HP: What? Am I Not a Player?

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Around Chapter 50, I don't feel that the heroine is like an emperor for the time being. She is still arranged by the plot to follow what many people say and do. Compared with the active strategy, it has become a passive strategy➕It's just other people's imagination. There is no feeling of being unbridled and arbitrary. Let's wait and see. The mechanism of friendship is destined to passively or actively obey others. It seems to follow one's will, but in fact it is arranged by the plot to obey the words and deeds of the other party. With this setting, it will not give readers a sense of satisfaction, and it will not be a good match for the emperor. It should be read as an ordinary strategy article.

I like another one by the author better. I don't really like the character design of the heroine in this book. I feel like it's just impressive in words, but in reality it's frustrating. Because of the heroine's strong words and her gamer mentality, we would expect her not to suffer. However, it was not the case. The heroine was very aggrieved in front of her family and her brother, especially when the heroine robbed her brother twice to get the living expenses. She was already very aggrieved. The first time she didn't know the school rules, she was almost tricked by Lucius. The second time, Regulus kicked the heroine and attacked the heroine. The heroine was unable to fight back, which made her head hurt. Would it be better to put on the original character filter and only look at the emotional lines?

Hey hey hey, seeing now, I can't control the corners of my mouth [adoration][adoration][adoration] Da Da's writing style is still as humorous and witty as ever. After Merlin, Allegra is my new baby sister [blowing kiss] Alai and Rael ("Did you understand?") Vividly interpreted what it means to be mindless and unhappy hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Teacher, I'm here to support the new book. [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] must be five stars. (The plot will be covered later) Our Alai is really cute. The heroine of this book is a pureblood who does not discriminate against Muggles. It is really good. At present, everyone is very cute. A group of children. James who is currently appearing is as cute as ever, and he also helps Alai buy books. You are a good boy. In Alai's heart, he is a boss, hahahaha. Currently, Sirius is an irritable little kid. He is in a similar situation to Alai, so he is very friendly at the moment. In Gouzi's book, try to be more angry and stop making the heroine angry all the time.，，[]ALL[][][]

It's tied, so let's revise the review and write a little more. It is currently updated to second grade. In fact, the first and second grades of many HP articles make people feel that they are following a process and the writing is a bit boring. But the author's writing makes people feel that it is very unique and cute. It's just that when everyone, especially the heroine, has no gender awareness and is so clingy to everyone, the kids are so cute🥺especially the ones posted back and forth with James Siris, it's so cute and I like it so much ww Then, it is really obvious whether the author is seriously shaping the heroine. The heroine in this book feels so alive, and she has many advantages and disadvantages. She is a really cute and lively baby. After all, how can a teenage girl have so many perfect and dummy-like personalities? And then there is the fact that I really like the original generation. I like basically all the characters. The author has created them really well [crying]. Everyone is very three-dimensional. Author, you are really my favorite hp author. The last one was particularly good, and then I discovered the new one and tied it within a day. I like you so much. Goddess, never leave me [almost crying]

Goddess, I will always follow you! ! ! ! Although only 10 chapters have been updated, the characters' personalities have already begun to emerge. Alai is a good baby who is very good at discovering the strengths of others. She is really straightforward and cute. Although she calls herself a gamer, she still respects the world. Of course, she also has her own shortcomings, she is a bit slow, but she is also super cute (by the way, the heroines in the author's three articles all have a slow characteristic✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿)) And what's different from the previous chapter is that the way Alai gets along with Sirius, who is always furious, has changed a lot. Both of them are traitors to pure-blood families. And this time, the person who fell in love with the heroine at first sight was Remus (perhaps to make up for the fact that Remus's role in the previous article was not as good as that of James and Sirius?) The troublesome thing is that Alai has to run into the arrogant James again. I am very curious about what kind of conflicts will happen between them this time, how they will reconcile, and how they will fight against Voldemort... (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) In fact, before this article was written, I had been a little worried that the author would make the story the same and boring because he wrote about the same theme, the same era, and the same few characters. But judging from these latest chapters, I don't have to worry at all! I will always follow you, my lord! ! ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

