One Piece: My Zombie Sailing Diary

It's very interesting, the author's novel setting, adding zombies, and cleverly finding the balance point. The most important thing is that the protagonist looks like a protagonist, and at the same time, the original protagonist group is not overshadowed by the protagonist's light. It's more like a person who really integrates into the pirate group in the world of pirates. Unlike other fan fiction, the author gave the protagonist too many tricks, causing Luffy to become a charm.

As a novel without a female protagonist, the interaction with Nami really made me feel safe 😢. Come on, author, it's much better than the previous one, it's a great improvement, it seems that it has accumulated a lot of experience. You can write with a little more freedom. Although you are following the boat, it is okay for the plot to change reasonably due to the appearance of the protagonist. It's a big taboo to forcefully bring the plot back to the original line (it doesn't mean that you have this problem now).

The writing is quite good. New characters have been added to the original framework to make the original story new. The appearance of the protagonist has neither overshadowed the original character nor weakened the existence of the original character. It has not become transparent and has a moderate sense of presence. If the author feels that he has enough writing skills, he can try to create a new story.

How should I put it? After reading dozens of chapters, I can tell that the author is a new author. The plot moves too quickly. The broad outline is still okay, but there are no descriptive details, but it is still interesting. I hope the writing style can be more refined in the future. I still feel that the pace is too fast, but there is nothing poisonous about it. The fruit's ability is actually of the natural type, but its function is more like the superhuman type. In fact, you don't have to rely on the natural type. If you say it is a fantasy beast type, I will recognize the human fruit zombie type. I have to say it is a natural type.

Not vivid, average, but able to satisfy the taste of most sea fans If you are just doing it for love, then I won't say it, but if you want to make money, you have to make the characters more vivid. Text and animation are incomparable. You have to make their characteristics more prominent in order to achieve the picture of animation [code hold]

I feel that the author has downplayed the dangers of zombies. After all, in addition to being contagious, the zombie crisis is also highly aggressive and fatal. However, the author seems to have only controlled the contagion. Everything else looks great. Good luck, author.

The writing is really nice, and the author's character design is also very good. I'm just curious about what Devil Fruit the protagonist ate. I searched 181 Devil Fruits online and couldn't find any.

Leave a comment. I'm afraid I'm going to die. I haven't read such a good story about a boat in a long time. I hope the author can retain the character and characteristics of the protagonist and don't overdo it. Speaking of which, zombies probably don't have the concept of lifespan. I feel like there can be a discussion of lifespan at the end [laughing]

Sure. The logic is smooth, and the characters are well drawn. It is better than most of the writings of Kuaifanyu, and the dialogues are not rigid. I hope the author can stick to writing the ending. After all, most Kuaifanyu are discontinued, with one or two discontinued. The early data is not good, and the longer the discontinuation is, the higher it will be above 9.0.

I haven't finished reading it yet. Let me first mention my personal feeling. It's okay if you don't care about the author. (This tone is not to find fault) Although he is a zombie, he rarely bites people in person. Although he is a zombie, he only relies on his Devil Fruit ability to infect people. After that, he looked like a human who had eaten a Devil Fruit, except for his abnormal neck. If you become completely human, you will lose a lot of interest (in my personal opinion, this does not represent everyone)