My Little Pony: Diary of a Unicorn Pony

Guaranteed to be updated twice a day, I think this book can definitely reach a new level. Of course, I hope it will be a single female protagonist. After all, the pony world is a world of innocence. The characters are well drawn and the story is relatively coherent.

Poison Point 1: After being hurt and forced to come back, you are still the so-called dear tribe and friend. Poison Point 2: Knowing that the protagonist does not understand, he tricked him into becoming a male model. Of course, everyone who thinks they are self-righteous will be slowly assimilated in a place like Little Malia, where you can be forgiven no matter what mistakes you make! (Does anyone still remember the teacher who never appeared in school again? Does anyone remember the protagonist who was neglected and bullied in childhood?) (´`) In this case, staying away is the best compensation! Of course there are good ones, the material selection is good and the writing is not bad. I hope it can be optimized.

Very nice! Don't write some rhetoric and sentence patterns in a Chinese style. Remember that you are writing a European and American style fan, otherwise it will be very dramatic. The rest is nothing special. The writing is very good, the emotions progress very comfortably, and the emotional descriptions or descriptions of some situations are very good and appropriate. There are no inexplicable plots that make people dig their toes on the ground, and there are no inexplicable burnings. Many "high-risk plots" are well written and will not make people embarrassed. [Like][Like][KISS][KISS][Love][Love] "High-risk plot": some emotional/emotional changes, fight scenes, or encountering danger/opportunity/certain things/turning points. Some authors obviously have nothing special to say when they write these, so they don't know what they are burning about! ! ! It seems very embarrassing [laughing] The rhetoric is too gorgeous or too boring, and it is polarizing. This one is very moderate, very suitable, very good. [Like][Like][Like]

The overall evaluation is okay. It feels a little awkward. I think it should be rated around 7.5. The main reason is that there are still very few chapters. I feel that it is strange to describe the emotions of the protagonist. The author can refer to other Xiaoma articles. Come on✊

This novel is great, especially the inclusion of a mute main character in the original plot. The emotional scene with m6 was also well grasped, but the author kept making typos intentionally to attract readers' comments (possibly to express the author's homesickness [smile])

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking 3,000 more viewers in three days

It's really good-looking, not toxic at all, and the protagonist is not a good guy. He has his own unique character, unlike other protagonists in novels.

Speaking of which, every time I see the word big app, I always think of a famous scene. SpongeBob: Squidward, stop it, you can't have any more delicious Krabby Patties Squidward: Why, Chew Chew Chew SpongeBob SquarePants: They'll swarm on your butt and explode Change to pony version Luna: Sister, stop it, you can't eat the royal cake anymore Universe Princess: Why, Chew Chew Chew Luna: They gather in your butt and get bigger

Let me summarize Silence for everyone. There is no such thing as Xiaoxi winning the MVP. Not to mention the total destruction of little Maria, she has to lose half of the horse's mouth [face covering] It seems that she started racing from about Chapter 100 sitting down [smile] I think your cover is more suitable for the M6 sister's book [smile] Of course it's the page where I'm listening to the book

Girls are very suitable for writing such cute and delicate novels or light novels. , Write that kind of thing, if a girl writes something that is particularly grand and bloody, it would have to be more twisted. I previously had a book called What's Cannibal? , The novel written by a madman is particularly awesome. Really delicate.

It was a bit uncomfortable to watch because I forgive Princess of the Universe and Silent Creek for taking too long to work hard, and then I was a little lost in the emotional drama. However, it is rare that there is a My Little Pony novel that is still being updated. Four stars encourage me, please go to the author. Those who had something, ate a lot of CP randomly... See Chapter 246 for details.

Also 🉑, when I read the introduction, I originally thought the protagonist was ♀, but later I found out it was ♂. Maybe it's because I've read too much without cp. I'm not very interested in the emotional line of this book, but other aspects, such as the protagonist's character, plot, and writing style, are relatively good among fans. Come on, author! There are very few pony fans who write about Qilin. I hope you can continue to persevere!

Not bad, the logic is clear and the article is smooth.

The author's writing about relationships is great. It's a joy to watch as a romantic comedy. The other book "Friendship Is Parting and Reuniting" is also very good. Please be sure to finish it.

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes.

What should I say about this one? After reading more than 20 chapters at first, I suddenly felt that it was not suitable for me. After all, the poison resistance and tolerance were not very good at that time, and I could still put it on the bookshelf. But after the poison resistance came up, oh my god, it is a really good book. One of the most capable authors of Tong Xiao Ma's novels. Of course, the quality is also top-notch. Although I have not read more than 300 chapters now, I really don't have time (well, of course I read other Xiao Ma's books, so I don't have time, right? [Smile])

Excellent multi-heroine novel about Xiao Ma, recommended to read

Good review. Although the protagonist is a little bit mute, the plot is still very ordinary.

Surprisingly excellent, and one of the rare high-quality fics [laughter]

It's very interesting to watch. It has multiple female protagonists. It's rare to see a mute male protagonist. I suggest you watch it carefully and slowly. The more you watch, the better it gets.

Personally, I think this novel is quite good. It is a good masterpiece among pony fanfics. The only regret is that the finale is a bit too hasty. There are a few holes left unfilled, such as the origin of Lingshu's identity. Is it a Qilin or a Qilin horse? There is also the issue of longevity theory that seems to have not been resolved.

After reading this book, I am really filled with emotions... Maybe friendship is the greatest magic in the world... Whenever I read this book again, Ling Shu's experience in this book will flash in my mind, and maybe I will deduce their every detail in my mind. The ending of the story has been decided, but anyone can imagine the wonderful life that Lingshu will have next. Thanks to the author for bringing us a wonderful and dreamlike story, and I hope we can meet again in other stories.

This book is very good. In fact, I personally feel that I can write more about the human world, but this book has been completed, and it has left me with endless reveries about the life of the Lingshu in the human world. Come on, author, I hope your subsequent books will also bring good results [Like][Like][Like]

Overall it's pretty good, but as the introduction says, OOC is a bit too serious. If you can accept it, this book is still very good.

I didn't expect that I would still see you writing in the past few years. Please support me. Why are there so many typos yet to be corrected? But I feel really good, love it! !

Autumn Fire must be the main palace

The potential of this book is very high. You can eat it with confidence. As long as it is updated all the time, it will be a good book.

Especially, very good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. It's one of my favorite novels to read. Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, come and see. Not a favor! ! I just hope that the author can continue to update it, it is really beautiful! ! ! No, I'm going crazy! ! ! ! Very good in my aesthetic sense! !

It's good to read. I write more. I love reading. The author is too slow to follow, only one chapter a day. Alas~ It's over too

I was reading a book and said it could be paired with this music, "After I'm Gone" Author, will you write a plot for Equestria Girls in the future?