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Everything this teacher writes is super beautiful! After reading Merlin, I was pleasantly surprised to find that there is a second book written by the teacher! The writing is very good! The plot is very smooth and there is no situation that makes me embarrassed all of a sudden. The teacher's James is very cute www

Needless to say, I wrote HP fanfic yyds. The writing is very smooth and natural. I am still good at writing cute Hogwarts daily life, and the plot is also very natural. Starting from the first grade, I don't think the characters are OOC but very cute and natural [This is really It's so important. Who knows how many stories I've read about first graders who already behave like greasy adults? James is still a cute puppy. Sirius and Rael are very different from the previous article and very charming. Especially Rael and the heroine's happy enemies are very funny every day! And the friendship between the heroine and her same-sex friends is also written more richly. Looking forward to the next story very much! Secondly, let me refute some comments criticizing the portrayal of the heroine. The heroine of this article is that kind of naughty and very cute little girl [similar to Big]. We can't call her aggrieved because she suffered a little loss in the early stage (for example, she didn't understand the school rules in the early stage and was tricked by cunning seniors and brothers), and I don't feel aggrieved either. On the contrary, this can make the heroine better. If a 12-year-old girl just enters school and plays with all the characters at the palm of her hand, it will be a real failure in shaping. This cannot be said to be a cool novel but a "lack of logic". Also, when will my wife open a new fan group? I missed it again. It's so heartbreaking [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's very good-looking, and the heroine has a very cute personality. Because I read this one directly after finishing the last one, I am very happy that Alai and Snape's compatibility is okay. Before, it almost gave me psychological shadow. It was so ugly that I kept turning the pages like crazy [face covering] From what I can tell, the one I have the most favorable impressions of the heroine right now is Snape. He had two lines in the early stages, and it was really funny to love and hate him [facepalm] I just finished watching and there is a big operation behind him, so I won't go into details for fear of spoilers. I think it's quite sweet. James is just a normal little sunshine, and he still gets along well with the heroine. There's nothing to say about it. He can easily establish good relationships with people as long as he thinks about it, but he hasn't figured it out yet. Little Barty is also very good, but my fiancé is amazing [get it] Sirius's starting line is not very good, but I believe he will come from behind, but I am negative about whether he can beat James [get it] Lime's personality is too gentle, and he doesn't compete with his inner taste, but it seems like he's getting the hang of it? At least he can run faster than someone who is not enlightened [eating melon] Actually, it's a bit nice that my brother is a girl lover, but I haven't seen any tendency to have orthopedic lines for the time being. It should be that he doesn't have orthopedic lines. It's a pity [eating melon] Oh, little Barty, you really have a great advantage! ! ! I just said that my fiancé's status can't be played without cutting it off? Sure enough, it was shaved off [crying]

It looks good, and the younger sister is very cute. She looks like a little idiot sometimes, but she is very natural and has a good fishing style. It's very sweet. This book of Sirius takes a different route. The characters of the trio are different from the previous one. They look very good, but there are too few updates to make them look good. There is no deputy cp yet. It feels like Barty Jr. Will do some bad things. I don't know if it's a misunderstanding. But that idiot brother is so funny, just like that kind of male chauvinist guy. I forgot when I watched it, so I'll watch it again.

I really, really like Merlin! ! From junior high school to high school, I have reread it several times. I also love this book very much. The author is really good at writing, and his attitude is very rigorous and serious. The characters are very full, and every couple is very good😭😭How can there be such a perfect person and such a perfect book?

It's good-looking, from another HP book. The heroine is so good, and I also saw another side of the conflict between Petunia, Lily and Sif. It's no longer one-sided, and every character is very vivid. The outlaw gangster Zhan Sanlisi and Ah Wu, hahahahaha! So interesting

Oh my god, why is it so beautiful! ! I didn't know it suited my taste so well before I clicked in! I love the heroine's character so much! I love daily life on campus so much! Looking forward to becoming more and more emperor in the future! It should be centered on the heroine! He is the group favorite and the group tyrant! I hope it will always be this tone and never become heavier! !

