Naruto: Jiraiya, the Sage of Destiny

Orochimaru was a very soft-spoken character in the early stage, and there are some parts in the early stage that have a dark feel.

Although it may not be a masterpiece among Naruto fanfics, it can be considered very good among novels about Jiraiya as the protagonist. Although the progress has been slowed down due to the too detailed writing in some places. For example, someone mentioned this in the comment area, but what about it? You don't have to read it if you don't want to, there is no perfect thing. I think this novel is even better than some 9:00-point novels (because those novels are suspected of raking in ratings or gaining popularity)

How should I put it? I personally feel that the writing is okay. First of all, it is about traveling through Jiraiya. There are relatively few books written about Jiraiya. Secondly, this book rewrites the original tragic endings of many people. For example, Hatake Sakumo did not commit suicide, Nezuki Mei was killed by the detonating charm, the Sannin did not leave the village, and Konoha Village did not go downhill, but prospered, etc.

Very nice. Very smooth. The writing is also pretty good. Description of bonds. Very good. It's one of the top three Naruto fanfics I've read, but it only scored 6.5, So I can't understand it. Are the requirements so high? I only came to comment after I read half of it and thought it was really good.

It looks good. It's the first time I've seen Jiraiya wearing it. It's very good. Faster delivery.

Awesome, solid development, not awkward, there is friendship and love, the author could be more passionate The narrative is a bit too complicated, and the descriptions are too detailed. The novel should not have long paragraphs that affect the viewing experience, and it is a bit watery. Speed up the main plot. Other books are close to 400,000 words and are almost finished. Now I feel that the early stages are not over-finished.

There is no word envy. Envy is just envy. Don't use words indiscriminately or develop words randomly. Not just two words can be put together to form a word. If you don't understand, learn more and don't spread mistakes.

I really like the character Jiraiya, and I hope the author can write it well, come on! 😎😎😎😠😠😠

Cultivation, return to the shadow level, early stage shadow level, mid-stage shadow level

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