Am I a Succubus in Pokémon?

This book is quite amazing. I don't think it has any bad points. I read it with gusto. There are no big problems in my daily life. The heroine's character is also very consistent with the original book. I think it is very good. There is no brainless slap in the face. The villain also has a brain. The content is vivid, the images are interesting, the structure is clear, the sense of logic is clear, rhetorical techniques and four-character words are included, and the content goes straight to the topic. The fighting content is vivid and vivid, perfectly highlighting a gunpowder situation. At the same time, each character has a distinct personality. The settings are rich and interesting, and the update speed is extremely fast. I would give it a 7 out of 5 points. Come on, author, it's not enough!

It looks good ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ, but I feel that the final copy described in the article is more difficult than what is described in the introduction. The tone must be cheerful [crying] Never go towards the pain in the later stage [crying] Since we have to fight the blackened mythical beast in the end, will there be any conquering of the mythical beast ahead? It's not like the mythical beast will turn black first and then start to conquer the mythical beast [crying]

How can I put it, the description is too detailed, and the author's writing skills are very good, but it is not good if you describe too much in the novel. It takes up too much space, which leads to the rewriting of some things becoming smaller. I hope it will be changed later

Why does the male protagonist give me the feeling that he has already experienced a lifetime in the Pokémon world, and has no desire to travel back in time? He is always calm and calm. The elf of the male protagonist Bao seems to be a former partner. I feel that the male protagonist created the system by himself, or Arceus created it for him and asked him to take another route and change some things.

It's to my liking, but objectively it's also very good. The content is different from the elf novels I've read before. In short, I highly recommend it. Thank you very much for the author٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's very interesting and has its own characteristics. I'm looking forward to how the author will write about the world view later on. There are a lot of foreshadowings that I have to wait for. Finally, I hope the author can tell the level of the elves in a long paragraph. Even if you know that each elf has special places, you still need the level to see the general strength.

It's really Tai Chi Bahuang [smile] [smile] [smile], before I block more updates, it's so good that kids will love to watch it [smile] [smile] [smile]

I personally think this is one of the best Pokémon fan fictions I've ever read. Whether it's fighting or the emotions with the heroines, they are all very delicate and natural. It's really beautiful, I highly recommend it. And why are good books not popular? !

There are only about 5 female protagonists. Will Joey eat it?

I would like to ask first whether this book will assign a mythical beast to the protagonist?

Beautiful, no need to say more

Very nice book

Very beautiful, very beautiful, worth seeing, very beautiful (I have no other words, I can only say beautiful.)

Personally, I think it's very interesting. The description of the emotional lines with the heroines and the emotions of the elves are very good. It's best not to have a sad ending. I hope it can end normally. Come on author @

The writing is very delicate and the description is very good and very good at stimulating emotions.

The author has never seen Pokémon. I still forgot, there is a huge rock snake in the back mountain of Zhenxin Town, but I haven't caught it yet

Why doesn't anyone watch it? The description is quite melancholy and the plot is good.

Why is [what] not effeminate?

It's okay. The heroine is very affectionate towards Jingling. She just needs more interaction with her energy training.

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Are there any linked characters in the back?