Ah, I just realized that I've been watching it for so long and I haven't commented on it yet. It must be given a five-star rating. I also finished reading the teacher's last book. Merlin is really good-looking, and Merlin has a very good character. Then when I read this book, Alai's character is really, really good. Anyway, it is beyond my XP. Then I feel that the teacher thinks that all the characters basically have no bad character design, especially Merlin's character, which is completely the same. Not at all, and my writing here is really good. The emotional line between Alai and James is also very good, but I always feel a bit like the kind of happy enemies or the kind of bad friends, and I hope to see the emotional line sooner🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻In the end, the teacher's writing is really good

It's good to read. I got it from Merlin. It's really well written. I've read a lot of HP articles and I think this is the best one written by the author. [Love] [Love] [Love]

I will always follow the author Dada, because Dada has revised the original work🥺🥺🥺because the sparkling and vivid characters written by Dada fall in love with James and Sirius, and the other characters are also very three-dimensional. I really like it. There is a lot of food outside the book. . I love the younger sisters in both books, and Merlin is the authoritative one. This treasure is so cute. In short, follow me unconditionally, please don't collapse your house😭😭😭 New book with five-star support❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ The younger sister is like a succubus, and the interactions inside are so cute. It's just a bunch of kids, I couldn't help but laugh 😊 I am firmly all in! My little sister deserves everything!

I feel like I have been introducing this game to the first grade before. The pace is a bit slow and the heroine's personality is not very normal. It feels very awkward. But after watching it, I became addicted. The more I watch, the better. The pace is very comfortable. There is not a chapter that is nonsense. It may be related to the author's foreshadowing in the early stage. The heroine has also grown up. The unreasonable things before are actually foreshadowing. It is so good. It has already tied up. I am ready to read another one by the author.

Very novel settings, the options are like playing orange light, interesting. The heroine is a very good sister! The author's writing is as good as ever👍(◦˙▽˙◦)

I just finished recommending the book and then I remembered that I haven't reviewed it yet [exploration] The protagonist, Alai, is a little girl who lacks common sense. She is a pure-blooded Gryffindor. She had been sick before traveling through time, so she stayed in the ward all day and lacked a lot of common sense. Alai has always thought that he has entered the game, and there is a guide system that prompts the favorability. There are a little plot prompts but very little! It does not affect reading. The main plot is a short story between the pure-blood traitor Allegra and F3. Allegra explores his daily life bit by bit, which is very heartwarming and funny! The writing is still delicate and distinctive, I really recommend it.

My wife likes this book. The heroine is so cute and cute. I like this kind of real child. Lily here is also a little different from the previous book. She is also super cute. I like to see a group of cute things posted. When will the goddess publish a single book for James? James written by the goddess is so cute [Adoration][Adoration]

The plot of this book mainly revolves around the heroine, Sirius and James. The heroine is quite cute, and the male guests are not annoying either. Instead, they are often persecuted by the heroine, even though they actually enjoy it, right? But the emotional drama progressed too slowly. And does my brother really dislike the heroine? It would have been very sad to have no orthopedics... It's a pity that Lucius didn't split the official match. There is not much description of the heroine's appearance. She has black hair and green eyes, and Lily is still the school beauty. Tied! It's rare that I have the patience to read such a long article. There is no abuse in the whole article. It is just the relaxed and funny daily life of the group favorite Alai at Hogwarts. The emotional drama finally made progress in the fourth grade. He and James are really sweet. They are two big boys with the same brain circuit. He and Sirius are also doting on each other, they are almost like daddies. Remus, this character and the heroine are so bland. As I watched later, I became more and more fond of watching the happy enemy Regulus, and the cold-faced underwear-washing Severus appeared. Seeing them being enslaved and persecuted by the mistress, they were so angry that they still couldn't control their love. In the end, they still worked hard without complaining. They are really good people. Who knows? ! ! After all, the sparks created by the straight-ball and the tsundere, the sunny and cheerful girl and the dank male ghost are exciting. They are angry, loving and twisted, unconsciously taming disobedient wild dogs and so on. . . They even fell in love so much that the heroine thought they were enemies and didn't even understand what it meant to like him, hehehe. At first I couldn't get along with Severus, because I never knew whether he liked Lily or the heroine, and I always felt a little uncomfortable with it. But if you didn't like it before, why did you just reply with a sullen face when the heroine hit or scolded you, and was still being bossed around honestly? I don't know, I thought the heroine had some leverage. I probably fell in love completely when they were watching the stars on the rooftop together. I won't say much more about little Barty, just go and be tortured. The author also mentioned in a paragraph before that he and Riddle also have a relationship line. I am looking forward to it. I feel that Alai's invisible friend in his previous life was him. I wonder if file loading will happen in the future? I haven't read the file yet.

