One Piece: Becoming a Zombie Crew on the Straw Hat Ship

It's very interesting, the author's novel setting, adding zombies, and cleverly finding the balance point. The most important thing is that the protagonist looks like a protagonist, and at the same time, the original protagonist group is not overshadowed by the protagonist's light. It's more like a person who really integrates into the pirate group in the world of pirates. Unlike other fan fiction, the author gave the protagonist too many tricks, causing Luffy to become a charm.

As a novel without a female protagonist, the interaction with Nami really made me feel safe [crying]. Come on, author, it's much better than the previous one, it's a great improvement, it seems that it has accumulated a lot of experience. You can write with a little more freedom. Although you are following the boat, it is okay for the plot to change reasonably due to the appearance of the protagonist. It's a big taboo to forcefully bring the plot back to the original line (it doesn't mean that you have this problem now).

The writing is quite good. New characters have been added to the original framework to make the original story new. The appearance of the protagonist has neither overshadowed the original character nor weakened the existence of the original character. It has not become transparent and has a moderate sense of presence. If the author feels that he has enough writing skills, he can try to create a new story.

How should I put it? After reading dozens of chapters, I can tell that the author is a new author. The plot moves too quickly. The broad outline is still okay, but there are no descriptive details, but it is still interesting. I hope the writing style can be more refined in the future. I still feel that the pace is too fast, but there is nothing poisonous about it. The fruit's ability is actually of the natural type, but its function is more like the superhuman type. In fact, you don't have to rely on the natural type. If you say it is a fantasy beast type, I will recognize the human fruit zombie type. I have to say it is a natural type.

Not vivid, average, but able to satisfy the taste of most sea fans If you are just doing it for love, then I won't say it, but if you want to make money, you have to make the characters more vivid. Text and animation are incomparable. You have to make their characteristics more prominent in order to achieve the picture of animation [code hold]

Leave a comment. I'm afraid I'm going to die. I haven't read such a good story about a boat in a long time. I hope the author can retain the character and characteristics of the protagonist and don't overdo it. Speaking of which, zombies probably don't have the concept of lifespan. I feel like there can be a discussion of lifespan at the end [laughing]

The writing is really nice, and the author's character design is also very good. I'm just curious about what Devil Fruit the protagonist ate. I searched 181 Devil Fruits online and couldn't find any.

Sure. The logic is smooth, and the characters are well drawn. It is better than most of the writings of Kuaifanyu, and the dialogues are not rigid. I hope the author can stick to writing the ending. After all, most Kuaifanyu are discontinued, with one or two discontinued. The early data is not good, and the longer the discontinuation is, the higher it will be above 9.0.

I feel that the author has downplayed the dangers of zombies. After all, in addition to being contagious, the zombie crisis is also highly aggressive and fatal. However, the author seems to have only controlled the contagion. Everything else looks great. Good luck, author.

I haven't finished reading it yet. Let me first mention my personal feeling. It's okay if you don't care about the author. (This tone is not to find fault) Although he is a zombie, he rarely bites people in person. Although he is a zombie, he only relies on his Devil Fruit ability to infect people. After that, he looked like a human who had eaten a Devil Fruit, except for his abnormal neck. If you become completely human, you will lose a lot of interest (in my personal opinion, this does not represent everyone)

The author's settings are quite good. The self-created plot with personal settings is also very interesting, but there are often many typos and wrong names in the text, such as Weiwei Cheng Weiwei. As for the translation issue, that's fine. Also, I feel like there are a lot of errors in the article. It's not a setting problem or a plot problem. It's just a matter of typing. I always feel like there's a word missing, or something missing. For example, Usopp discovered that Zoro's painted cake should have been lost according to normal people's speaking habits, but what Usopp said was, did you just say lost? But overall, it is indeed a good book. If these small problems are corrected, it should be able to get a score of 8.5 Or above. It feels like the author is typing by voice.

The love lines gave me a very silky feeling. In the past, I saw other people writing love lines very deliberately, with a purpose to gain favor. This kind of one is very good and really soft. Then there is a flaw. The author did not explain the strength of each member of the Straw Hats, as well as each person's position. Although the author worked overtime during the Mid-Autumn Festival, I was also working overtime. Ordinary man! Su Geng [given the reminder talisman] speaks with a tough tone

I really enjoyed reading this pirate fanfic daily article. It's very heartwarming. It follows the plot but some of the processes are different. There are some clever ideas from the author. I finished reading it two days in a row and am waiting for the update [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's a great book. As a fan, it can be said to be very good! There is no OOC, the characters are vivid and vivid, and the protagonist is perfectly integrated into the original plot. It is not obtrusive at all, does not over-grab the highlights and is not transparent. It gives me a sense of trance that the protagonist is really in the original plot! Very good! No heroine, no CP, teammate friendship [sending heartfelt wishes], I love it so much😍! ! ! ! ! (Ask in a low voice: Can I just kiss you without CP [blowing kiss])

