More Than One Yan Yun Burns Winter Melon

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. "The score" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are proud, don't show it in front of your brother Liang. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings." The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

Oops, this book is very well written, what can I say? The protagonist has a brain and does things logically. And his three views are also positive, and the emotions in this book are full of um and regret, and then you still um just have that kind of thing and don't force it. The feeling of realizing a dream is that it feels very smooth. Things will come naturally, especially in terms of the change in the young master's thinking, which is very good. Watch me for a while, I am not an advertisement

The writing is good, I hope you don't learn Yan Yun's bad habits, just make up for your regrets and have fun. Now that you have changed the moon god and underground Yan Yin, let's do the rest. Come on, more updates.

The writing is very good, with details, main lines and branch lines. The characters in the novel are full of emotions. It does not have the condescension of traditional travel novels, and it is reasonable to have fun. The regretful filling of vacancies is also a big highlight.

It's beautiful😍. It's probably the only book about Yan Yun that I've read in 🍅. It directly awakened my wandering soul (although I was exhausted after running it for two times). The descriptions really touched me. I felt that the soul of each character was described. It seemed that I really saw Yan Yun without regrets from the protagonist😭

The sincere chivalry in the sword's light, or the involuntary mantra in troubled times, are all written vividly and three-dimensionally with deep empathy. The lines are full of the fireworks and chivalry of the rivers and lakes, and the long meaning of Yanyun's rivers and lakes is full of meaning. The spirit of practicing "chivalry" can be clearly seen in the protagonist, just like what the author wrote himself. The protagonist is just a person. His eyes are only a hundred feet away. He can try his best to save everyone in front of him. He knows how many swords and swords there are in the dark, but he has no way to control it. He is just a person. The writing is great, and it's not petty. The only drawback is that there are few 😡

The idea is too clear, it is not a fast food article, which is rare. The author has basic knowledge and is not the kind of novel written by middle and high school students. It is really not easy for Tomato to find a good novel. Thank you to the author.

The best Yanyun fanfic at the moment, but I don't recommend it to those who are just starting to play games. Because the living, flesh-and-blood people in this book die one by one in front of the game plot, which is really uncomfortable. I was just [crying][crying][crying], I got to chapter 275, and then I ran back to watch the plot. I looked at the body of my sister (Moon God) lying there, and I had mixed feelings in my heart. The main line has been afraid to advance, fearing the day when the little red line disappears and the Shenxian Crossing is completely ignited.

It's a good book, but I was put off by the title, because I've never played the game before. After reading almost 180 chapters, I realized what "burning winter melon" means [cover face][cover face][cover face]. The plot can be said to be very smooth and can connect various plots and stories together, and the sense of substitution is very strong. Thank you, the author, [like][like][like]

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat [crying]

Ever since I fell in love with Yanzi, I have been looking for novels about Yanzi. This one really suits my taste. I haven't seen any sadistic plots yet, and I hope there won't be any in the future. There is also no intentional plot about Long Aotian. [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]. Full marks.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, Weiwei's praises start to come out, and the numbers are collected in vain. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

The protagonist's outlook on life is very upright, especially in a bleak worldview like Yan Yun's. Yan Yun really has too many emotions that are difficult to calm down. What he really brings into it is more or less wanting the characters in it to have a perfect ending. I'm really looking forward to the author's update, and I hope it doesn't crash. And then, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! Get up quickly and give me an update.

There are no poisonous points, the plot is quite smooth, and I always feel that the three perspectives are good. The only drawback is that the author is too short. It is recommended that the author update it. The author is great. Protect the red line. Otherwise I will break up with you. (ToT) I cried when I was knifed while playing a game. Woo woo woo

I will use the words that are the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, and the least polite. The least sensational, the least nonsense, the least oblique, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most practical, the most transparent, the most Vicious, the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most top, the most explosive, the strongest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, Evaluation of the method that is the most transparent, the dryest, the least pretentious, the least clichéd, the least formal, the least fussy, the most practical, the most focused, the most results-oriented, the most truth-conscious, the most core-focused, and the most focused on key points: Awesome [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] Do you dare to update 800 chapters in one day? It scares me to death [KISS][KISS]

This is really the best Yanyun fan novel I have ever found. I read it in one sitting. It is different from the kind of fan fiction that follows the main line. Many characters in it are flesh and blood, and it also saves a lot of regrets. I can only say that the author is really amazing.

I clicked in by accident, and got to know Yanyun for the first time and felt its charm. A person is a river and lake, and life is a river and lake. The writing is great, and there are stories that introduce each character. Even those who have never played the game can read it without thinking, haha ​​[Like]

Because of the author's book, I have aroused my desire to explore the plot of Yanyun's Sixteen Tones game. The previous plot was directly accelerated + faster, and the writing is superb! The protagonist is sometimes very naive in how he treats others, but it is precisely this simplicity that enables him to have a pure chivalrous heart. Come on, author!

I stayed up all night to finish it. Compared to falling in love or something like that, I really like that kind of thing. I really like to portray this background era very clearly. The real life reactions of people around me [Love] [Love] [Love] Pain and happiness are the background of life. The portrayal of the people around me is the highlight of this novel. I look forward to the protagonist's character becoming more three-dimensional and fuller, and I also look forward to the author's conclusion of this novel.

It's very interesting to read, and you can understand it even if you haven't played Yanyun before. Moreover, the author's writing really has a sense of Jianghu, and the characteristics of the protagonist are also very distinct.

The best Yanyun novel, although it is a bit slow in the early stage, it is very interesting. The characters' personalities and interactions are very good. The protagonist has outstanding abilities, gentle personality, and a bit of a fun-loving person. He will protect the people around him and the common people. However, the plot is a little slow. I hope the author will speed up the update! [Blowing kiss]

You can write! It's just a bit inconsistent with my original idea of ​​reading the book! When I saw his name, I thought it was the fourth natural disaster version of Burnt Winter Melon! Just like the game, there are two modes: online and offline! A group of people are burning winter melon online, but they can invite their friends to their own world offline! It turned out not to be! I'm a little disappointed. Everything else is okay.

Compared with Yan Yun's colleagues on the site, it is indeed a breath of fresh air. At least it can be read, and it is at the level of ordinary online novels.

Nice! It has made up for a lot of regrets, and I am looking forward to officially entering the plot. I am currently working on my second playthrough.

It's really good to watch. Many details that you might not have noticed before playing the game can be seen here. There are also many plots that you don't understand that you can understand immediately after reading the author's writing. It's just that the game has been updated to Jiangnan. This book really solves a lot of regrets, but the author has been discontinued for a long time. The regrets he wanted to make up for could not be made up. This is not a pity, alas.

I have played Yanyun a little bit, but I don't like this type of novel because the system operation is too complicated. The author's writing is very emotional and makes people feel that the novel is alive. It is really good. I hope to continue to work hard. I will give it four and a half stars because some of the introductions in the middle are too long and I am not used to it.

The content is very interesting. Along the way, it not only shows the growth of the young hero, but also witnesses the stories of many little people. He is no longer a soul from another world, but truly integrates into the world and gradually becomes a hero. In my opinion, this book is very delicate and beautiful!

The few fine works reflect the personality that a person, a living person, should have in some aspects.

It's so pretty, so pretty, so pretty [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's good-looking. It ranks second among the Yanyun fanfics I've read. The drawback is that it's too short. I hope it won't end hastily.