A Doomsday Powerhouse in Hong Kong

In fact, the author's writing style is quite good, but the emotional line is too simple, without any sense of tension, and also too short. Like the first article, it can obviously be a long story, but many of them are gone without being explained clearly. I look forward to the teacher's next one.

It is indeed relatively short, but the content is not bad. The author can try writing this kind of quick travel first. It's simpler, and you don't have to worry about how to continue the plot or how to make it longer. The short story is actually quite exciting.

It's very nice. Both paragraphs are interesting. The heroine's medical skills are quite interesting, but it's too short. It would be nice if it could be expanded more. The author is still at a loss for words. Should you consider writing a long novel?

I think the author's writing style is okay, quite natural, and very comfortable to read, but there is too little plot design. And compared to Liangkun, I think Crow is a little sad. He gets less love from the heroine and has lower emotional interaction. I hope the author will write more in the future.

Very nice, I like it very much. So is the writing style. I like Brother Crow so much. Will the author write the story of Lei Yaoyang and Brother Xiaosha in the future?

It looks good, I love watching it, I still want to watch it 👍

It's still very warm. I put down the fighting and returned to my family.

It's not bad at all, but compared to Liangkun, Crow Crow's emotional pull is too little. Maybe it's because the first world is not smooth.

In the past, I didn't read anything with more than 100,000 words, but this one is just two parts. I like the concept. I will probably write the second part.

Very good, a long-lasting relationship. Don't get hung up on the timeline when watching