Everyone said that Lu Xun, the chief seal of the Supervisor of Ceremonies, was a man-eating evil spirit, a murderer's knife, and the emperor's dog.
Seeing the criss-crossed whip marks hidden under the scarlet python robe, you know his unspeakable past
When we first met him, he was covered in blood and fierce and ferocious.
When we met again, he was dressed in rich clothes and looked outstanding.
On a rainy night, when I approached him, he sternly said: "Get away"
When he was injured and treated, he trembled and said: "Dirty"
The new emperor succeeded to the throne and was in deep quagmire. He ordered people to send me out of the palace to ensure that I had no worries about food and clothing.
"You came through the abyss and became my light in the eternal night."
——The alluring queen × the broken power official, the redemption epic of light and darkness
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Reader comments
Five stars. Newbie, new article, it's so well written, and it's great to be able to keep writing it and never give up. The introduction made me very happy, it's a redemption story about an abusive male protagonist. I have a little feeling to share with you: if there are too many exclamation marks, it will feel a little tight. If you have the opportunity to adjust it, it may be more relaxed? I found another nice book, happy plus one
Ignoring the confusion of country names and people's names in the first half, it's still okay to just look at the plot, although it's a bit exaggerated. The male protagonist couldn't be more miserable. But after I saw the hero rescued and returned to China, I suddenly felt that the writing became much smoother, and my heart suddenly felt at ease. The readers found it warm and sweet but not greasy. What a great heroine!
Looks great, recommend it to everyone!
I have read both of the author's two books. They are both super, super good. Yiyang and Shen Jie are also 99
Five stars. Newbie, new article, it's so well written, and it's great to be able to keep writing it and never give up. The introduction made me very happy, it's a redemption story about an abusive male protagonist. I have a little feeling to share with you: if there are too many exclamation marks, it will feel a little tight. If you have the opportunity to adjust it, it may be more relaxed? I found another nice book, happy plus one
Ignoring the confusion of country names and people's names in the first half, it's still okay to just look at the plot, although it's a bit exaggerated. The male protagonist couldn't be more miserable. But after I saw the hero rescued and returned to China, I suddenly felt that the writing became much smoother, and my heart suddenly felt at ease. The readers found it warm and sweet but not greasy. What a great heroine!
Looks great, recommend it to everyone!
I have read both of the author's two books. They are both super, super good. Yiyang and Shen Jie are also 99
The author's writing style is very good