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The author has not made clear the gender of the heroine before time travel, so treat it as a genderless protagonist. The writing is excellent, top-notch writing, full of narrative techniques, and the background and worldview setting are all very good. But there are still some small problems with the portrayal of the heroine. First of all, a normal person who has experienced social beatings travels to a lower-class girl in a different world, a wasteland. Either death is worse than living, with absolute forbearance and rationality, or a knife is wiped on one's own neck, and the next life will be more exciting. The cowardly performance of the heroine is more like a student gang member who has never experienced big storms before time travel. She is more likely to be a mama's boy or mama's girl. She is reluctant to die but has no courage to resist. Anyway, she is lacking something. If this kind of person traveled back to the Anti-Japanese War period, he would definitely be the first to desert or become a traitor. Therefore, there are some problems with the portrayal of the heroine, but the growth of the heroine is also visible to the naked eye, which is worthy of recognition. Although it is unfinished, the writing style deserves five stars. I am looking forward to the author's new book.

It's so annoying. 16 Updates a day. Author, you are the real superman.

Very delicate writing

The writing is good, the plot is okay, but there is still room for improvement

The world view is very cool. There are not many novels about the end of the world with this kind of systemic oppression. I look forward to the author's next book.