HP the Dark Duke and His Secret Lover

It's very interesting. The plot needs to be developed and connected very naturally. The writing style that describes the emotional line between Tom and the brave is super good. At first, Tom may want to use this powerful unknown wizard to realize his wish, but when faced with an almost perfect person, he helps himself with a completely see-through but acquiesced and even tolerant attitude. He takes the powerful magic book at will, teaches fighting, etc., Trains his body, and does not forget to care about his body. He will ask Tom to remember to eat and take care of himself. For a boy who had never been cared for in the orphanage as a child, and whose last face with his mother was the back of him after she abandoned him, he had been treated differently by the white wizard after entering the academy. He was distrustful, distrustful, and suspicious, which erected high walls in his heart. But now it seems like someone is hacking at the wall on the other side, and after finishing the hacking, they say good night and sweet dreams [laughs]. Just like this, a path was cut abruptly. It's almost like a male mother.

The writing is very sweet, and I like Elliot's setting very much. It has a strong Japanese-Western fantasy magic style. Sometimes I often subconsciously think that he is an elf, haha. Love that goes both ways is not highly recommended if you want to read the original line. It basically has little to do with the original line, but I like it very much. The teacher described it as having a very strong OC flavor (no ky meaning). I just wanted to express that the teacher is really like a biological mother. She likes this setting with a strong OC flavor and also likes biological mothers. There are no clues at the moment. Both parties are talking loudly. There is no inexplicable misunderstanding. I like young couples to post w

I suddenly thought of it and quickly commented. To be honest, it was a poor boy with good looks and ability who fell in love with a rich and powerful Bai Fumei. Hahahahahaha, it's really good to watch. I've survived the first one, but I personally don't like the first one. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens. The book has nothing to say, just two words: beautiful😄

It's a five-star rating. There's not much to say about it. The descriptions are very detailed. Like this kind of environment, scenery, characters, and even down to the clothing. And eating. They all make people feel soft and very comfortable. The most important thing is that the young couple is so sweet! I stop every time I see it halfway through. Crazy Aunt's smile is super sweet. It is impossible to flatten the apple skin at all

Come on, author, it's really good^ω^ but a little lacking. Never stop updating. Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's well written, and I feel very comfortable reading it. I didn't say which one I was partial to, but I could tell that both the attacker and the receiver loved and pampered each other. There is no requirement for Tom to be kind, support him, understand him, or help him There is a feeling that even if Tom kills the protagonist, he will dote on him and think Tom is cute. Tom also gradually falls in love with the protagonist and is very possessive. I really like the part about the little snake Both babies need to be well o(*////▽////*)q

Very pretty But maybe my IQ is not high enough. I didn't understand how the protagonist deceived Tom in Xiao Xiu's part. Can any kind-hearted person explain it? Once I understand, I will change it to 5 stars [laughs] Thanks to the author for answering questions [love] The writing is very good, the author continues to work hard [send heart]

It's very interesting, without the bloated original content found in other HP novels, and you don't have to stay at Hogwarts from first grade to seventh grade. The writing style of the boss is very good, and he is good at describing the environment (laughs:). Because there are many descriptions of the environment, I had to read it carefully and could not 'read quickly'. The description is very good). The only drawback is that the emotional line may be a bit fast for me, but overall it is a rare article in HP, and it is very good.

Nice! I like this preference for Tom

The writing is very nice. Dear author, have you changed what you wrote? [What] [What] [What]? I remember I have read it before. The content is not the same [What] [What] [What]. It is very nice now. Please update it quickly.

I hope the author will update it soon. I really have no taste for food every day and can't sleep. It makes me feel like I have insomnia every day. If you don't update it, I feel like my life is about to collapse!

Super, super, super invincible, beautiful [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration]

It's beautiful and beautiful, I don't know how to describe it specifically (I'm shy), but it always feels sweet, and it's still a double strength (the water flows all over the place)

Lock these two to me🔒🔒🔒😍😍

It's pretty good, but I feel like the technique is too literary.

After reading so many HP novels, this is one of the few in which Voldemort's character does not have an OOC character. The author should continue writing! [Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting and can be put together with the first HP fanfic I came into contact with (I know HP from the fanfic)

Very beautifully written

I looked at it and it was okay, but the main character was a little too compliant.

Wow, wow, I can't stop my mouth.

Super awesome! Just dancing on my xp!

Good-looking [love] [love] [love] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The author, I don't want to see shit yellow buttons [crazy]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking

It's good-looking (Ascension), why do you think this novel is so good-looking (take a look) Teacher, I'm hungry, I want to eat! ! ! !

I like what the teacher wrote. I really like the part about kissing (≧∇≦)/ Teacher, please work hard, I will wait every day/(=✪ x ✪=)＼

I like the character design very much🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰The writing style is delicate and light.

It's great. I love watching it. I've read it twice [Blowing Kiss] The author will update it soon [Top post]

I really like the author's writing style, which is so sweet and reassuring.

It is rare for Jue Juezi to encounter a tolerant and loving person in a novel written by Tom Riddle. And not too OOC.

It's super beautiful. Wow, the relationship between the two male protagonists is really amazing [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]