Bewitching Moon, Startling An

Five stars. Newbie, new article, it's so well written, and it's great to be able to keep writing it and never give up. The introduction made me very happy, it's a redemption story about an abusive male protagonist. I have a little feeling to share with you: if there are too many exclamation marks, it will feel a little tight. If you have the opportunity to adjust it, it may be more relaxed? I found another nice book, happy plus one

Ignoring the confusion of country names and people's names in the first half, it's still okay to just look at the plot, although it's a bit exaggerated. The male protagonist couldn't be more miserable. But after I saw the hero rescued and returned to China, I suddenly felt that the writing became much smoother, and my heart suddenly felt at ease. The readers found it warm and sweet but not greasy. What a great heroine!

I have read both of the author's two books. They are both super, super good. Yiyang and Shen Jie are also 99

Looks great, recommend it to everyone!

The author's writing style is very good