Immortal Maiden, From the Start! Why Do I Have a Slave Mark?

It is particularly beautiful and the subject matter is novel. Although the author emphasizes that it is a male protagonist, the main point of view is that of the female protagonist, and the description of her psychological activities takes up a lot of space. The reader will inevitably take the place of the female protagonist, which is too frustrating. I don't know whether it will be a short story or a full-length story. The female protagonist has a very soft character and grows slowly, and is always hesitant. In comparison, the dark male protagonist is quite good, but she is not a good person after all. In the world of cultivation where the jungle prevails, weakness is the original sin. Although the male protagonist bullies and suppresses the female protagonist, he also saves her several times. If there wasn't a male protagonist and a female protagonist, they would have died long ago. I saw a comment that said it very well. The resistance of the heroine is melting away, and the rules of the hero are collapsing. So it's understandable that the heroine can't be cruel. In addition, it is recommended to add more plot descriptions and streamline the psychological activities of the heroine. If it is too lengthy, it will make the heroine feel hesitant and weak.

The perspective of the furnace cauldron is quite novel. Cultivation of immortals will definitely not go smoothly all the time. Occasionally, you will defeat CG.

The real-life version of cultivating immortals is quite real and cruel, but few people may watch it. Either because the protagonist is weak, or it is too dark, and many people can't watch it. But I think the real cultivating immortals is like this. Once you have power and no restraints, you will be ravaged. When can Qingqing get rid of Ye? I don't want to see Sister Qingqing controlled by others 😢

I stayed up all night to finish it. It was very good. When I read dark novels, I always wanted to read dark novels in which the male protagonist and the female protagonist (regardless of the setting) fall in love. Finally, an author has written it. The most important thing is that the heroine is not transgender, which is really great

Looks good, four stars, encouragement I want to see the heroine gradually learn everything about the hero, and then hate and love him. The hero realizes the fact that he likes the heroine after getting along with him continuously. Then lead the conflict from the inside out to resolve the conflict between the male and female protagonists, and then make love fiercely and purely (I feel like I have been adjusted at this time and I am completely addicted) [sneaky laugh]

It's good-looking, well, a girl who has lost herself and gradually fallen into decline makes me feel physically and mentally damaged. The heroine is really too helpless and aggrieved. The heroine's only comfort is her master. I think the heroine's top priority is not to leave the hero, but to find hobbies and support. The only thing that makes people feel a little bit happy is the male protagonist's vague love? It's like an old man fishing without bait, but the fish trapped in the secular world are willing to take the bait. On the one hand, it is an illusory happiness trap, and on the other hand, it is a joy in suffering from the painful reality. Alas, alas, alas, alas, alas, so annoying 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [punches] [punches] [punches] [punches] [punches] [punches]

The subject matter is the perspective of defeat. I think the protagonist is well portrayed. He can't beat the male lead but he doesn't give up and wants to fight back. There is also a full plot and interesting gameplay. The subject matter is niche, but I really love watching it. I stayed up all night to watch the latest chapter. It was so exciting.

It's really a male perspective of cultivating immortals, a real and dark world of cultivating people, all fighting for their own interests. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not good or even abnormal at first, but in the end, the male protagonist, such a selfish and dark person, will change for the female protagonist. The female protagonist also gradually integrates into the world under the push of the male protagonist. The female protagonist was like that in the beginning. Her naive thoughts and fragile psychology are reshaped and forced to integrate under repeated blows. The male protagonist is her abyss and her salvation. She has to recognize the reality that there is no justice in this dark world. Weakness is the original sin. Being weak means being bullied and bullied. The male protagonist is a demon who plunders resources, but there is no difference between a well-known and decent family.

I suddenly felt like laughing [covering my face]. The male protagonist protects me from the wind and rain, but don't ask how the wind and rain came about. It's okay so far. Let's read the new book.

It's beautiful. The heroine should get out of control quickly. I feel so distressed.