Tomato's favorite pirate novel is one of my favorites. It has a very interesting zombie devil fruit setting. The protagonist has lost his memory, so his personality is simple and his friendship with Nami is very reassuring. If I like the non-CP feeling, the pirate world is suitable for adventure but not for writing emotional dramas. It is powerful but does not steal the highlights of the original characters. It blends well with Mai Tuan [laughs]

I really like the people in it. The protagonist is a very nice person. I love this feeling. There is no OOC among the original cast members. The writing is also very good, the plot is compact, and the characters are rich. [Like][Like][Like]

I'm happy to tie the knot, and I'm sad to tie the knot. Our An An is too cute and cute! Moreover, the author also allowed everyone to travel back to An An's zombie world, allowing everyone to experience technology, and also gave everyone a new plot point after Big Bear shot An An away. What I like the most is that An An can control the Tianlong people, which is great!

Author, I give you good reviews, but I hope you can go to TikTok and read the historical text of Robin Ono-chan. You will feel that your three views are exploded. One Piece has never told a story about the growth of a passionate child. I hope more people will realize where they come from and where they are going. If you agree with me, I also hope you will spread the word in Haimi Group.

Not bad. The interesting point is that collecting powerful people is related to animal pets. Although he was clumsy, he struck quickly and accurately, avoiding some accidents. There are only two points of dissatisfaction. One is that there are restrictions on collecting animals, which is a bit unpleasant. Don't miss the animals you want. There are no restrictions on collecting zombies. Second, the plot of Moria is overloaded, and the protagonist's temperament can obviously write a story that is better than the original plot. It is a waste. (I still don't know the name of the protagonist's fruit ability)

I usually don't read pirate books, but this one is really good and has a lot of words, because I had the urge to read it, and I haven't read the plot since I defeated Big Mom. I really don't know, it's quite interesting [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Give yourself a five-star review.

Come on, author, I quite like Lucian [please update]

A pirate fanfic that focuses on fun and daily plots The protagonist is a zombie who travels to the world of pirates and joins Luffy and the others after gaining humanity. You can use the abilities of zombies, such as strong force, infection, etc., And there will be other ability upgrades in the future. In the early stage, you mainly rely on the power of infecting others to turn into zombies to scare others (it can clear out soldiers in batches, and can also be used as a storage bag). In addition, the main character has facial paralysis, which makes people crazy. I also picked up a manatee boy on the way, and together with Luffy and the others, we are moving towards the goal of one piece. This is a funny novel that seems to be very relaxing. Overall, although part of the plot is off-kilter (the protagonist is a zombie, so he is not very smart [face covering]), it is still a funny novel that is both reasonable and reasonable. The cool thing is that after the protagonist joins Luffy and the others, their daily interactions are not abrupt at all. Every crew member interacts with each other and is not reduced to a background; major events are handled from beginning to end, and the Whitebeard episode makes up for the regrets of the original work. I have to say that the author's control is very good, and it would be better if the writing power is strengthened. Recommendation index, three to five stars, recommended to fans of "ship flow + daily life"~~Pirates fandom generally rarely comments, but this book is worth it, I hope the follow-up will have a good ending [Love]

It sticks more closely to the original line, and the character portrayal is also good. I feel that it is very suitable for those who have watched the anime and want to pass the time with nostalgia. The overall feeling is more daily. The theme is well grasped. The adventure is to mix with daily life. Overall, it is good. It is very suitable for me to listen and watch to pass the time.

It's beautiful, restored, and wonderful. The tone of the story is not so fragmented. It's completely different from other similar fics in the top rankings. It's a completely wonderful adventure story. It's really interesting. It's a pity that it was too short before it was updated to the Chambord Islands.

It's so good to watch. I watched it for three days to catch up. Come on, author, the writing is really good. Please keep it up. There are no ambiguous plots for both men and women. It's very comfortable to watch. Some of the small details and companion interactions are just as comfortable and cute as the original drama. It's enough. The friendship aspect is the best! Although sometimes I secretly want to see Xiao An injured in the battle, it's good that everyone is taking risks.

It's a very good fanfic. The protagonist's joining did not cause much change in the world. It seems that he just traveled to the world of One Piece and experienced adventure and growth with his friends. Reading this novel is like watching One Piece all over again.

It's quite interesting, but you can skip the chapter that goes back to modern times.

It's so beautiful, please come on even more [admiration] I will always follow you [blowing kiss]

The setting is very interesting, and the character plot is very detailed. I am looking forward to seeing the plot with the zombie army and the demons dancing around in the future. The protagonist's fruit ability should be developed in the future.