Baby, You Will Be Punished for Doing This

The one star missing is because there are quite a few repeated sentences, but I really like the two-male protagonists with admonitions. I really enjoyed reading it last night. I hope you can work hard, Rolls, and you must also have admonitions when writing new stories. It's delicious, delicious, delicious [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS] Ahhhhhhhhh [KISS][KISS][KISS]

The author still has a lot of room for improvement in his writing style. The content of the article is a bit repetitive. For example, what the characters say and the content of the chapters are emphasized many times will appear a bit abrupt and the plot content is a bit convoluted. However, the core idea of ​​the whole story is quite attractive. I can also feel the sincerity of the author in wanting to write the story well. It can be seen that the author is very careful. I hope the author will not be discouraged and continue to polish it. I look forward to seeing your more and more mature works in the future.

Very nice, the type I like

I highly recommend this book. Orthopedics is great! The early stage was calm and uneventful (except for the part where Ning Changting punished Meng Yu'an). Later, fierce events unfolded because of Meng Yu'an's identity and a series of family issues. I also really like the overall style! The author is also very disrespectful!

It's very beautiful. It's my favorite novel so far.

Very beautiful, highly recommended

Okay, okay, not bad

Four points for the extra and one point for the main text. There are too many repeated clues in the main text, and there is a suspicion that the word count is crammed. It is a short story, but the story idea is still very good. Come on [Like][Like][Like]

It's so beautiful. I hope there will be another one of the same type. The author really really likes this book. Don't delete the content if it becomes popular. If you really want to delete it, can you fill in the deleted content in the comment area where it was deleted? It's really beautiful. Please, it's super nice. Super nice. I like it.

Good-looking, super good-looking

It's great, will there be any extras?

How can I put it this way? There are a lot of repetitive parts in this book, but the plot is good and the character settings are okay. Summary: Overall this book is okay, highly recommended!

Nice! ! ! I like the setting of the characters, and I hope the author can write another book of the same type [shy]

Yeah, don't make this book too popular, otherwise some of it will be deleted.

Looks good, looks good, looks good.

I like it very much. Very beautiful.

Super beautiful, I like it so much

Super, super pretty

Okay, okay, very beautiful😊

Except for repeated sentences, everything else is fine [I understand]

This is super pretty

Super beautiful, the author's writing is very good

I don't know, but I just like watching this kind of thing.

Very nice, but there are a lot of repetitions

There are a lot of repetitions, but otherwise it's great.

Although it is harsh, it feels quite warm

2025.11.9~Except for the part about identity in Chapter 17.18, Which is a bit confusing, everything else is pretty good~

I love the characters of these two male protagonists so much. I love them so much. I will definitely read them carefully.

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking, so good-looking

Very beautiful, stern and gentle coexist