Time Travel: I Came to Another World and Lived Desperately

Name: Time Travel: I Came to Another World and Lived Desperately
Author: Qiu Shengqiu Forgets

穿越：来到异世界的我拼命活着

by Qiu Shengqiu Forgets (秋生秋忘)

Status: Completed
Length: 180k Words
Genre: Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
Audience: Male
Updated: 1y ago
Source: Fanqie

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Synopsis

Transformation][Time Travel][Apocalypse][Abuse Lord][Superpower][Overhead] As a time traveler, Xia Xiaobai came to this different world and belonged to an ordinary civilian in District D4. The mother was very surprised by her arrival - she had a daughter. Her brother also loved her very much. But her father ignored her, thinking that her arrival would only increase the burden on the family. When his brother was 6 years old, he awakened a super power, but Xia Xiaobai did not have it when he was 6 years old. The father took advantage of his eldest son to drive Xia Xiaobai out of the house while he was going to college. Although the family members strongly opposed it, it was of no use. This family is a patriarchal family, and all income comes from him. Xia Xiaobai was only 6 and a half years old at the time. But fortunately, her mother would secretly bring her some food and secretly give her something to use, so she did not starve to death outside and lived to be 8 years old. During this period, my father didn't know what happened and became addicted to alcohol. He would beat Xia Xiaobai whenever he saw him. Xia Xiaobai had no choice but to find food elsewhere. But still, my mother and brother have not given up on themselves. … Everything happened when Xia Xiaobai was 14 years old. When I accidentally went home to take some food left by my mother, Everything has changed... Father has changed for the better? Stop beating her? Mother cried? Brother is missing? Do you have something to eat? … [The introduction is weak, let's get into the text]

Reader comments

The author has not made clear the gender of the heroine before time travel, so treat it as a genderless protagonist. The writing is excellent, top-notch writing, full of narrative techniques, and the background and worldview setting are all very good. But there are still some small problems with the portrayal of the heroine. First of all, a normal person who has experienced social beatings travels to a lower-class girl in a different world, a wasteland. Either death is worse than living, with absolute forbearance and rationality, or a knife is wiped on one's own neck, and the next life will be more exciting. The cowardly performance of the heroine is more like a student gang member who has never experienced big storms before time travel. She is more likely to be a mama's boy or mama's girl. She is reluctant to die but has no courage to resist. Anyway, she is lacking something. If this kind of person traveled back to the Anti-Japanese War period, he would definitely be the first to desert or become a traitor. Therefore, there are some problems with the portrayal of the heroine, but the growth of the heroine is also visible to the naked eye, which is worthy of recognition. Although it is unfinished, the writing style deserves five stars. I am looking forward to the author's new book.
8 likes8mo ago
It's so annoying. 16 Updates a day. Author, you are the real superman.
3 likes1y ago
Very delicate writing
1 like1y ago
The writing is good, the plot is okay, but there is still room for improvement
1 like8mo ago
The world view is very cool. There are not many novels about the end of the world with this kind of systemic oppression. I look forward to the author's next book.
1 like1y ago