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It is particularly beautiful and the subject matter is novel. Although the author emphasizes that it is a male protagonist, the main point of view is that of the female protagonist, and the description of her psychological activities takes up a lot of space. The reader will inevitably take the place of the female protagonist, which is too frustrating. I don't know whether it will be a short story or a full-length story. The female protagonist has a very soft character and grows slowly, and is always hesitant. In comparison, the dark male protagonist is quite good, but she is not a good person after all. In the world of cultivation where the jungle prevails, weakness is the original sin. Although the male protagonist bullies and suppresses the female protagonist, he also saves her several times. If there wasn't a male protagonist and a female protagonist, they would have died long ago. I saw a comment that said it very well. The resistance of the heroine is melting away, and the rules of the hero are collapsing. So it's understandable that the heroine can't be cruel. In addition, it is recommended to add more plot descriptions and streamline the psychological activities of the heroine. If it is too lengthy, it will make the heroine feel hesitant and weak.

The perspective of the furnace cauldron is quite novel. Cultivation of immortals will definitely not go smoothly all the time. Occasionally, you will defeat CG.

The real-life version of cultivating immortals is quite real and cruel, but few people may watch it. Either because the protagonist is weak, or it is too dark, and many people can't watch it. But I think the real cultivating immortals is like this. Once you have power and no restraints, you will be ravaged. When can Qingqing get rid of Ye? I don't want to see Sister Qingqing controlled by others [crying]

I stayed up all night to finish it. It was very good. When I read dark novels, I always wanted to read dark novels in which the male protagonist and the female protagonist (regardless of the setting) fall in love. Finally, an author has written it. The most important thing is that the heroine is not transgender, which is really great

Looks good, four stars, encouragement I want to see the heroine gradually learn everything about the hero, and then hate and love him. The hero realizes the fact that he likes the heroine after getting along with him continuously. Then lead the conflict from the inside out to resolve the conflict between the male and female protagonists, and then make love fiercely and purely (I feel like I have been adjusted at this time and I am completely addicted) [sneaky laugh]

It's good-looking, well, a girl who has lost herself and gradually fallen into decline makes me feel physically and mentally damaged. The heroine is really too helpless and aggrieved. The heroine's only comfort is her master. I think the heroine's top priority is not to leave the hero, but to find hobbies and support. The only thing that makes people feel a little bit happy is the male protagonist's vague love? It's like an old man fishing without bait, but the fish trapped in the secular world are willing to take the bait. On the one hand, it is an illusory happiness trap, and on the other hand, it is a joy in suffering from the painful reality. Alas, alas, alas, alas, alas, so annoying [grieved] [grieved] [grieved] [grieved] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [punches] [punches] [punches] [punches] [punches] [punches]

The subject matter is the perspective of defeat. I think the protagonist is well portrayed. He can't beat the male lead but he doesn't give up and wants to fight back. There is also a full plot and interesting gameplay. The subject matter is niche, but I really love watching it. I stayed up all night to watch the latest chapter. It was so exciting.

I suddenly felt like laughing [covering my face]. The male protagonist protects me from the wind and rain, but don't ask how the wind and rain came about. It's okay so far. Let's read the new book.

It's really a male perspective of cultivating immortals, a real and dark world of cultivating people, all fighting for their own interests. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not good or even abnormal at first, but in the end, the male protagonist, such a selfish and dark person, will change for the female protagonist. The female protagonist also gradually integrates into the world under the push of the male protagonist. The female protagonist was like that in the beginning. Her naive thoughts and fragile psychology are reshaped and forced to integrate under repeated blows. The male protagonist is her abyss and her salvation. She has to recognize the reality that there is no justice in this dark world. Weakness is the original sin. Being weak means being bullied and bullied. The male protagonist is a demon who plunders resources, but there is no difference between a well-known and decent family.

It's beautiful. The heroine should get out of control quickly. I feel so distressed.

Full marks. I'm tired of reading traditional books. The perspective of this book is very novel. I recommend it.

Let's talk about it, it's really interesting. I don't know if the rating is so low. Is it just because I am that small part of the audience? Bringing in the male protagonist is pure joy, but I prefer to bring in the female protagonist and savor the awkward emotions. The key elements include lowering the upper, forcing love, and adjusting the focus. To be honest, I don't believe this book can be finished alive. I'm ready for both the ending of being removed from the shelves and the ending of the update. I hope I live longer. This kind of subject matter is indeed uncommon, and it's quite nice [Blowing Kiss]

I can only say that this novel is very novel and quite good. This kind of love from a perspective is actually quite beautiful. It's just that the fun part was deleted, and then the remaining plots will seem a bit sadistic. The things that can't be written should be the more fun plots that support this article. What a shame. This kind of master and servant is still a bit too advanced. Personally, I still think it is a bit sadistic. It is much better to bring the male protagonist's perspective, but the description of the female protagonist's mood is a bit too much, which makes it feel a bit sad.

Very attractive subject matter. The plot is also pretty good. The author should try harder. I also want to see the back part.

