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Regarding the evaluation of this book, it is the only one that I feel does not have the OOC character design of Bai E. The main reason is that this is the only one that writes about Black E. Secondly, the content is comprehensive, and it hardly changes the original process. On the contrary, the integration is very powerful, and there is no sense of violation! ! ! It's really awesome. It's really difficult to fully write about Bai E's character. In fact, it's difficult to integrate his ideas into the original opening of the book. And then there is no sense of violation and a certain effect must be ensured. It's really a very powerful writing style. At least there are only a few books that I can really see in Persimmon! ! ! ! ! And it's not boring to watch, and there's no watery content! ! ! ! This is the most important‼ ️I have carved out all the memories of Hei E! It also adds certain imaginative elements and plot rhythm control! ! ! ! What a great piece of work! So, author, you must suddenly update Chapter 200 to scare me to death! ! ! I know the author must still have some in your belly! ! ! ! Spit it out! ! ! !

Don't stop updating, update well, I like to watch it, the original time traveler, I don't know where he went. Could it be that when he stole the fire in Ompharos, he merged into Bai'e, and released his power to the time traveler to become a star core hunter? I can't think of any good arrangements for the time travellers. They are two completely different people. I thought about something that was very scary. As the administrator, Lagus knew about the prophecy, so he must have known about Bai'e's prophecy of the gray dawn. He actually didn't stop the little gray hair from entering. With gray hair, didn't Lagus think of the prophecy? Or is there another gray-white substitute for Bai'e's prophecy of the previous 30 million reincarnations? Isn't the prophecy bound to come true? If not, Lygus himself would have put in the gray dawn, which would be really confusing. I also think that this prophecy of the savior has the intervention of the Doctor and the intervention of the end. Did Elio write this script?

It's the first time I've seen such a beautiful black Irvine. It smells so good. It is recommended that everyone come and watch the Black-bellied Samoyed (Daily Persecution of Lao Yang [Shy]

Cool to watch. It's just too short. It's a pleasure to watch from Hee's perspective. It's really good, but it's just too short [face covering]

I rarely give five stars. It's really good, but the writing is a little childish (mainly because I read too many books, including some famous books that are not light novels), but I think other aspects make up for it, and the writing is really good.

Love this book very much! It's another possibility between Xiaobai and Ompharos~ Moreover, there are foreshadowings from the beginning, which are not only self-explanatory but also well-founded! None of the characters are OOC, so I was so touched ~ [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

This is the writing style of Baie's book "The True Savior" that I have never seen. The combat description is very good and perfectly integrates Baie's crazy obsession.

This book is really, really good! The plot is compact and logical. The main reason is that the characters are not OOC. Just like the character itself, the daily persecution of Lao Yang is also very funny [sneaky laugh] It's really beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] It's finished today, so please add another comment~ I am actually very reluctant to end this book... After all, the characters in this book are made of flesh and blood, and it is not an exaggeration to even say that they are the characters themselves. The protagonist has experienced pain and sadness along the way, as well as a happy journey. The protagonist completed his mission and opened up a new ending for the story. As for the rest of the story, I hope they will go on a happy journey in a tomorrow we don't know~ At this point, the flowers are finished~

Okay, okay, it looks good. When I saw it, I thought it was me. Brother, the protagonist has been assimilated, brother ok ok ok

Super pretty! Not OOC at all, no CP, just doting on the protagonist. I've been following it, it's really good, the plot is also good, everything is great!

One of the few Xiaohei's articles! And it's beautifully written! Love watching, please update more! ⭐

Okay, okay, the author's character is not OOC The main character is Hei E, and the main focus may be on beauty, strength and misery. The key is that the writing style is very good, and it perfectly embodies the savior in my mind. And it's really funny every time I see Uncle Yang being persecuted by the protagonist. In Star Iron, your book is one of the strongest I have read after reading it many times. You must keep writing it! !

Okay, okay, this is the most enjoyable Bai'er/Firewalker I've read so far. Except for the awkwardness when the protagonist laughs, other parts are very enjoyable. The author's writing style is very good, and Tomato is at the level of a human being [Thoughts]

(Don't spray or lightly spray, thank you) First, it's delicious. Second, the character description is good. Third, it's a spoof of Lao Yang [face covering] [laughing]. The following are my own shortcomings. First, some plots are not well connected. Second, the relationship between Lan Baie and Elio is revealed later. I personally feel that it is not good and should reveal more information in the early or mid-term. The third small plot in the middle is a bit skipped, but the book was written from August to October and it is mainly about the rescuer of the evil star, so it can be ignored. In summary, the writing is good, the plot is okay, the characters have good emotions, of course, the knife inserted is really painful! Newcomers who don't understand or only know a little bit about Bengtie should be cautious [sending heartfelt comments]

After reading it, I felt empty in my heart, as if I had finished reading a heroic epic, which made me feel disappointed. Fortunately, the ending was full of everyone, and it exploded in the middle and late stages! I really like fighting against all enemies, Pinoconi and "himself" shaking hands in reconciliation, Omphalos' team battle twisting and turning, and playing Zandar in the palm of his hand. Finally, I pay tribute to the best train crew and good brothers Elio and Lan. I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars!

