Uma Musume: The Horse Girl Behind You Seems a Little Off

Excellent work (from lowest to highest, Great Fury, good work, excellent work, quasi-magic work, masterpiece) Advantages: The characters are well created. The protagonist has his own little thoughts, which makes people feel comfortable to watch. Disadvantages: The pace is too fast, the relationship is developed too quickly, the writing is average and not beautiful (common among newcomers) Summary: A quasi-magic work among newcomers, but a masterpiece among tomatoes. The author does not have much writing experience, but every newcomer has a bright future. Come on.

Among cat customers, Tomato is an excellent cat! You're so nice, meow!

Hoho, it's not bad. Although some plots are briefly mentioned, the emotional portrayal seems to be quite delicate so far. I am looking forward to the follow-up basement part more and more😋

This book is not a smooth read, so please be aware. Also, if you have any questions, please explain the specific situation, because the author is usually busy with a lot of things in college, so he writes in fragmented time. So if there are mistakes, I will naturally revise them carefully. Because the author's writing power is limited, some places may not be written well. I would like to apologize to everyone in advance. But... If you come up and talk about it, you can't even point out any problems except bad reviews, or you forcefully take quotes out of context, I usually read the comment section at night, and I am usually more emotional at this time... To put it bluntly, I started scolding you. All in all, that's it. I'm very sorry that this book is an immature article written by an immature author. I hope everyone can tolerate it.

Good product It's obviously just a matter of writing it down... Why, why? Why did you add so many settings... Why did you write it in such an exciting way... Wouldn't it be better to just be an ordinary Ma Niang harem novel? Now, why are you doing this? "To not let others down." "To see more scenery." "To prove myself." "To rush to the front!" "To catch up with the person you admire." "For new glory." "To be number one." "For love." "For those who shine brighter" "How come there are so many reasons? I just did it when I wanted to... Just to see their smiles." The song of Sirius sets sail, the three goddesses and the trial of triple destiny The scarlet moon hangs in the sky, until the night is also dark and silent The twisted thing lurks until attachment is truly accepted "The disease is called love" The Black Throne, the Crowned Black Sun awaits new games One person and one horse girl, the final battle begins under the sacred spring Until the ocean also capsizes Until the sun is silent Until all this becomes eternity, a new song is composed This is a game called "original heart" "Let's fight" In the end, you will definitely understand... Stories become legends, destiny writes epics When legends are not worthy of naming, when epics are also a little narrow The stars in the sky are still shining, please prepare to welcome the new universe "Trial of Destiny" You are the salvation and our trainer. You are the savior, our rescuer Three goddesses, three destinies, three growths "Your name is..." "My name is Yin Muchen" All in all, all in all This is a masterpiece, you can read it

Overall, it seems to me personally, the writing is quite good. As for the blocking points, I don't think I looked at the comment area. The blocking points some people mentioned are not exaggerated from the progress I have seen so far. In other words, to me personally, these are not considered blocking points. Overall, it is still an excellent work.

Not bad, but the emotional development was too fast

Question: Is there really going to be a plot similar to the basement, rather than a synopsis scam?

I picked up 🐎Mother's Harem when I saw it. However, from the introduction, the characters in the harem are all old characters. New characters like Anme Mouyong, Only I Love You are rarely written by authors. It feels like a pity. By the way, does the chairman count as a harem? [Laughs crookedly]

Could the author add "Love Like the Past"? After recently reading her plot, I feel that this novel is very suitable for me. I have an elopement ending.