Enough of the side attitude, a must-see for nuclear friends

I like the male protagonist's character very much, and I also like the female protagonist's character very much. I personally feel that the male protagonist and the female protagonist began to like each other in Chapter 70 through their daily interactions and habits, but they both failed to recognize their own hearts because of their own experiences. [Shy][Shy][Shy][Smirking][Smirking][Smirking][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Adore][Adore][Adoration][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I hope the author can continue to work hard and write.

It looks great, good luck to the author, the writing is super good! ! Maybe this book won't suit most people's tastes, but for omnivores, it's a treat! I personally don't like male protagonists who say they love the heroine but treat her too much, and the only people with vested interests are the male protagonists. This male protagonist is so bad that he has a hint of truth mixed in with his pretense. It's a fairy tale! !

It's so cool to bring in a male protagonist. It's so cool to bring in a female protagonist. I skipped the plot with the puppy. Putting aside the appearance of cruelty, it is actually so sweet that it makes you sick. The collision between the world of naked cannibalism and modern people's thinking, a glass of wine in the dead of night.

Give it four stars. It is indeed an unprecedented defeat of CG, and it also opened my eyes. It is still in the early stages of the plot, and it is indeed a bit sad, so I can't get into it. But if this is what you like, you can click in and take a look.

It's very masculine, the taste is very positive, and it's very male. It's very comfortable to be the male protagonist, but it's really miserable to be the female protagonist. But then again, if it's a cruel immortal world background (similar environment) like the story of mortals cultivating immortals, the female protagonist is actually pretty good. At least the male protagonist didn't kill her to get the elixir, and he spent all his time to refine it. It's important to be with the right person, but he keeps calling me master, which seems very uncomfortable to me. Maybe I'm still too conservative [full]

It's actually pretty good-looking, the setting is very novel, and the theme probably revolves around "survival actions are neither noble nor low, and there is no shame." But the heroine has an inexplicable sense of fragmentation. Sometimes she seems sober and smart, and sometimes she is a bit inexplicable (I understand it is to promote the plot, but it is for the plot rather than to incorporate the heroine's behavior, which is very senseless and boring) I know she suffered a lot. I just hope that the final outcome won't be about getting the male protagonist's love. She must get something in a real sense. As the plot progresses to this point, I still don't feel that the heroine has made any special progress in her character... It's really touching. In fact, the heroine was coerced by the hero to reach this point. In the dark reality background, she can no longer look back, nor can she go back to the kind and beautiful person she once was. She can't be a good person, and she can't be a bad person. She can also be the gray one. Isn't it good to just do what she wants to do? In fact, she has nowhere to go. Of course, the author's destination is her master, but I think that master is really abrupt. Against the background of dark reality, a master who wholeheartedly cares for his apprentice appears, without even noticing that the apprentice has changed his mind. I feel that this character is forcibly created for the plot, in order to give the heroine an anchor of kindness. Maybe the final solution is for the male and female protagonists to save the world together. That's not impossible, but I hope it's not because of conscience or justice. Maybe it's just that these two bad guys think this is very interesting, and they will shock the jaws of the Zhengdao people, and then they do it.

Haha, this is not a story about strong women. The male protagonist is a particularly bad one. He was extremely serious at first. He wanted to be a demon and not a woman. Later, the female protagonist became a demon cultivator. He kept bullying the female protagonist. The female protagonist couldn't resist. The male protagonist is too bad. I am a local dog and I like to watch it. Haha, it is better than the ordinary rape and robbery.

It's good-looking, and the journey of cultivating immortality unfolds from the female protagonist's perspective. Of course, I'm not a novelist, so it's understandable that the female protagonist is weak, but I don't believe that the female protagonist will always be weak. Since the female protagonist is from the perspective and it's a male channel (the author made it clear), then the female protagonist must Suga can only be the strongest at the end, hoping that the female protagonist will get rid of the male protagonist later, and can kill him once if necessary (refer to Bai Ningbing) instead of being weak and helpless in the end. Don't have Stockelmo syndrome at the end. Even if you don't kill the male protagonist, at least you can't fall in love with him. Hey, the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment. I really hope to see a male heroine, instead of a female heroine who has a golden finger or is slowly trained by the male protagonist and finally falls in love with the male protagonist. Of course, it will definitely be cool if the male protagonist is replaced.

I think it's very interesting, a more realistic world of cultivating immortals. Although the heroine is a bit frustrated, she should be growing up step by step. It's a very novel perspective.

It looks good, the author should not be affected by the bad reviews, just write what you want to write I still hope that the ambiguity of the male protagonists can be removed. One-on-one is better. Readers of male videos generally cannot see other men around the heroine or in her heart.

It's beautiful. I love watching this kind of twisted emotion.

I think it's very interesting and hope to continue writing.

I stayed up all night to finish the chase. Although it was a bit sadistic in the beginning, the heroine is still very powerful in the back. God prefers the heroine, and the hero is also changing and redeeming herself. Overall, it is very good. I hope the ending can be written well and don't rush to finish it.

Very good so far, one of the best similar articles I have read

My evaluation is that it is better than most novels of this genre that I have seen, and surpasses them.