I came across this book halfway through the series. I really like the story! Whether it's personality, stories and bonds, the connection between life is very personal... How do you want to live your life? Maybe the answer has already been given. I hope they can still have such a wonderful but happy life in the future that we cannot foresee. Congratulations on the completion!

It's so beautiful. To put it bluntly, this is the only one written about Bai E. I'm very satisfied with it. I must give it a thumbs up.

The author, the prophet, struck first. As for the work itself, many plot details are somewhat insufficient. It would be much better if all the plots were described in more detail. Secondly, the plot progresses very quickly, which of course also illustrates Bai E's desire for Dawn. The character creation itself is not unreasonable, but it is based on the person who created the original work. Fans have no choice but to do this, so it is only for players to read. After all, it is really hard for Xiaobai... I cried several times when I read the fan fiction. I skipped watching the ending, because to be honest, the previous plot was very good, but in the middle and later stages, it gradually became unsatisfactory, and it was like the iron collapse. Pinocchio is the best part. It's worth reading. I hope the author's writing skills will improve. If the writing becomes better, the author's plot settings will lead to higher scores.

It's really super good-looking. In fact, it's rare to see Bai E as the protagonist when reading fan fiction. At least this is the first one I've seen, and the author's writing style is actually quite good. There is no OOC in the whole book. At least I didn't find any poisonous points after reading it, and it didn't say that it was digging holes in the front and not filling them in later. It can be self-justified. The ending is also quite good, leaving some gaps, giving people a feeling of loss. Very few novels, especially fan fiction, can give me this feeling. After seeing the ending, I will want to read the follow-up again. It is a pity that the author did not write an extra chapter, which is a bit regretful, but overall it is a very good Bai E fan fiction [Like]

After reading it, I feel that the writing is better than MiHoYo. To be honest, I read it more than once, Your Lie in April, Your Name, Weathering with You, Game of Life, Tokyo "Gourmet" Season 1 and 2 (three and four seasons) Steins; Gate, Charlotte (I didn't expect it for now) Knife. After seeing so many changes, I thought I was M. When watching the final protagonist creating the unknown, I recommend listening to cry for me kamin, nis Game, unravel, katharsis your name experience is quite good. The plot is basically very smooth, and I feel comfortable watching this after 3.7. To be honest, as long as I get through the plot seriously, I still feel a little uncomfortable. I generally don't read fanfics about regrets. A divine drama with no regrets. Is that still him? Isn't it just because of the difficult mood that the memory is deep? Regret is also part of the drama. Also, my small guarantee is crooked. [Crying] Twice crooked. I haven't been this sad while watching anime in a long time.

Yes, it has its own ideas and is not cliche, but the one in the theater was indeed a bit uncomfortable to read, so I skipped it directly. The writing style needs to be improved, come on To be honest, as a reader, I feel that I am not dissatisfied with this ending. I remember that in one chapter, the protagonist included Nanook and the star god of wisdom on the must-kill list. I thought it was a spoiler for the ending, but I didn't expect this ending.

This book is really great. The main character does not have an OOC, and the story of time travel, why Elio helped him, and Lan's assistance can all be connected! There are also many foreshadowings and the writing is super good (✪▽✪)

Very good. I haven't seen such a good-looking book in a long time.

Ahhhhhhh it's beautiful! ! ! Oh, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good!

The description is shocking and the foreshadowing is recycled extremely well, so writing must have an outline. He has a very stable control over the character's mental journey, and also does a good job in dismantling the concept of "fate", and he also makes full use of the integration of the mini-plots in the game. Finally, let us salute the Messenger of the End [Salute]

It's good-looking. I didn't dislike the second book, and it didn't bother my brain.

I was stabbed in the back by MiHoYo, but I prefer to call it "drawing background, original story". It has an outline and content. Whether you play the game or not, you can appreciate the characters from another angle. The perspective is different, it is a new book, and the author's writing is also good. The strong belief is the anchor for the protagonist to move forward. The content is humorous, and the occasional interaction with the train crew is also funny. It is more about moving forward and sparing no effort to move forward. Rush the duck! For tomorrow!

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that so few people have read it. I hope more people will read it. The author's writing style is also very good. Those who are short on books can read it. Those who like plots and logical closed loops can also read it [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Good news, the character design fits the original work very well Bad news, the character design is too consistent with the original work [crying]

It's really nice, but the updates are a bit slow, but the daily updates are very stable.