The heretic who did not belong to this world lived in confusion until he met the girl. The two met during a chase. When he was lost, he met the same confused girl. This was a journey without a goal.
Reader comments
How should I put it, it's okay, but there are problems in many places. The big problem is that the emotional aspect is still too rough. The small problem is that many parts are not careful and normal enough, and some of the sentences do not make sense.
But it's still okay. As a newcomer, this is a very good first work. I will continue to pursue it [Thoughts]
It's really good and beautiful. Thank you to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]
Overall, this book is quite passable. I rate it five stars just to encourage you. Come on, I hope you write better and better.
How should I put it, it's okay, but there are problems in many places. The big problem is that the emotional aspect is still too rough. The small problem is that many parts are not careful and normal enough, and some of the sentences do not make sense. But it's still okay. As a newcomer, this is a very good first work. I will continue to pursue it [Thoughts]
It's really good and beautiful. Thank you to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]
Overall, this book is quite passable. I rate it five stars just to encourage you. Come on, I hope you write better and better.