The Immortal Girl Signs In to Twilight from the Start!

I was attracted to the parting clan of "Morning Flowers and Evening Oaths", but the author gave me a big blow. First, the protagonist's attitude is too baffling and unpredictable. I don't quite understand the author's attitude towards the Cullen family. He traveled through time and space and was injured during the Empire's killings, and was taken in by Carlisle. He promised to accept him as his family, but his attitude ranged from curious and comforting to wanting to scare them. Have you really thought about the character of the protagonist? Many of them are contradictory, which made me really uncomfortable. The heroine acquiesced and even promoted the school's description of his divine surname and name, but it conflicted with her initial personality. You shaped her into a cold person, but you also described his softness and sensibility in the article, but you failed to grasp the change. Second, the description of the protagonist's character and abilities. It creates the protagonist's power "but a kind of pure natural power as hot as the sun and as vast as the deep sea!", But the behavior of being captured by James and his group is not like it. You gave the heroine a role that is too old and vast, and even her personality is described in this way, but you gave her a powerlessness and weakness. Too much effort. Since it is growing gradually, why should it be great at the beginning?

The more I watch, the more boring I become

How to say it? There are too many adjectives, which affects my reading. There are only a few sentences in the content, and the rest are all exaggerated adjectives. But the story line is really good.