The Ultimate Path to Manifesting Cognition in the World of Senluo

The first comment is, Shennong is here. The overall combination of combat power is like a meat pigeon with an unlimited prop pool, and various talents are linked together. It can be seen that the author has enough imagination to support this theme, food and grass!

The writing is very good, but it just doesn't suit my personal reading hobby. If you can read it, it will be enough. In the early stage (about 30 chapters ago, I'm too lazy to scroll forward), although it was not very satisfying, being beaten under pressure, but later (when drawing cards to get dodge counterattacks, shield counterattacks) it was more enjoyable. The gatekeeper boss of the novice copy in three or even four stages was basically beaten under pressure. But after the novice copy, I couldn't understand it. First, there was an unexpected situation on the road, and a car of people died, but two women and one man survived. Then they were attacked, and the men were holding back, which made me unhappy. But this is also normal. You can't get angry at the fact that other novels about women usually hold back women, but this novel about men holds them back. After the attack, the man died and survived until the authorities came to the rescue. Then one of the two women who survived became even more confused. Chapter 86 original text: "Brother Yuan, your extraordinary power doesn't stop there, right? Sister, I will keep it a secret for you. When you need your help, don't ignore it?" This sentence was said by the woman. The protagonist saves this woman, but instead she threatens the protagonist and even blackmails the protagonist. Isn't it normal operation to keep it secret after you were rescued? The sentence "Sister, I will keep it a secret from you" sounds like a top-down feeling, as if the protagonist is being rescued instead of her. The last sentence made me even more angry, using confidentiality to blackmail the protagonist into helping. Even if the article said that it was a two-shot with or without dates, it still made me feel disgusted. Finally (around Chapter 90) it was time to get on the train and go home to get ready for school. Going to school is normal. I don't know much about the world, so I think it's normal to go to school to gain knowledge. But it was also a classic encounter with an unexpected incident. The person who caused this incident was a classic girl from the same class, and she was probably recognized. The reason why she said it was probably because she thought the protagonist looked like that so-and-so in the class, but without a stone hammer. This is where I see it. I mean, wasn't it exciting to fight fiercely at the beginning of this novel? Why did it change to a campus style? After writing the novice copy of Chapter 70, which is exciting to fight, there are three women in less than 20 chapters, and one woman is most likely a resident NPC. Didn't you write very well before? Why did you suddenly change your painting style? The five-star rating is not out of character, I really think what you wrote earlier is quite good. Thank you for your writing.

Saw 243 photos I can't stand it anymore, and the fun it brings doesn't arouse my desire to read at all, so I specially put down a memory anchor. So the current plot involves the protagonist participating in an official team building, an official-hosted exploration and cleanup of a haunted mansion. Due to the influence of a certain cult, the abnormal space that the area has fallen into requires multiple extraordinary beings to clean it up, and then the official will bring this area back to reality. ① Luo Li's description of the scenes is very detailed, and there are also quite a lot of descriptions of battles. Moreover, there are several chapters to count the current harvest. There is a sense of novelty and of course I will get tired of it after reading it for a long time. I personally don't like this kind of detailed fighting and such detailed descriptions. However, based on the subject matter of this article, what I play is the mechanism, the routines and various wonderful props, so it is my fault. (After all, starting from this subject, if you don't write about this, you won't have to write about it) ② There may be a female character who is suspected to be the heroine. When participating in cleaning up the ghost domain, she also performed some behaviors that I don't understand. Based on the author's description of women and the logic of the behavior, I personally don't like this feeling. The protagonist seems to be unaware of the world, but this is indeed the case. He just has high combat power. The inner drama of the female supporting character is quite rich, similar to the kind of competition between children, and seems to want to reflect the demeanor of a big family. There is a kind of person born in a big family who does not want to be surpassed by the protagonist who appears halfway, so she simply competes secretly, with a positive competitiveness. However, the protagonist seems to like teasing her a lot when seeing her reaction, which is fun. (But we are currently cleaning up the ghost domain, so it is not good to do this. Although the protagonist may have unparalleled skills and can forcefully clear the level) By the way, I want to add one thing. The author likes to develop long-term plots, the kind with dozens of chapters in one copy, including but not limited to concepts such as one copy, one event, one activity, etc. I don't like this. (My understanding at this moment is that after all, my self when I stayed up late did not understand my self when I woke up early. If we put them together, they would not be able to empathize at all, and they would even get into a fight. Who knows what I will think in the future)

Come on, author, I really enjoyed reading the early dungeon in one go. Maybe I'm catching up on it later. Cockroach's description was too detailed and made me a little impatient. But this book by the author really satisfies my hobby as a garbage farmer. Full marks to you.

There are a lot of details, allowing people to imagine the picture, but I personally think that the longer paragraphs make it more tiring for the brain. If possible, I think it could be divided into more paragraphs to give readers some buffering time. You can read it this way, but personally I only want to read one or two chapters in a day, and if you are very tired, you may not want to click in.

Apart from various minor descriptive errors in the early stages, it is a pretty good work (currently at Chapter 110). I thought the description of the miko I met halfway would be unpleasant, but it turned out to be no problem. The subsequent prop descriptions and some incorrect sentences have been revised well.

Haha, I dug a hole for myself, and I hope it can bring a little fun to my reading friends. This can be considered a kind of happiness. Friends who like it, if you have any weird and special game mechanics, please send them to me so I can refer to them. The first book definitely has many shortcomings. I am very grateful to all my friends for giving me suggestions and encouragement. It is very useful and helpful. I will try my best to adopt your suggestions. Communicating with you has also greatly alleviated my loneliness. As for everyone's names, I won't report them. Basically, I will respond to likes. I will stick to it and sum up my experience. In order to create better works in the future, I won't say more. If I say more, it will be pretentious [cool]

Come on, keep writing. I'll read it when you write the next volume. After all, I think it's a good idea to put together a professional system like Pinduoduo. But if you go back and write it the other way around, it's very offensive. It's okay, I'll wait for your next volume to read. Just don't worry about losing readers.

The overall feeling is still great. Come on, the author. It just feels like the combat power has increased too quickly. It's only over 100 chapters now.

Will the protagonist come back to clear the copy of the cult stronghold later? Didn't the BOSS say that there is a restricted area below and there are many monsters on the second floor?