A Dazzling and Repressed Heroine? This Is a Good Thing

I'd give it 4 and a half stars. Overall it's good, but the plot needs polishing. Some places are a bit abrupt and don't have a very natural and coherent feeling. But I still support it. The writing is pretty good.

It's okay. It's good to watch it without thinking.

Come on author, it's very interesting

New but not like a newbie [smile]

It's okay, it looks pretty [shy]

Much beyond my expectation, very exciting

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

According to my many years of reading experience, this book is about 9.23, Depending on whether the plot is grand or not. It's not very good…the plot setting is not quite in place, but it's still watchable

The rhythm is comfortable, the plot is good, and the characters are not too bad. It's really good-looking [please update]

Fortunately, it is a romance novel with a Western fantasy worldview. If we want to talk about shortcomings, the force is not strong enough)

Boys swimming dipper

It's a little sloppy in some places, but overall it's okay. Five stars for you.

So far it's pretty good, but the main character's personality is a bit off. Can the protagonist be made more mature? [Chigua]

The writing is pretty good so far, at least it doesn't have any big bad points.

Damn, it's kind of pretty. Guys, the author's writing is very good.

A very nice novel

How can I put it this way? The author's writing is good and the content is also very good. However, the link to the story needs to be changed.

The writing is good, but there are too many adjectives. Overall it's pretty good, I'm looking forward to it.