up a new dream world. When the 100th dream ended, a cold reminder sounded in my mind: "Dip - Chinese Guardian Sequence F, the basic conditions for inheritance have been met."
Reader comments
The writing is there, but it was too confusing and I couldn't read it.
Don't quite understand what the main plot is? There is too much negative energy, and there is no joy at all.
To sort out the priorities again, how should I put it, we still have to tell the story well first.
Read more of Tomato's popular novels of the same type, not to imitate their writing style, but to learn how they attract readers. The rhythm of their plot is that you have to give some candy to beat the protagonist, right?
Also, a Tomato chapter usually has more than 2,000 words, and some are just over 1,000 words. Your chapter is too long and is not popular in Tomato.
I don't know what to say. The writing style is better than other novels, but the story is not told well.
It has to be cool. Tomato readers prefer to read cool articles. Don't like abusers. The protagonist must be capable rather than powerless.
That's reality, not fiction.
Also, the book cover is too flashy... To be honest, it's not as eye-catching as the black text on a white background. The title of the book is not eye-catching either. So no one saw it. The average age of Tomato readers is relatively young.
But the author can persist in writing so much, which is quite impressive! It shows that you are more diligent and self-disciplined. So five stars to the author.
The writing is still there. If you learn more about how to tell a story well, you may not be able to write explosive novels in the future.
The writing is there, but it was too confusing and I couldn't read it. Don't quite understand what the main plot is? There is too much negative energy, and there is no joy at all. To sort out the priorities again, how should I put it, we still have to tell the story well first. Read more of Tomato's popular novels of the same type, not to imitate their writing style, but to learn how they attract readers. The rhythm of their plot is that you have to give some candy to beat the protagonist, right? Also, a Tomato chapter usually has more than 2,000 words, and some are just over 1,000 words. Your chapter is too long and is not popular in Tomato. I don't know what to say. The writing style is better than other novels, but the story is not told well. It has to be cool. Tomato readers prefer to read cool articles. Don't like abusers. The protagonist must be capable rather than powerless. That's reality, not fiction. Also, the book cover is too flashy... To be honest, it's not as eye-catching as the black text on a white background. The title of the book is not eye-catching either. So no one saw it. The average age of Tomato readers is relatively young. But the author can persist in writing so much, which is quite impressive! It shows that you are more diligent and self-disciplined. So five stars to the author. The writing is still there. If you learn more about how to tell a story well, you may not be able to write explosive novels in the future.