Kingpin: Thelma and Louise

To be honest, this book is really, really well written. Personally, I have read no less than 10,000 books, but around 1,000. I have also read a lot of miscellaneous books, whether they are games or animations like this one, and I have also read some, such as a series of similar novels like Young and Dangerous, or some apocalyptic novels. But I dare to say that this one is the kind of plot protagonist that I have created in so many novels that I have read... Well, how should I put it? It's a very rich feeling. It feels like a series of things that happen in real life and the plot needs it. I don't know if other people have it. It's this kind of feeling, a kind of painful feeling. For me, I may be the kind of character who is easier to bring into the plot. I don't know about other people, whether it is the same as me or different. I am always the protagonist's decision, or something that happens to him. I can always feel it personally. I don't know if other people can. My summary is this book. He writes very, very well, and the emotional character of the characters is very imperfect. [Like][Like][Like] (All the above comments are personal statements only and do not represent everyone. The above comments are my personal feelings) [Top post][Top post][Top post][laugh]

I have been hesitating between three stars and four stars. After thinking about it, I decided to give it a four-star rating. This is a book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. It is also a fun but not particularly enjoyable book. When it comes to fun, it is invincible in the game. But when it comes to dissatisfaction, in reality, it is like a person with depression and mental problems. Moreover, this mental problem seems to have existed before the author quit Internet addiction. The advantage is that the plot narrative is okay, the full-time game part is also okay, the proportion of daily life and games is also okay, and you will not feel tired due to too much of one party, but the shortcomings are also obvious, it is too slow, too depressing, and some plots are also dragging, and more importantly, I feel that the daily plot and the game plot are relatively separated. The proportion is okay, but the integration of transitions is not particularly good, and there are two narratives: memories and the present. I also feel that the transition is still not very good. On the other hand, there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. The Tang Rou in the author's writing is indeed different from the Tang Rou in my heart. The author's writing is a little different from the one in my heart, but I can't describe the Tang Rou in my heart and what kind of taste it is. And one thing is that I have suffered the loss of serialization. I have followed one after another. The senses are not very good. Either I can read the book or the author can update it soon. Come on, author, what I write is just my personal experience, just take a look

The author is very creative. The protagonist is invincible but only limited to glory. Other than that, his invincibility is limited. It is reasonable and difficult to cause discomfort (of course it may be because I don't feel much about the description of suffering). In short, this is a fanfic that is different from full-time but related to it.

Ox! To be honest, it is rare to see such a responsible novel that can almost turn the fan novel into a new one. I want to write a brand new novel using the background of the full-time master. The description of Fang Xuan's personal story gives people a real feeling. To be honest, the author is a bit hard to explain in this way. I want to say that the author of the full-time master is an online game novel. I think there are more things about glory. If you write like this, you may not be able to grasp the difference between daily youth training and league reading, and may not be able to make readers adapt to it. I just raised this point based on my personal opinion. If the author has already considered treating me as a fart, and come on, the author rarely cares about his fans. I used to read it as a fun article and never read it seriously, but the author finally wants to say speed update.

The beginning may be a bit long, but the story after that is very exciting, and the interaction between the protagonist and the protagonist is very strong. In the end, it will be great for the protagonist to meet Su Muqiu. The king does not see the king. I am looking forward to the author expanding on this part of the story. I also wish the author good health and success in his career, and never give up (very loud!)

The best writing fan in the world! Not one of them! ! Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people! ! !

At present, I have caught up with the latest chapters. First of all, I have read through the skill settings for all professions given by Lao Bai (let's call the author this way). I don't know whether Fu is consistent with the original work (it has been several years since I read the original work, and I can't remember so many things, let alone all the skill settings). However, Lao Bai here gave me a description of the skills that I can turn back to at any time, which allows me to better imagine the battle plot in the story. Secondly, for the protagonist, I think (it only represents my personal feelings, please don't mind if someone thinks I am wrong) the protagonist can be said to have come alive in my heart. He has a very full emotion, not the kind where you always have a way to die or smile crookedly. Regarding the protagonist's experience, I feel that he is pitiful and hateful. I pity his hellish days in the past, and I don't like him. The sentence he said to Su Muqiu that there will be no achievements, but we have read the plot, but then again, if I had his ability, I might be more arrogant and despicable than him. At least the protagonist is completely like a living character in my heart. The protagonist will not act like a perfect creature created by God without any flaws. He has his own arrogance and his own despicability. Let's talk about the protagonist's system. I personally feel that this system is not like the one in the online novel. This system is more like the protagonist's own talent. This talent will be limited due to his own mental condition. This should explain why this so-called system sometimes disappears (when he was narrating, Tang Rou was recording and recording the episode). Of course, please forgive me if I say something wrong. As for the pace of the story, I personally think it's okay. At least in my personal opinion, the story won't seem too slow, and it's not so fast that it makes me feel like I'm rushing to be reincarnated. I quite hope that Lao Bai can continue to maintain this pace and write the story. As long as the plot can maintain the current quality and won't collapse or end, I should continue to follow up. It would be better if there are more updates haha ​​[please update]. Come on, Lao Bai [Working on draft] I'm optimistic about you [Like]

It's not bad. It's one of the better-written full-time fanfics I've seen so far. It's just that sometimes there are too many digressions and settings, but so far it's acceptable. It would be better if the length could be reduced.

There are flaws, but it is considered to be an excellent full-time fanfic. Some parts of the original work are at a second-level level. It is closely related to the original work but tells a different story from the original work. It is recommended that if you don't like it, you can skip two chapters. It is not recommended to skip too much. The reason is that some places may be a small poisonous point for some readers. I can give an evaluation of 7 points out of 10, but because of Tomato, I can give an evaluation of 8.9 Points. It is a good work that does not hide its flaws.

Although not many people read it, I feel that the writing is still very good. However, there is still a small question. Although it is written about a single female protagonist, what is the role of Su Mucheng, who obviously has special feelings for the protagonist in the story, in this story?

This sense of substitution is really awesome. According to your thinking, what you write is your story after all, not theirs.

The content of the book is novel, and the author's settings are also great. I hope to get into the main story soon.

An excellent fanfic, a story with Fang Xuan as the protagonist instead of Ye Qiu, which I like very much. But for readers who want to read full-time fan fiction and are eager to participate in the original plot, this book is not attractive. When reading novels, of course, everyone chooses what they like. Finally, come on, my dear, it's so beautiful and I love watching it [blowing kiss]

Looks good, good luck to the author😊

My mom, this is so well written. [Crying] [Crying] Especially when I heard about it, I took it personally. The author is too detailed.

I haven't seen this kind of writing in a long time. It's very immersive and feels like I'm back in time. I felt the excitement and anticipation again when I read the novel for the first time. Come on!

It's okay, the front is too depressing

Very real and beautiful

No need to say more, just watch it

Can the system tell anyone casually?

Very good, the plot is fascinating

So touching

Wonderful, I'm short of words, I can only think of wonderful [Like]

@Cat, isn't my heroine Tang Rou? How did she become Su Wan? !

I hope the author will write another full-time master fanfic with Su Mucheng as the heroine [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] [Working on the draft]

It's really good. Just survive the previous ones.

Okay, okay, it's just a bit depressing at the beginning, but can the author update it more? I'm going to school and going to jail soon [crying]

Hold on, kid, most of Zongzong's novels are unfinished, hold on.

It's a good book and the author's ideas are quite interesting.

Apart from being very depressing, it's also good to save worry.