Become**********

It's a good book if you try not to let the main character be manipulated all the time.

This book begins with the hero transforming into a lolita in the middle of the night in a high school dormitory and being caught by a roommate. The roommate is shocked, suspicious, and accepts the change, and then cooperates with the hero to hide the news. Escape from the dormitory at night - seek a safe place in the Internet cafe - explore self-ability - change back to the original god by coincidence - Laoban captures the bag on the spot, the beginning of the plot is reasonable and clever. Later, using the class beauty as a guide, he revealed another side of the world. This gradually leads to a world view. Intense refreshing feeling.

Come on, author, my book review may be a bit extreme. It's just your first book. I give it five stars. I hope the author can absorb more opinions. Some plots are indeed not connected well. Come on!

Potential stocks, optimistic about the author [shy][shy][shy] The protagonist is really... Horribly naive [face covering] [face covering] It feels like being cheated by others, but still counting money for others

I read the first 30 chapters of this book patiently, but the later chapters are actually okay. The main reason is that the first 30 chapters are a bit nonsense and the author has never pushed the main line (the new author has not learned how to push it), but it starts to get better after that, and the overall quality is on the rise. Let's talk about the problems that make readers feel frustrated. They mainly focus on the first 30 chapters. After being tortured by readers, the author made a lot of changes, and it is not as vicious as before (although it is still a little bit, I feel it is no longer a big problem). Looking at the overall growth time of the protagonist, counting the time from Chapter 1 to Chapter 30 when the protagonist awakens his abilities, it has only been two or three days, not even a week. I think it is reasonable and acceptable that he will not make full use of his abilities. There is also the issue of transformation time. The biggest poisonous point of this book for some readers is that the protagonist can change back to a boy after turning into a little lolita. I didn't feel it was poisonous. It is a special "transformation" method in the transformation novel, but! In the first 30 chapters, the author devoted most of the text to the protagonist's male body! In fact, you can ignore the "Becoming a Little Loli" part of the title! In the final analysis, the author is not skilled enough in writing and does not know how to distribute the plot. After being tortured by readers later, the author also listened to their opinions. After chapter 30, most of the protagonists are in the form of little lolita. Let's talk about the depth of the novel's worldview. From the 30th chapter onwards, you can feel that the author is doing something "big" and is starting to seriously lay the groundwork for the main plot (it was finally tortured out). This book can be written for a long time at present. The 40 chapters are probably just the tip of the iceberg of the book (if the author doesn't finish it). The author is making progress very quickly and is actively reading comments and taking suggestions (it's better to be young). I still have a question, why do I feel like a lot of people have read this book, but there aren't many reviews [what]

It feels pretty good-looking @PIQi

It feels good to see it now

I forgot to rate it earlier, so I'll give the author a five-star rating [laughing]

Beautiful, no need to say more

Encourage new authors 🉑 There is room for improvement

The world view setting is okay, but I personally think the container for the resurrection of the gods is a very poisonous place. Let's see what happens later. (Only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it)

This is what a transformation essay should be like

Give me 5 stars to support it, even though I haven't watched it for a long time

I feel like the previous chapters and the new chapter are a little inconsistent with the title, but it's still good, love it [blowing kiss]