The new work of the goddess is still as good as ever. Although it is very short now, the characters are super attractive~(¯▽¯~)❤️! ! !

The plot is very smooth, the protagonist's character is interesting, and the plot is quite reasonable. It tied the game in two days. It is as humorous as ever. I followed Merlin from above. I can only say that Teacher Bean is still too authoritative. I will always follow Teacher Bean, no matter whether I am poor or rich.

Ah, the writing style of the boss is really very good. The character descriptions are vivid and are basically based on their original logical thinking. The language and writing style are also well-founded. The daily descriptions are not boring and very interesting. I want to read it and keep reading it. I have been reading the Merlin book recently. I used the backup machine at night and basically finished reading this one. You really read it, it looks good, it looks good, it is not very OC, it is logical, and the writing is good. The plot is not crooked, it makes me see people who seem to be alive, rather than formulaic and rigid characters. It's really hard to find articles nowadays. My wife's article is simply shocking and delicious, shocking and delicious, shocking and delicious Happy New Year, boss! Good work! In good health! May all go well with you! Become a Jinfan writer (there is still one day to update 999 chapters, I am still dreaming)

I have read half of the last one and half of this one. I really like the grasp of each character's personality and the daily life that develops due to the collision of their three perspectives and personalities. Everyone's words are interesting and cute. The following are some of the protagonist's random thoughts. Due to personal reading preference, it is more like reading notes and ignoring them. Maybe because it is a derivative work, the heroine has a strong sense of life but not that much. Although she is also a super fun baby, the heroine's understanding of the world is somewhere between the player and the reality. She is neither like a player, nor can she see the real state, which is very inferior. And I don't know why I always feel that it is easy to use the knife, which makes me feel very insecure (so the author's writing is really good, and I feel uncomfortable and sincere). Each character has a lot of plots and shaping. Sometimes the heroine seems to accompany a certain character to perform a certain trait or aspect of his personality to play the opposite role. In other words, sometimes the growth line and personality of the supporting characters are richer for the readers, but the growth and richness of the protagonist have not kept up. They are still the original way of thinking and the original cognition, which makes me feel a bit pity. The portraits of other characters were basically sketched before opening this book, but the protagonist is the character that really made me get to know her. Although what everyone wants to see is the plot where she collides with other characters and the world view, I still want the protagonist's formal and exclusive personal monologue. The protagonist does not have a God's perspective, and many of the twists and turns behind the scenes are only for the reader to see, but not for her to notice. Although this makes me feel that the heroine is more grounded in the world view, I have read novels. The protagonist is the reader's closest anchor when reading the story. When I know more about other characters than the protagonist, when I feel that the pure description of the protagonist's joys, sorrows and joys allows the protagonist to play When the charm and the stage of using subjective initiative to promote the development of the story are not enough, I will get a little tired of watching it. I start to feel that the dialogue and psychological description are too dense and dense, like the plot of the mission. Why haven't the serious heroine and them had a real plot to break the barrier and have a real heart-to-heart relationship? Maybe it's because I'm more accustomed to watching emotionally sensitive and at ease types, but the protagonist's situation made me uneasy.

This is so natural! I will support our Alai to become the King of Hogwarts! Hehe, Alai is cute🥰, it's only human nature to like our Alai! The author is still as rigorous and serious as ever. We are lucky to have you as HP fans! ! Great, needless to say!

Explosive 💥It's so beautiful, I love the heroine's character so much, she's so cute and fun, this is the best heroine I've seen in the series that plays well with James Potter, it's really rare to see such a fun and interesting heroine

Not much to say, okay, you can see it with your eyes, give it a five-star rating