After Being Purified at the Beginning, How Can This Immortal Cultivate?

When I first conceived this novel, I wanted to create a fast-paced fantasy novel. However, when the image of the protagonist Lin Xi gradually became fuller in my heart, I couldn't bear to make any cuts - this "abandoned house" in modern society really resonated with me too much. We are destined by birth, and we cannot choose our starting point; but our destiny depends on ourselves. Lin Xi's struggle to survive at the bottom reflects the unwillingness and struggle of many of us towards life. His suffering, his optimism, his sorrow, his joy... These details always make me unable to help but describe them in detail, so the pace of writing naturally slows down. As a newbie in writing, I am still exploring and I look forward to hearing your readers' opinions and suggestions! Your feedback is very important to me, thank you!

The psychological description is very good, the characters are vividly drawn, and the training is described in detail. The only shortcoming is that the plot is a little delayed. According to this pace, it is estimated that it will take more than a million words to write until the later stage. Unless the author is well prepared, I hope you will not be an eunuch. Come on.

Finally there is a real one, the others are just trying to sell dog meat, and it will be boring to grow back [laughs]

Scan the book. It is recommended that new readers jump directly to Chapter 40.

Personally, I can give 4 stars. How can the writing style be so out of the ordinary? I feel that the author is quite young, or it is assisted by AI (if the author is not also young at heart, hehe, I am right anyway). Then, as a whole, it tests the spiritual resonance with the author. Once the resonance is reached, it will feel better. The plot is quite good, but there are some e-nesses. As I said before, in fact, the core is not lacking. If you can persist, there should still be a market after improvement (personal opinion, happy every day)

It looks good, it looks great. [Sinister smile]

It looks good, but if I am subjected to this kind of punishment of being cut into pieces, I will be an immortal and not a cultivator. After all, I am really afraid of pain. The moment a person is beheaded, he will not die. He can probably hold on for about ten seconds, because it takes time to go from ischemia and hypoxia to brain death. It is not that after one cut, there will be no feeling. That is because the head was cut off. In an instant, a few milliseconds later, the pain caused by the huge trauma to the neck will cause the brain to directly fall into a state of freeze. In other words, at that moment, the pain is very terrifying, not to mention being beheaded tens of thousands of times, and then finally having to change life, Kunkun flew away again [sending heart] That is really not good That is to say, the moment the head was cut off, he was not actually dead. It was just because it was too painful and the brain activated the protection mechanism. The human head that fell to the ground had no expression or movement. It looked dead, but in fact it still had brain waves. And, let's just say, the most terrifying thing about beheading is that the knife did not cut off, but half of the knife was cut on the neck, which is really (›´ω`‹) fatal.

I've just read Chapter 89. The first 40 chapters are very boring. Chapter 40 and beyond are the protagonists who are the most like normal people among the many novels I have read in recent years. They are full of emotions, have compassion and are not holy. They really look like normal human beings in modern society [Like]

The writing is very vivid and feels like the author has experienced it

Uh-huh, uh-huh, how do you say this? Anyway, it's just, eh, eh, I don't know how to put it, what was I thinking at the time and writing this thing?

A good-looking story with a tragic protagonist. There was a bug in the beginning and he was reincarnated 100,000 times. After re-entering, his brother left him, and he ended up wandering the world as a beautiful girl.

We in Laolin have gone through all kinds of hardships, but how do we develop this cultivation of immortality? We cannot forget about the empress sister after two or three years of cultivation.

The protagonist is flesh and blood and the description is very realistic. The protagonist's system requires you to increase the favorability of Destiny's Daughter, and in the end, you want the other person to fall in love with you. However, the protagonist also looks female, so the favorability is more difficult to increase, and you have to bend them [laughing]

Are you the ultimate anti-stress protagonist? For the first time, I feel that the protagonist of the novel feels a little distressed [face covering] It's so miserable

How to put it? The golden finger is enabled but only a little🤏. It is difficult for the protagonist to make a qualitative leap. As a result, he can only be invisible in the early stage. But it still looks very interesting.

With just a real knife, Xue died. Fortunately, Xiaoqing got dirty again. Reshaping the body, otherwise I really can't stand it,,, overall it's quite nice.

It's quite interesting. I recommend reading it. Can Concubine Lan be resurrected? 😭😭😭

I just love to see authors write this type of thing [laughs] When will a new book of the same genre be released? [Laughs] Love reading

It's interesting, the writing is quite detailed, and the description of the change in mentality is also very good. It's good and good.

It feels so good, it feels so good. I feel aggrieved at the front, but then a big wave comes directly from the back. It feels so good, so good!

Xue Zhaoyue couldn't stand the knife and couldn't calm down.

Damn, it's so pretty The author writes really well

Be persistent! Author

I was laughing so hard earlier, this opening

Except for the pigeon egg plot, which is a bit painful, everything else is okay. I don't know what the direction of this article is. It's better to indicate whether it's a change or a return later♂

The front is okay, but the back is pretty (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)

It's pretty good, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch from the front.

The writing is delicate and the description of the characters is quite good.

The writing is particularly interesting [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Is it a transformation story? The beginning is a little bit vicious, but the writing becomes better as you go to the end [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Really good-looking and non-toxic