A Fragile Beauty of Jade

The writing is very good, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. The psychological description of the characters is very detailed and fits the character environment in the book very well. I haven't read the later content and haven't updated it yet, but I feel that the desolate feeling in the book is well described. The subtle confrontation between the two is great to watch. It's just that the introduction doesn't say be or he. It's really good-looking, and the author was so well-funded that there was no rating. Some, some, he. I didn't see he at the end [covering face].

I think the author's writing style gives people a very immersive and good feeling! (Maybe it's because what I'm looking at is optimized?) It's such a painful, powerless and sad story. After reading part of it, I felt that the love and hate between people are actually not that important, only the unanimous determination to fight against oppression. The first forty chapters were so suffocating and painful, but the later chapters seemed a little sweeter. The author is really good at writing... The emotional fluctuations it brought about made me review the book without reading much hahh, please give it a thumbs up to the author. I was wrong for the first sixty chapters, and the author stabbed me once he wrote a word () (Ed. 3) I just watched it without realizing it. Although I haven't reviewed it yet, I'm afraid I'll forget it if I fall asleep. All in all, it is another outstanding and special book! Gold from the haystack!! I think the presentation of the plot and the creation of the characters are very good, and the pace is very enjoyable to read through!! Including some fighting scenes, it makes me so happy. . It's a book that doesn't take the usual path. It's not a brainless cookie. It made me cry and laugh at the same time. It's not like the inexplicable feeling in the fast-food novels I've read. In short, it's a thin book. . The psychological activity made me immersed in what I had read, and I didn't know what the universe was. . The world view is also very grand, and the game between the protagonist and entropy is very interesting. . I'm really looking forward to the next plot, it's so interesting. . . It's not a bad idea to enter the trap. The author must finish it successfully with this kind of quality. . Author. . The author asked me to take another look at your draft box (Pala Paola

It's quite interesting, but when I read the first part, I felt it had nothing to do with the introduction and was a bit confusing. (Because authors of similar works usually skip it directly.) It's pretty good, quite detailed.

I tied it in one breath. The writing style of this novel is really delicate, the descriptions and characterizations are on point, and it is not childish at all. The emotional transformation between the protagonists is a matter of course. It's a very interesting master-disciple novel ^-^ Zheyu and Wujiu, the two little bitter gourds, you must fuck them!!

The description of the scene is awesome, squat down for a moment

The descriptions of the environment and the like are indeed quite good, but the first few chapters feel a bit too much, and there are no other uncomfortable parts at all. There is no one with a good work. The selection of materials is very good, and it doesn't give people the same feeling. At least this is the first one I have experienced in two months, and I am very surprised. Praise the author [laughs]

Not bad, it's very beautiful. Come on, author 🥰

It's very interesting. As an old bookworm, the author's writing style is really good for a newcomer. I really felt sorry for Zheyu when I watched it, and I hope that the subsequent plot will make him feel better.

Come on, it looks good 😘😘😘

It feels very Cthulhu, I like 💕 God of gods 💕💕💕